中考作文必背

2024-05-08

中考作文必背（精选5篇）

篇1：中考作文必背

《2017中考必背的15篇中考英语作文》

第一篇：

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现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

内容包括：

1。地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。

2。你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。

3。号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。

作文要求：

1。不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2。语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。

My Low--carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。

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My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。Many trees are cut down，and water and air are polluted。As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution。

Firstly，I often walk to school。It can reduce air pollution。Secondly，I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom。Thirdly，I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water。

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful。第二篇：

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每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。

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Friends

What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others。I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble。Don‟t forget the saying，“A friend in need is a friend indeed。” Friends can tell you your mistakes，though what they say is hard for you to listen to。You can share your happiness，trouble and worry with friends。Someone also says，“You can‟t walk any step without a friend。” So I think friends are very important to us。I would like to make as many friends as possible。第三篇：

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最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。

原因

赞成帮助他人是美德;

帮助他人就是帮助自己;

反对

怕陷入麻烦;

怕被误解;

你的观点?(至少两点)

要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯;

2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥;

3)词数：100左右(征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数);

4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

参考词汇：美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。

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Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。

Some think we should try to help strangers。Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others„ help some day.If everyone isn‟t willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it„s hard to imagine what our world will be like。

However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness。

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love。第四篇：

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某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：

1、尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松;

2、我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”;

3、也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间;

4、任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。

5、有问题时，我们…

要求：

1、内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯;

2、词数90个左右;

3、第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。

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How to Deal with Our Study Problems

Although we often feel stressed，we should find suitable ways to deal with stress。

We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed。We should be careful enough，because “a miss is as good as a mile”。We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies。Try to plan your spare time well。Don‟t lose heart at any time。You will make great progress through hard work。

When having problems，we can ask people around us for help。It‟s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves。第五篇：

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学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：

1。对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁;

2。她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们;

3。作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时

间都奉献给了工作;

4。所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。

5。我希望 ……

要求：1。内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯;

2。词数90个左右;

3。第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。

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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

My mother is the person who has influenced me most。

She is in her forties。She always listens to my problems patiently。And she advises me how to solve them。As a doctor，she often says she can‟t be too careful。She often works extra hours。She has devoted most of her time to her work。So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor。

I hope I can be a person like her。I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health。She‟d better have more time to relax herself。第六篇：

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假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：

1、目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2、10月23日，星期六

3、路径：学校—市中心

4、简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。

5、感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为…

注意：

1、报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯;

2、第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥;

3、词数80个左右。

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Walk for children in poor areas

Not long ago，our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas。

It was on Saturday，23 rd October。We walked from the school to the centre of the city。Before the walk，we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well。It was a hard(tough)work。But during the walk，we supported and helped each other。With the help of many people，we raised over(more than)50，000 yuan in the end。

We all felt tired，but we were very happy。Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit。第七篇：

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“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧!其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。

注意：

1。表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范;

2。短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：draw，both sides of paper，plastics，water tap，collect，waste，can，sort

How to Be a Greener Person?

It‟s our duty to protect our environment around us。

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How to be a greener person

It‟s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us。

When we go to school，we should ride a bike or take a bus。When we go out for activities，we shouldn‟t step on the grass。We can‟t draw everywhere。When we go shopping，we‟d better use a cloth bag。At home we can save water and electricity。When we leave a room，we should turn off the ligts。At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things，such as bottles，cans and plastic bags。We shoudn‟t listen to pop music or spit in pulic。

Let‟s do something to protect our environment。第八篇：

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“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……

一。Dr Norman Bethune

1.Natlonality(国籍)： Canada

2.Hobby： taking photos

3.Main stories： saved a lot of Chinese people;opened hospitals;invented medical tools

二。Liu Xiang

1.Nationality： China

2.Hobby： singing

3.Main stories： won the first

4.Olympic gold medal in the men„ s 110m hurdles event in Athens;set a world record in the same event in Lausanne

从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。

要求：①包含所选信息卡上的内容;②适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等;③不能出现表明你身份的信息;④词数80左右，不含已给出部分。

The Hero in My Heart

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The Hero in My Heart

As we know，most people have heroes in their hearts。For me，Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart。He was a great doctor from Canada。

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations。And taking photos was his hobby。In 1938，he came to China。He opened hospitals and invented medical tools。He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people。He didn‟t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died。

I am deeply moved by his stories。So I‟ll work hard today and do my best to help others。第九篇： [写作要求]

请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题，根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文，注意适当表达自己的看法。

1。Who is the writer of the great book?

2。What is the main idea of the book?

3。Who are the important characters?

4。What‟s the theme of the story?

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My Favourite Great Book

My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain。

Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy。He lives with his aunt Polly。His aunt is strict with him，so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends，Huck and Joe。With Huck，he goes looking for treasure;with Becky，he gets lost in a cave。And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold。Tom is the hero of the story，but there are other important characters。Becky is pretty with fair hair。Huck is Tom‟s best friend，and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story。

The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious。第十篇：

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某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动：

1。父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题;

2。你对这些问题的看法;

3。你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion，I have too many rules at home。My parents never allow me to go out

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How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion，I have too many rules at home。My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night。They don‟t allow me to choose my own clothes，either。And they pay too much attention to my exam results。I think my parents don‟t quite understand me。

However，I try my best to understand them。Although they don‟t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure，I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future。In order to keep a good relationship with my parents，I study hard，listen to them，talk to them as friends，tell them my troubles，and help them do more housework。第十一篇：

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Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club，从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。

In the past

Now

Personalities

shy，quiet，get nervous easily

brave，outgoing…

Hobbies

reading

reading，singing…

Abilities

good at dancing，singing…

要求：

1、覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节;2、80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly。

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Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly。

Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl。She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers。She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time。However，she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club。Now，Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn‟t afraid of speaking out in public anymore。What‟s more，she has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing。She is good at them as well。

People sure change all the time，right? What we should do is to learn from Mary。Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves。第十二篇：

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以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活，并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，表达正确。

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My Weekend Housework

On last Saturday morning I got up at about seven o‟clock。After breakfast，I went to the store and bought some food for the family。I like doing the shopping。I think it‟s fun。Then I swept the floor。I didn‟t do the laundry and the dishes。I don‟t like do any washing。In the afternoon I cleaned the yard。After that I folded my clothes and made my bed。第十三篇：

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实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。

注意：1。词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好，不计入总词数;

2。短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

3。短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。

Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon，everyone!

Today I‟d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you。

Thank you for your listening!

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Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon，everyone!

Today I‟d like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you。

Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people。

Parents should listen to their children，so they will understand them better and trust each other。Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships。Students should listen to their classmates，then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other。

We‟d better be patient while listening。Don‟t forget to keep silent while listening。In a word，good listening can really make us get closer to each other。

Thank you for your listening!第十四篇： [写作要求]

为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

1。慎重交友 2。遇险报警 3。安全饮食 4。其他(1-2点)

注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥

2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范;

3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：be careful，on line，danger，call。。for，go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind。But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions。

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How to keep safe?

As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind。But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions。

First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially on line。Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe。Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely。Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health。Last but not least，summer is coming，and we must remember it„s dangerous to swim in the river。

In short，safety must come first!

篇2：中考作文必背

一、健康问题（热点）

1. 健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。How tokeep healthy /fit?

All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。（1）保持健康的重要性（2）保持健康的方法（3）保持健康的结论9(4) 你的看法? How to keep healthy /fit?

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy/fit. As a middle shool student. first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games , running, swimming and jumping ropes(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don’t eat too much meat or suger ,but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you

mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

二、关于环境保护问题（热点）

环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。

1 、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重??。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：(1)、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;(2)、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1—3方面进行说明，字数80左右。As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go

shopping ,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

2、保护环境

从6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。内容包含：

(1).在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； (2).尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； (3).离开教室应关灯；(4).最好走路或骑自行车上学；(5).简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等.

参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy

污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

our environment is becoming worse and worse , what can we do for the environment? I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the

classrooms in order to save energy. What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

3.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it；2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines；3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down；4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources 参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.

Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.

Save electricity. It is crucial. We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.

Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.

Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper, bottles, and so on.

We can save resources in this way. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

三、语言学习（热点）

这是中考中的老话题，近几年常考，形式多样。

例文：请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示： When did you start learning English? (in ? /?years ago)

How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day?)

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar?)

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs?)

参考作文：

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helpful. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

2、（四川资阳）假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。

参考作文：

Dear Linda，

I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.

Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up whenever you meet with difficulties. I’m sure you will succeed through your hard work.

Best wishes and look forward to meeting you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

四、志愿者工作

（福建莆田）假如你是李华，你从报纸上看到2008北京奥运会志愿者的招聘广告。请你用英文写封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况（见下表）表示愿意为奥运

左右。比赛contest

Sir/Madam,

I read your ad. in the newspaper yesterday. I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics. My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen. I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English. I am proud that I won the first prize in our city’s English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I’m healthy and strong.

If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well. Please reply to me soon. My telephone number is 0594—1356666.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

五、初中生活的回顾

1、回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习，生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业回顾评价)

I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.

2、初中阶段的学习即将结束，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感激之情。请用英语给父母或老师写一封80词左右的信表示感谢。范文（1）

Dear parents,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset,you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help,I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours,

篇3：中考作文必背

(一) 在中考试卷中所占分数比重最大

众所周知, 一张总分为120 分的英语中考试卷的分值分布主要为1 分、1.5 分、2 分, 只有最后一道书面表达题为15 分。可见书面表达题的重要性不言而喻。

(二) 写作能力是对考生综合语言运用能力的全面考查

《英语课程标准》 (2011 版) 提出, 综合语言运用能力的形成建立在语言技能、语言知识、情感态度、学习策略和文化意识等方面整体发展的基础上 (教育部2012) 。以2015 年中考作文为例:作文的主题是“做文明中考生”, 体现了我国的国情及现在的热点话题, 即社会主义核心价值观———文明。这篇作文对考生的语言知识、语言技能、情感态度、文化意识、价值观等都进行了考查, 也就是说, 考生要想得高分, 光靠智商高是不行的, 还要有较高的情商和较强的生活观察能力。

二、一篇好作文的标准

(一) 要点够、字全, 表达丰富

中考作文要想达到一档的水平, 首先要做到要点够、字全。书面表达题通常要求字数至少50 个词, 要点要齐全, 也就是说, 考生必须先达到这两个要求, 才具备冲击高分段的条件。同时, 在写作过程中要想把要点表达清楚, 一般情况下作文至少要达到80 个词。在此基础上, 围绕要点进行内容上的适当扩展, 使用多种语法结构和丰富的表达形式, 并做到语言通顺、语义连贯, 这样的作文通常就可以达到一档。以2015 年中考试题为例 (如图所示) :假如你叫李华, 你们的学校为了配合北京申办冬奥会, 倡导人人都做文明中考生。请你根据以下提示, 给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件, 告诉他:你认为成为一名文明中考生什么是重要的, 你通常是怎么做的以及你的感受。提示词语:think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy。

这篇作文有三个要点:作为一名文明中考生什么是重要的, 通常是怎么做的以及感受是怎么样的。明确了这三个要点, 考生就可以开门见山地着手进行写作了。第二个要点最适合围绕提示词进行适当的扩展, 详细地描述自己平时是怎么做的。例如:I say hello to my teachers and classmates. I smile to everyone I talk to. When my parents or teachers give me something, I always pick it up with two hands. 这句话不但是对第二个要点的详细展开, 还使用了定语从句、时间状语从句和say hello to, pick up等常用短语, 这种多样化的语法结构和丰富的表达方式, 使语言表达更流畅、语义更连贯。

(二) 逻辑性强, 环环相扣

作文的句子之间是有逻辑关系的, 考生应该尽可能地通过使用连词来体现它们之间的逻辑关系, 例如:because, since, as, although, when, after, until等。以上文中2015 年北京中考书面表达题为例:如果第一个要点写文明中考生对别人有礼貌是最重要的, 那么第二个要点就要写出有礼貌的具体做法而不能顾左右而言他;同理, 第三个要点就要写关于对别人有礼貌这件事的感受。如此一来, 才能保证作文内容互相联系, 环环相扣, 紧凑而不散乱。

(三) 立意深刻, 传播正能量

仍以2015 年北京中考书面表达题为例, 笔者认为如果仅仅将这三个要点一句话带过, 那么只能说这篇作文没有丢点, 但是并没有使作文的内容得以升华, 无法深刻地体现出社会主义核心价值观。因此, 考生就可以在结尾写出“:我认为如果我们每个人都这么做, 都对别人礼貌相待, 那么我们的世界会更美好!”这样充满正能量的句子一定会为自己的作文加分的。

(四) 书写规范, 布局完美

现在的中考阅卷采用网上阅卷, 要求考生用黑色碳素笔作答, 如果试卷书写整齐规范, 一点一段, 就会让阅卷教师有眼前一亮的感觉, 这对卷面分的提高有很大的帮助。

三、初三阶段写作的训练方法

(一) 强化单词、短语、句型的记忆和应用

以上文的书面表达题为例, 笔者对第一要点和第二要点进行了描述:I think it’s the most important to be polite to others. I say hello to my teachers and classmates. I smile to everyone I talk to. When my parents or teachers give me something, I always pick it up with two hands.这段文字使用了初中阶段所学的宾从、状从、定从和be polite to sb., say hello to sb., smile to sb., give sb. sth.等句型, 真正地体现了英语学科的工具性。

(二) 积累好词好句

要求考生将好词好句分门别类地记录下来, 例如:

1. 珍惜时光的句子:

Time is money. (一寸光阴一寸金。)

2. 知识重要性的句子:

Knowledge is power. (知识就是力量。)

A little knowledge is a dangerous thing. (浅学误人。)

(三) 修改润色, 力求完美

《课标》的《话题项目表》提出了24 个话题, 教师可以依据实际情况进行整合, 整理出适合写作的话题 (家庭、环境、卫生与健康、语言学习等) , 与教材、社会热点相结合, 有针对性地认真训练, 反复修改, 并帮助考生进行理解性记忆, 使之转化为考生自己的写作素材。

(四) 采用“学习迁移”策略练习写作

“学习迁移”即一种学习对另一种学习的影响, 它广泛地存在于知识、技能、态度和行为规范的学习中。任何一种学习都会受到学习者已有知识经验、技能、态度等的影响。只要有学习, 就会有迁移。迁移是学习的继续和巩固, 又是提高和深化学习的条件, 学习与迁移是不可分割的。考生要在写作中主动地使用正迁移 (即一种学习对另一种学习起到积极的促进作用) 和顺向迁移 (先前的学习对后来学习的影响) (曹宝龙2009) 。

(五) 反复训练应试技巧

写作文前要做到:第一定要点, 第二定人称, 第三定时态, 第四定布局。

写作文时要做到:细心审题, 细读题目中每一项提示;明确要点, 做到心中有数, 避免随心所欲, 文不对题。确定写作要点, 围绕这些要点使文章丰富起来, 串句成篇, 将写好的句子连贯地组织起来, 注意上下句的逻辑关系, 适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语, 使文章浑然一体, 层次分明, 过渡自然。

写完作文后要做到:默读1~2 遍, 检查人称、拼写、习惯用语, 修改语病。力争点够、字全、表达丰富。

总之, 教师科学有效地指导, 考生脚踏实地训练, 初三考生一定会在书面表达题上取得满意成绩。

摘要：在新课改背景下, 教师指导初三考生进行写作训练要做到从自身实际出发, 第一, 认清写作在初三阶段的重要性;第二, 了解一篇好的作文标准;第三, 使用科学有效的方法对写作能力进行训练。只有这样, 初三考生才能在中考写作中取得满意的成绩。

关键词：重要性,标准,训练方法

参考文献

曹宝龙.2009.学习与迁移[M].杭州:浙江大学出版社.

篇4：中考英语必背作文