托福作文主体段的写法

第一篇：托福作文主体段的写法

高考作文重点段的写作模式

高考作文重点段的写作模式 -----拟好题，抓两头，写两段 达到的目的：拆开了看，看结构语言和材料;拆穿了看，看立意和构思。弄清弄明，依照仿写。

(一)拟好题

(一)直露法。直截了当地表达作者的思想感情或态度观点，这是常见的拟题方法。如《奥运，为您加油》、《北京您好》、《救救地球吧》、《一件悲伤的事》。再如直抒胸臆：“书啊，我离不开你”、“读书真好”、“关羽，你真糊涂”等标题，都带有强烈的感情色彩，精美醒目。

(2)比喻法。用美妙的比喻，唤起丰富的想象，引起立体式联想或情感的共鸣，从而吸引读者。如《第二起跑线》、《夕阳红》、《“老黄牛”的故事》、《生命的绿洲》、《十六岁的花季》。人生是一张答卷。诚信是金。

(3)拟人法。把原本写人的词语用于描写事物，生动、含蓄、新颖。如《迟到的友情》、《与祖国干杯》、《甜甜的教鞭》。地球的哭诉。秋叶的爱情。

(4)引用法。引人名、地名、诗名入题，别具风格。如《别了，三毛》、《江南雨》、《春蚕到丝方尽》。 ①引用诗句

99年高考“假如记忆可以移植”——《前不见古人，后不见来者》——陈子昂《登幽州台歌》，表示对移植记忆的困惑。

2000年高考“答案是丰富多采的”——《横看成岭侧成峰》——苏轼——《题西林壁》写某件发生于雨后的事件——《潇潇雨歇》——岳飞——《满江红》

②引用流行歌词

以“宽容”为话题——《一笑而过》——那英

以“素质教育”为话题——《未来的主人翁》——罗大佑

以“家庭”为话题——《我要的幸福》——孙燕姿

以“心愿”为话题——《一千零一个愿望》——Four in love

③引用影视广告等

以“诚信”为话题——《真诚到永远》(海尔电器广告语)

以“亲情”为话题——《滴滴香浓，意犹未尽》(麦氏咖啡广告语 )

拍卖“诚信” (借金融用语)/心灵的审判 (借司法用语)/诚信无价 ( 电视剧《情义无价》)/ 诚信飘流记 (小说《鲁宾逊漂流记》/人间诚信今犹在 (李煜《虞美人》“雕栏玉砌应犹在”)

//月上柳梢头/横看成林侧成峰/遥想当年/一江春水向东流/男儿当自强/你还过得好吗/我心太软。如：敢问诚信在何方/爱心良苦/今生有悔/一网情深/为了铭记的纪念/不以亲疏论英雄。

④引用名句

以“素质教育”为话题—《救救孩子》(鲁迅《狂人日记》 )

以“关注生活”为话题，写生活对人的考验—《让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧》(高尔基《海燕》)以“友谊”为话题——《百年孤独》——加西亚 马尔克斯同名小说

(5)象征法。指借具体形象的事物，表现某种精神品质或事理的手法。它能把作者的感情表达得既直观形象又含蓄隽永，引起无限联想。如《放飞鸽子》、《绿叶赞》、《雨中，那把小红伞》。

(6)呼告法。

以“书”为话题——《别了，漫画书!》。以“关注生活 ”为话题——《给生活加点苦吧!》 以“爱”为话题——爸爸，再给我一点爱。

(7)反常法。看似不合常规，不合逻辑，但别出心裁，出奇制胜，焕发新意。如《一个真实的谎言》、《泪，甜甜的》、《为了忘却的记忆》、《愤怒的贺年卡》。以“竞争”为话题——《感谢你的敌人》、《珍惜你的痛苦》、《败了，多好》 。再如：以“关注生活”为话题——《往事并不如烟》、《以胖为荣》又如：以“素质教育”为话题——《真想做个差生》、《渴望停电》

•(8)数学符号法

•以“游戏”为话题——《7+1< 8=——学习与游戏的结合

•一则新闻报道——《99+1=0》——合格产品99个，不合格产品1个，前功尽弃。(该标题也称“荒谬式拟题”)。 [其中“99”代表合格产品率，“1” 代表不合格率，文题通过这种荒谬的计算式，揭示了质量意识的重要性。]

•以“素质教育”为话题——《成绩 ≠ 素质》

(9)标点符号法

•以“关注生活”为话题——《生活——???》生活充满了新鲜，需要随时关注 。

•如“那一次我……;“答案岂能拒绝丰富!”;

•“网络：想说爱你不容易”、

•“学生上网：喜耶?忧耶?”。

•标题末尾不能用句号。

(10)制造悬念法

•悬念就是疑团，俗称之为“卖关子”，或突出尖锐的矛盾，或表明异常的结局，引起读者“为什么”、“怎么样”式的好奇。其效果就是产生一种勾魂摄魄、欲罢不能的感染力和悬念美。可以从反差上制造悬念，如《死海不死》、《不该发生的故事》、《那天，我迟到了》。

•再如《理直气不壮，做“贼”心不虚》;可以以怪生悬，如《100分，我恨你》;可以小题大做，运用错觉制造悬念，如《破不了的“案”》;可以用设问制造悬念，如《明天我们有水喝吗?》;还可以添加标点符号或采用标点符号拟题来设置悬念，如《我最需要……》、《?——!》等。

(11)增补法

•在所给话题前面或后面加上适当的词语进行增补，对写作范围加以限制，能使话题由大变小，由虚变实，由抽象变具体，这是最简捷方便的拟题方法。如以“树”为话题，可拟《树下》、《记一次植树活动》、《松树赞》、《我爱那片小树林》、《植树，生存的希望》、《小议“前人栽树，后人乘凉”》等，这些文题从各个角度缩小了写作范围，主题更明确集中，利于我们的写作从小处着眼而顺利展开，避免出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的现象，又便于把握文章的重点。(此法最为简单，但新意不够)

•其他还有：

•倒装式如《{回来吧!妈妈｝》。

•顶真式如《人贵有志，志在奋斗》

(二)开头方法(开头的六种方法：引、喻、释、比、问、摆)•

(1)引：引名言开头作引论。

•例如：“„我用咖啡匙子量走了我的生命。‟这是美国诗人艾略特早期诗作中的名言。用它描摹某些习惯的恶毒，这是很恰当的。有些习惯实际就是积久的惰性，它不啻于民众的鸦片。”

•【解析】这种开头方法的好处是加强论述的权威性，先声夺人。

(2)喻：用比喻开头作引论。

【例1】人生就像一个天平，并不是一味的增加就是好事。有的时候为了保持平衡，不得不减去一些东西。所以，我们要作好人生的减法。

•【例2】当你背着名利欲望的行囊走在人生的道路上，你是否感到了它的沉重?你不妨停下脚步，整理一下行囊，减去些不必要的东西。作好这种减法，会使你的旅途更加轻松、愉快

。

•(3)释：阐释题目含义破题，引出正论

•【例】“„习惯‟一词可谓尽人皆知。习，常习也;常习则惯，惯则成自然。自然之理当然无可厚非，对自然之理倘要怀疑甚至于否定，那幺，被斥为‘异端邪说’，也是顺乎天理人情的了。囿于既定之规，于是就沉默，生活于‘雷池’禁区之内不敢越出半步，于是几百年几千年，不再创新，不再奋进。这种消极的落后的习惯已成为阻碍华夏进步、中华振兴的阻力。”

【解析】这种开头方法的好处是通过诠释概念来挖掘其深意，明确论述的方向。

•(4)比：通过对比来阐明事理。

【例】“阿基米德说：„给我一个支点，我能把地球撬起来。‟我说：„给我一个支点，我能把灵魂撬起来。”——2000年《给灵魂

【例】“一个女歌星扭动腰肢在台上忸怩作态唱上一曲，所得酬金如天女散花一样从天而至。而一名科技界的女教授，辛苦大半生，累计工资还不及女歌星一曲所得。女教授不会扭动腰肢，她手里拿的是厚厚的讲义。我认为，为了表示尊重知识， 尊重人才，就应该体现在劳动报酬上。

【解析】这种开头方法的好处是通过对比，帮助人们判断是非曲直，从而有力地支持论点

。

•(5)问：通过反问或自问自答，引出观点或引入议论。

【例】“水滴石穿”这个成语是大家很熟悉的，但怎样才能真正理解它的含义呢?

我认为，水滴能穿石，至少要经过一段时间，坚定不移的、目标专一的往下滴，才能把石头滴穿。由此我想到，一个人想要成为成功者，最少要具备两个条件：其一，要有明确的奋斗目标;其二要有恒心、毅力。(方志权《从“水滴石穿”所想到的》)

(6)摆：摆出事例，引起议论。

【例】不知何时，在充满活力的校园中，兴起了„孤独‟热。于是，再不见三五成群欢笑而过的人群，到处是低头沉思孤独徘徊的身影。就连白色的文化衫上，也印上了„别理我，烦着呢‟……诸位„孤独的朋友‟，你恐怕不懂得真正的孤独，否则，你就不会脱离火热的生活而去作茧自缚了。

【解析】这里是借具体事例提出问题，用这种方法先提出问题，引人思考，同时也是明确议论的范围。

另外还可采用以下方法开头：

一铺陈造势法。

“如果你选择的是翅膀，你将拥抱整个蓝天;如果你选择的是鳍，你将亲吻茫茫碧海;如果你选择的是四足，你将体味莽莽绿林。而我选择的却是——牢笼。”——2002年《选择牢笼》 “诚信如春天的第一缕阳光，令人向往;如夏天的一块甜西瓜，含在口中，甜在心里;如秋风从远方送来一片火红的枫叶，引起无限的牵挂;如冬天里飘飞的雪花，为麦田覆盖上一层层厚棉被。”——《诚信——永远的绿卡》

二造境生韵法。

“贵生书院青瓦红墙，一抹月光，一泓夜露，一片清香凉爽。”

——《 戏剧之梦》

目光初涉就会被这清幽的景所迷，被这迷离惝恍的境所醉。

“深深的围墙，明眸的宫女，沉寂的粉蝶，慵懒的梳妆，犹如宫廷的车轮，在昭君的心里缓缓流

过。”——2002《昭君的选择》

三•背景渐入式

当街一个曲尺形的大柜台……可以随时温酒。《孔乙己》

六月十五那天，天热得发了狂!” 《在烈日和暴雨下》

这是个下着小雨的清晨，我们行走在泥泞的山路上。山不高，有溪水流淌而去，寒风扑面。

小雨。雨在空中回旋飘飞，密密地打在脸上，冰凉冰凉的。这沥沥稀稀的雨，向着远处延伸，终于成了一帘白幕，把天地万物遮挡得严严实实。我们在雨中前进，任这上赐的甘霖湿透全身每一个角落，从头到脚，由嘴到心，那心里有诗在流淌，它漫过心坎，静静溢出“自在飞花轻似梦，无边丝雨细如愁。”《诗意地生活》

四.巧用诗文显诗意

翻开灿若银河的唐诗宋词，数不胜数的当算离别诗了，王勃壮怀高歌 : 无为在歧路，儿女共沾巾。柳永则声情哀怨 : 今宵酒醒何处?杨柳岸晓风残月。江淹却千帆过尽一言蔽之 : 黯然销魂者，惟别而已矣。还有人捶胸顿足:扬鞭哪忍匆匆!当今又有汪国真低吟:人生一瞬百年，哪堪去去还还。无论耳在何处，只祈如水如船。又来了席慕蓉温柔的警语 : 如果离别能够勾起我们因聚在一起而引起的疏忽的细节，离别真的不好吗?如此种种情思，真是美不胜收。涵咏不同时代不同人生的感悟，会让你有意外的收获。——《万象人生 坚守自我》

五、蒙太奇式，细腻生动

运用电影中的蒙太奇手法(特写镜头)细腻生动的叙述和描写往往能在一瞬间抓住读者的心。生活就是由一些细节连缀而成的，一草一木，一山一水，这些东西就能入我们的视野。我们只有做一个有心人，多关注身边的人情世故，把握时代的脉搏，倾听历史的声音，我们就能在考试中表现出与众不同的魅力。当刘兰芝第五次回首的时候，泪还是忍不住落了下来，黑漆漆的门紧闭着，一如仲卿般冷漠，左邻右舍还在对她指指点点，议论着这个因不守妇道而被休的女子。可是，谁能知道她的苦衷?《<孔雀东南飞>新传》(04年江苏卷)

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(三)抓重点，写好两段话

•除了写好开头和结尾外，还应写好主体段，主体段一般为两段。对一篇议论文而言，主体段的写作应是提出分论点并论证的过程。字数可控制在300字左右为宜。

•其构成模式：“主旨句+过渡句+材料句+分析句”。

•①主旨句是支撑中心论点的一个分论点，应放在句首。

•②过渡句是连接中心句和材料句的一根线，起到承上启下的作用。

•③材料句是摆事实的部分。

•④分析句是讲道理的部分，可分析原因，也可正例反设或反例正设，还可写一个变式的中心句。如：•题例：①语文，想说爱你不容易。(中心句)②只因为你如那邻家待嫁的大家闺秀，让我如何才能猜透你的心思?③语文啊，你的世界总是变化万千!(过渡句)④我看见李白那浪漫的月，“举杯邀明月，对影成三人”;我看到苏轼那思念的月，“但愿人长久，千里共婵娟”;我看到曹孟德豪放的月，“月明星稀，乌鹊南飞”。(材料句)⑤语文啊!你的浪漫，你的思念，你的豪放，让我如何猜得透?(分析句)(《语文，想说爱你不容易》)

•【例段】 在人生的道路 上，我们需要作好人生的减法。(主旨句—观点)适当的减去一些心灵上的沉重负担，减去一些奢侈的欲望，我们才能有所建树。(过渡句—阐释)东坡居士，屡遭贬谪，曾为自己怀才不遇而感到消沉郁闷。但当他来到赤壁之上，望过滔滔江水，他释然了。他减去了对功名的奢望，吟出了《赤壁赋》这千古名篇。(材料句—事例)正因为他减去了心灵的负担，才成就了他豪放的词风，成为了豪放派的代表人物。(分析句1—因果分析)试想，他若放不下自己对功名利禄的追求，徘徊于入世与出世之间，他若减不去奢侈的欲望与心灵的负担，他又怎会一心用于诗文创作，为后人留下无比珍贵的文学瑰宝，他又怎么回被后人誉为“唐宋散文八大家”之一呢?(分析句2—反面假设)减去心灵上的种种负担，廓清人生的道路，释然面对一切，就能让我们在人生前进的道路上走得从容淡定，走出属于自己的成功之路。(扣题)

第二段的写法：

1、角度要变换：依上段：①正—反;②破—立;③古—今;④过去—现实。

2、事例+分析

方法：①例后推因

③例后评价

④引用证明

⑤假设对立面批驳

第二篇：托福作文总结

Integrated Writing: 时间：阅读3分钟，写作20分钟 字数：150以上

题型;基本上是三点反驳

Independent Writing: 重点：结构(层进)，逻辑(配合句与句，段与段连贯)，(词汇句式多样性，不重复) 题型：1 agree or not

2 A or B

(3 开放性问题what when...) 字数：400以上 时间：30分钟

细小东西：1 好东西用在前面较好

2 不需要题目

3 字数不够的补救方法：多打空格拆字，in other words, for example

4 随性写(不拘泥于小节)，写个性化内容

***************************************************************************************************** Integrated Writing具体内容

结构：1 分别表达说话者和文章中的观点，写明他们相悖

2 反驳了什么--- contrast说话者、文章 --- 再说一下他们相悖 常用语：1 contradict, differ from,cast doubt on...

2 indicate, believe, state, contend, claim, show...

3 lecturer, speaker

4 其他在作业里面

P31最佳例文，P42模板，P43主体部分模板，P

44、45开头方式(一句话、两句话)

Independent Writing具体内容 一

段落结构

1 开头段：引话题(结构暗示)--- 写中心 --- 联系下文(The reasons for my view go as follows.)

2 主体3段:中心句 --- 解释中心句 --- 例子，数据 --- 解释例子，数据

(3 结尾总结，和首段呼应)

二

几种写法(P65例文，夹带的纸) 1 经典 2 contrast 3 factor and analysis(因素分析) 4 对象细分 三

例子：亲身经历，见闻，听闻 数据：具体时间，机构 (某人言论)

第三篇：托福作文随笔20150507

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

If a person wants to be successful in life, knowledge gained through study is more important than the ability to be creative

The issue of which element is more important for a person’s success, knowledge gained from study or the ability to be creative, has been the subject of dispute for some time. Both of them are essential for one’s success, but I incline to view the later one as more important. .

First of all, it is not deniable that knowledge gained through study is very important for a beginner in some area, but it is creativity that can help him to be outstanding. In fact, knowledge from study can make a person eligible and qualified to do some kind of work, but it cannot help the person be excellent. As we all know, if an aspiring youth wants to be a surgeon, he must learn a lot of courses in a medical school, which will be a painstaking process for him. Then, in order to reach his goal, he has to pass all the examinations which show that he has learnt enough knowledge about medicine. In the end, he may be eligible to be a doctor, but it is another thing when it comes to whether he can be an excellent or successful surgeon.

Moreover, creativity can lead people to come up with new theory and method, which will bring success to us. It is hardly an exaggeration to maintain that creativity is the impetus for evolution of our society. For instance, with the former knowledge of mathematics and physics, and his unique creativity, Isaac Newton discovered the basic laws of the nature. His theory had dominated the world of science for more than two hundred years. The edifice of Newton’s theory collapsed, when Albert Einstein built the foundation of relativity theory. Both of them are viewed as the most successful scientists by people. Hypothesizing that they lacked the ability of creativity, how could we know the laws the nature, and create our modern life.

As we all know, not everyone could be as creative as Newton or Einstein, but most of us can try our best to learn the knowledge from study. Most of us can be eligible and qualified to do some work. Maybe we are not so creative, but it cannot deter us from doing our job well, which is another kind of success, at least in my opinion.

第四篇：最新托福英语作文模板

TOEFL班的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文结构组合而成。

作文文套一A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the

disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

作文文套二A or B

将原题复述 ___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________.

In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点

__________.

In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.

作文文套三单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

Futhermore,______________.

In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.

作文文套四agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a

_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact

that______________解释本段中心___________.

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe

that______________.

What is more, some students are interested in____________.

In a word, ________________.

作文文套五A or B

Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is

that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as

________________________.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider

that______________.(exmaples:___________).

From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.

作文文套六Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows. One of the primary causes is that_______________________.

Examples_______________.

But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.

What is more_______________. Examples___________

General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.

作文文套七A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than

B. For instance,_______________

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.

In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they

sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

作文文套八A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in

contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view

is based on the propensity of following points.

We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is

____________________. For example, ______________.

Also, ________________________.

This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.

作文文套九A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________. Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.

A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.

Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.

作文文套十

____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two

disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________.

Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.

For exmaple_____________.

Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.For example, _________________.

In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to

_____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.

作文文套十二A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

One of the primary cause is that_______________________.

What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.

Futhermore, ________________________.

Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________.

_______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say

that___________________.

作文文套十三A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.

In a word, ___________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.

作文文套十四A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this

point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here.

In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.

作文文套十五agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe

that________________.

In a word, _________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

第五篇：大同托福英语辅导班：如何写一篇高分托福作文

托福写作考试是对大家英语综合运用能力的考察，想要写一篇让考官眼前一亮的文章需要同学们在平时做大量的准备工作。很多参加过托福考试的同学都抱怨说，明明自己感觉文章写得非常不错，但是最终的分数却很低，这是为什么呢?如何写一篇高分托福作文呢?下面就由译林培森大同托福英语辅导班为大家支几招吧。

第一，用词一定要多样化。

通过对历年考生托福作文的分析总结，我们发现低分作文都有同样一个问题，那就是用词单一，一篇文章当中反复出现同样的词汇，这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象。大同托福英语辅导班的老师建议同学们，平时一定要多积累，多总结，丰富扩大自己的词汇量，要学会用不同的词语来表达同一个意思，这样会让阅卷老师觉得你英语基础很扎实，词汇掌握量很丰富，作文也就容易得高分。

第二，文章主题要明确，要有充分的材料来支持自己的观点。

很多同学在拿到文章题目的时候，做了简单思考之后就立即动笔，结果是想起一句写一句，使整篇文章显得东拼西凑、毫无条理。大同托福英语辅导班提醒同学们，在正式动笔之前一定要列好提纲，确定文章主题，然后在写的时候将主题突出。然后还要有充足的资料来论证文章主题，不然会让整篇文章显得很空洞，文章主题也会站不住脚。

第三，要注意细节问题，不要在细微地方失分。

在文章完成之后，大家还要注重细节问题，比如词汇拼写是否正确，人称是否符合文章，时态是否正确等。有些同学为了让自己的文章出彩，会使用一些较为复杂的句子，这样的句子由于结构复杂所以容易出错，大家一定要注意。除此之外，大同托福英语辅导班提醒同学们，在写完文章之后一定要看一下字数是否符合题目要求，千万不要因为这些细微的问题被扣分，那可就太可惜了。

在托福考试当中，写作其实是很容易拿分的部分，大同托福英语辅导班的老师希望同学们在平时的复习过程中多练习，多自己动手写，多总结，为自己制定严格的复习计划。我们从不打无准备之仗，只要准备工作做到位了，大家就一定可以写出一篇高分英语作文。