广东高考英语作文指导

2022-11-20

第一篇：广东高考英语作文指导

广东省高考英语作文

写作(共两节,满分40分)

第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

假设你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国，你们准备为她举办欢送会。请根据以下内容，给她写一封e-mail：

【写作内容】

1.祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲;

2.感谢她帮助你们学习英语;

3.邀请她参加欢送会，并告知欢送会相关事宜。

1)时间：星期六晚六点;

2)地点：阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;

3)路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。

*参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容;e-mail的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。

【评分标准】

句子结构的准确性和复杂度;信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams.____________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams. The last exam was the English linguistics. Many of my classmates would cheat in exams. I hadn’t done it before. For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me. When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam. I was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper. Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts.

At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30–point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics form was just hidden in my pocket. I first finished other questions. To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket. I felt so conflicted. I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand. However, I hadn’t opened the left hand to look at the form till the exam was over. I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam. Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points. But now I feel good for my failed cheating.

[写作内容]

1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;

2.然后以约120个词对学生考试作弊现象进行议论，内容包括：

(1)学生考试作弊的原因;

(2)你对考试作弊的看法;

(3)你认为学校怎样才能杜绝考试作弊现象。

[写作要求]

1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

基础写作(共1小题，每小题15分) Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.

It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening. We sincerely hope you will come and I’m sure we will have a good time together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

读写任务(共1小题，每小题25分)

Being afraid of failing an English exam and influenced by her classmates, the author decided to cheat. She hid some paper in her pocket but gave up cheating finally, which made her feel good.

Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among some students. There are various reasons for this. Some students are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.

However, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ habit of study. Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard. Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is no more necessary.

In order to get rid of the bad effects, the school authority should take effective measures to help the students know how important honesty is. Meanwhile, a strict discipline for exams should be carried out. Whoever cheats should be severely punished.

第二篇：2009年广东高考英语满分作文

Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can‘t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.

When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.

If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.

However， I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文

游客应该给动物拍照吗?

考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。

当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。

如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了!我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。

第三篇：广东省高考英语作文评分标准

小作文的批改是看：

1、有没有把题目所提供的信息点都写齐

2、是否按照所规定的用5个句子完成

3、语法的错误

小作文的批改显然不是看关键句的

大作文的批改是看：

1、内容要点的概括(这里就要看关键句子了，踩中点子和语法没有什么问题才得分。在内容概括中，我建议你不要超过40字，40字以上也许会扣分)

2、考生所写的内容和所举的例子是否切题)

3、语法是否出现错误

4、是否有闪光点(就是写得特别出众的句子)

你平时的作文大概写多少行字，在高考上面按照平时的习惯写就可以，不用去数字数，一来浪费时间，二来没有这个必要。只要不是通过老师的目测就知道你超出字数的情况下，是不会扣分的

老师批改作文的速度虽快，但并不等于他只看关键句。如果你抱着这种想法去写作文的话，是不可取的。毕竟这是作文，而不是主观题，老师不可能在批改作文的时候像按照批改综合科主观题那样，只看关键词然后按点给分。

第四篇：2009年广东高考英语读写任务满分作文

(1)

Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can’t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is thinking to make the tourists’ behavior illegal to protect theanimals.

When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some contrast with taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.

If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when peoplekeep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I won’tfeel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.

However, I don’t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourist pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife park can set some special time, during this time, tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animas.

(2)

Give Animals Freedom

The koalas had to be awoken as the tourists wanted to take photos with them, though the koalas felt sleepy or fell asleep. This could be an annoying thing, so the Aussie government took some measures to ban such practice.

People like to take photos with animals when visiting the zoos. I really canunderstand the visitors because everyone has curiosity about the animals, maybe

for humans’ failure of reaching animals or just for the animals’ cuteness. However, I don’t admire what the visitors had done. Animals in the zoos originally belong to the amazing nature world, on no account should they be trapped in cages or only be offered such limited zones. If I were those animals, I might get extremely furious as I was being awoken every time when trying to have a sound sleep. I might not bear being disturbed by others whenever I was attempting to get a good rest.

Since animals are humans’ good friend on the earth, we human beings should be in their shoes to think for them and respect their freedom. In my opinion, Idon’t think it is a right thing to allow visitors take pictures with animals. Animals need their space, freedom and what’s more, they totally have the right of resting as they are members of the earth. Why not respect animals? Give animals enough freedom and do not try to take photos with them all the time, but rather try to comfort tem with soft touching if being allowed!

(3)

The author takes Jackie as an example to tell us that koalas don’t like to be awoken because tourists want to hug and make photos with koalas. Besides, the native government tries to make the pratice illegal.

Naturally, people love to make photos with animals. On the one hand, they’d like to use the photos as something that reminds them of the travel. It can be understood that everyone wants to remember the happy moments. On the other hand, some people are crazy about lovely animals, such as deer, sheep and so on. As a result, they can’t help hugging with the animals and taking photos with them.

However, if I were those animals, I would not feel excited when tourists do that. Maybe my first reaction is to walk round and round, which helps me to avoi

d being touched. Then I would shout at them loudly to frighten them away. At last, I could pretend to be sleeping, which is a good way to let them down.

Since I would feel annoyed if I were an animal, the real animals must be upset. So I strongly oppose to be the behavior that tourists take photos with animals. They are our friends and share the same world with us. We ought to treat them better and respect them more.

(4)

Koalas at wildlife park in Australia are annoyed because they constantly awoken from their deep sleep to be photographed by visitors so that the park can profit from this. However, the government now is acting to make this pratice illegal, which is quite understandable.

People tend to take photos with animals in order to satisfy their curiosity to have a better look at the animals. Moreover, keeping photos of interesting animals will surely leave one a beautiful memory.

If I were an animals which is being photographed, I would certainly become scared when being touched by so many strangers. What’s more, I would lose my freedom to do whatever I want and that would drive me annoyed and crazy! Finally, facing all sorts of cameras would exhaust me or even make me weaker.

I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned. For one thing, animals are lives, too and they have the rights to live in freedom and happiness. No one is to take their rights away. For another, taking photos with animals may lead to some unexpected dangers. Terrible virus carried by animals can spread to visitors and visitors may also be hurt by animals’ attacks.

All in all, taking photos with animals should be banned considering the good of both animals and visitors.