my dream 我的梦想

everyone has a lot of dreams. some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. i have a lot of dreams,too. when i was a young girl, i dreamed of becoming a scientist like hua imogen in future. however, i knew very well that i could not succeed without painstaking efforts. so i studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.


after graduating from, college, i found a job as a teacher. although i was very busy with teaching, i never gave up my goal. i read a lot of books to get more knowledge. i made experiments to practise and apply what i had learnt from the books. sometimes, i was so deeply indulged in my research that i forgot my meals and time. now i have made great progress. several of my research papers have been published. the methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. i am very happy. the ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but i have climbed the first rung anyway. 大学毕业后,我成为了一名老师,虽然我每天都很忙碌,但是我没忘记过我的梦想,我仍然不断坚持学习。在求知的道路上不断摸索前进,废寝忘食。现在,我已经小有成就了,我的多篇研究论文相继发表,研究成果也有着极高的应用价值。我很快乐。虽然,成为一名科学家目标还很远,毕竟我还是在不断向前迈进。 我的梦想作文评价:

本文为一篇记叙文。文中第一段为夹叙夹议,以general comment开头,引出“我的梦想”。第二段为作者为实现梦想所做的努力和取得的成果,最后一句“成为科学家的阶梯还遥遥在上,但我至少已攀登了第一级。”既是总结又是方向。此句摹仿了jack london 的散文“what life means to me”中的一句精彩句子。


We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

The Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate

Being a product of high-technology, Internet and computers are being more and more widely used in our everyday life. They can offer us fast and convenient service for communication.

In recent years, computers and the Internet have become popular among university students. Quite a lot of them use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of going home to see them in person or writing letters. Which, of course brings conveniences to them, but I don’t think it is good to do




electronic communication convenient, but it will never replace face to face contact. Both electronic communication and face-to-face contact are important in our life. What we should do it to apply each communication ways in the right way.

Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way, but it is face-to face contact that deepens the feelings and emotions between people.


Due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.

As electronic communication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computers, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication.


The Impact of the Mobile Phone in People’s Life

The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of mobile phone. As is subtly shown in the picture,so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road. What a meaningful cartoon!

It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces native influences on body and mind. First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs one’s eyesight. Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, learning, or daily life and is very likely to hurt him. Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind. An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.

It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them.

Therefore, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still don’t think the electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.


The impact of the Internet on the way people communicate

As to this picture above, an interesting dialogue happens between the parents and their child on the Internet. The parents, sitting in front of a computer, say “...we look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes...” Funny as it shows, which naturally leads us to be associated with the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate. It is no dout that face-to-face contact is inevitably impaired by electronic communication in the era of Internet.

Some suggest that the net brings about changes in interpersonal communication. With the net, we could contact people to share a great deal of information from anywhere at anytime. What’s more, we could learn a large amount of knowledge from different persons on such an opening flat. However, others insist that the internet has a bad influence on interpersonal communication. Even worse, some people are addicted to surfing the net so much as to isolate themselves from their families and friends, which is not beneficial to further interpersonal relationship and promote the feeling of harmony.

From my point of view, every coin has two sides. When we enjoy the benefit that the net brings us, we need to realize that the virtual net could never take place of the face-to-face communication among human beings. After all, we all live in a real world. Therefore, it is advisable for us to have a more face to face communication with our families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. As can





the graph/table/chart (As is shown in the table/figure), great changed have taken place in_______, The _________ have/has skyrocketed/jumped from _____ to _____.

When it comes to the reasons for the changes, different people give different explanations. Here I shall just give a few.To begin with, ______What’s more,___________, Last but not least, ________.

While it is desirable that ___________, there are still some problems and difficulties for __________




addition, __________ ,In a word, __________ .


My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable. I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays. It is very beautiful there. There are green plants, clear rivers, lovely animals kind people. I spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there. I wrote down what happened in my diary every day.

Besides that, I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. I helped them read English improve their spoken English. Their parents thanked me for this.

I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year. I liked green plants, clear rivers lovely amimals there.I breathed the fresh air on the mountain sometimes I went swimming in the river. I kept a diary every day.

I liked not the scene of the countryside,also the people there. I helped them to do farm work. I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. The children were interested in English. They were good at reading writing,did not do well in

listening speaking. I helped them improve their listening speaking. Their parents thought highly of me. I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.


This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.



For most of us today ,(1).

From above ,we can find that the reasons

why (2) are as follows.

The primary reason ,i think, is (3).


The third reason, actually ,is (5).

The significance for (6) 。

Therefore ,(7).











most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore , environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases

that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings , but also to wild life .)

from above ,we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows.

The primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land ).

Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ).

The third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world.

Everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment ).

The significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it’s high time that more effective measures should be taken .

Therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need

to reduce litter and waste . let’s make our good efforts ,and the world will be a safer place to live for us ).


These days we often hear that ( 1 ).

It is common that ( 2 ).

Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social

protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).

For another,( 4 ). What is more,

since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).

To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth

trying .We should do something such as ( 7 )

to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .









pollution of environment

These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed .).

Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is natural

that (a great number of factories have been springing up like

mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).

To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .