第一篇：雅思大作文主体段
朗阁雅思培训-雅思大作文主体段论据展开方法谈(下)
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雅思大作文主体段论据展开方法谈(下)
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二、先原因后举例
在上一个章节中我们已经初步掌握了2套论据展开方法，在本章节里，朗阁雅思培训小编将会继续介绍第2套方法同时再给出其他方式：
Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to deal with. Others, however, think that each individual should take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.There are, however, obstacles that stand in the way of individual action towards environmental conservation. The first obstacle is the lack of professional, issues like soil erosion and salinity require a significant amount of investigation and research. Another obstacle which makes individual action almost impossiblean environmental emergency or accident happens, e.g. an oil spill near the border line,government intervention or even international coordination.
在论证个人的力量无法对环境问题做出贡献时，作者给出了2个分论点，一个是说个人缺乏应对严重环境问题的知识。在论证此论点时，他也是先给出了原因，然后马上就这个原因举例。我们不妨可以进行一下对比，假如在论点后直接举例，会存在一个问题：“...with serious environmental issues such as soil erosion and salinity that require a ...”就是加上分论点后整个句子太长。尽管适当地使用长句对于获得高分的同学来说是必要的，但是这样容易走入一个误区，即尝试将每个句子都写长，而且对于一些英语语法还不是非常 1
扎实的考生来说还容易写错，所以得不偿失。所以采用“原因”加“举例”的顺序有利于论证的循序渐进。接着我们来看第二个分论点，作者采用的是我们上个章节介绍的第一种展开方式，即举例加结果。在同一个主体段中，我们可以将不同的扩展顺序进行组合，一般来说，若段落中所有的分论点没有主次之分，那么每个论点都需要有一定深度的论证;而当出现次要论点时，我们的论证就可以相对简单一点，甚至可以不用论证。
三、举例加结果再加举例
这样的论证顺序比较适合想要得高分的考生。举例加结果是第一种论证顺序组合，在上一章节里已经有详细的介绍，而在此基础上的举例则需要考生能够充分挖掘分论点的特征，从不同层面或者不同角度再给出一个例子，从而增强论证的深度和广度。以下我们来看一个实例：
Individual actions, small as they may be, can prove more effective than we realize. . This will reduce the use of fossil fuels and cut pollution. , is also ultimately good for the environment. Individual actions can also turn into united powers when, in a local campaign to oppose environmentally damaging policies.
首先在这个主体段中作者需要论证的有2个分论点，即“个人行为尽管可能很小，但是可以取得比我们预期更大的效果”和“个人行为可以转变为一股巨大的力量”。而作者在排列时将第一个分论点作为主论点而第二个作为次论点。所以在论证时，第一个分论点的论证内容就自然要多于第二个论点的论证。这时候，采用这样的论据展开方式非常适合。从举例到结果再举例的过程，已经将第一个分论点进行了充分的论证：“比如我们可以减少开车的次数，多坐公交”(举例)——“所以可以减少能源消耗和降低污染”(结果)——“在家节能诸如有需要时才开空调和将热水器温度调低几度”(举例)这样的论证顺序。在第一个举例结果给出以后，继续通过举例来“深化”分论点。值得一提的是，我们再举第二个例子时，一般要注意内容选择的差异性，即和前面的例子选择不同的方面。在围绕这个分论点的论证时，
我们不难发现第一个举例是从交通出行方面展开，而后面的举例则是围绕家庭生活展开，这样举例的好处在于“全面性”，这种思路非常适合高分的同学。而在主论点论证完毕后，第二个分论点作者仅仅是给出了一个举例就结束了本段的论证，这样的详略安排十分合适，因此借鉴价值很大。
Media violence is another threat. contain detailed depiction regarding robbery and murder. Some youngsters,more likely to imitate these behaviors and prone to commit crimes.tell stories happening in an evil world where the only way to win is to kill others and climb to a higher level.
在本段中为了论证“媒体暴力”这一负面影响，作者同样采用了这种组合方式，而电视和游戏的举例分别代表了不同的媒体类别。总之，通过这样的组合论证，我们要获得的效果就是论点的深度和广度，同时也为了丰富句型的组合提供了更多的发挥空间。
第二篇：怎么写好雅思大作文开头段
上海环球雅思
万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素，供考生们参考。
写好雅思大作文开头段要素一：现象句
雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。
E.g.1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of
E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven
E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。
雅思大作文开头段经典套句：
1.It is true that......是真实的
2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…
3.It is quite common… …是常见的
4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的
5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的
6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的
地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place
时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays
写好雅思大作文开头段要素二：点到问题
雅思大作文考题分成两种：report & argumentative。
对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)
E.g.4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来，全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。
E.g.5
Happiness is considered to be very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点，把造成这个现象的原因大致导出，与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。
对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?)，这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点，所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。
E.g.6
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
改写题目+主动变被动：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by
直接表达自己的观点：I tend to agree that
E.g.7
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.
写好雅思大作文开头段总结—— 现象+观点
E.g.8
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
总之，如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文，环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求，把时间控制在5分钟之内，把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析，希望能够帮助到大家，最后，环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利!
第三篇：雅思图表作文第一段改写方法
先看看剑7 TEST3的题目：
The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
再来看给出的6.5分范文
This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five
different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.
出路倒是有一条，那就是“句型变化+词汇改变”，措辞改变大家很好理解，句型变化是大家以前很少想到去做的，其实句型变化很简单，一般题目The table shows后面给出的通常是一个名词性的词组，我们把它改成句子即可，句型和词汇双变化，改写就容易充分了：
The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.
句型变化：名词性词组changes变为how…changed…词汇变化：this chart变为the given diagram
average house prices变为the real estate market
in five different cities后面添加around the world
between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989变为from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2000同时我们也可以作另外一种改写：
一般的题目是The graph shows…，改为The information given by the graph is about…则很轻易的改换了句型表达。 再看几个示例
示例 1
题目
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of family living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
改写一
The table illustrates what percentage of Australian families among various kinds lived in poverty in 1999.
改写二
The information given by the table is about the percentage of poor families in Australia coming from various backgrounds in 1990.
示例 2
题目
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school
qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
改写一
The bar chart demonstrates how many males and females in Australia in 1999 held various post-school diplomas.
改写二
The information provided by this bar chart is about the
percentage of Australian males and females holding the various post-school diplomas.
示例 3
题目
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 改写
The line graph above demonstrates how much water used in three areas changed from 1990 to 2000 while the data coming from the below table is about consumption in two different countries – Brazil and Congo.
两个图表的题目最好写了，可以一个写成从句，一个以The information given by the table is about…来改写。
第四篇：雅思大作文
For most of the citizens who live in urban area, rush hour is daily routine. It refers to traffic jam, crowded public transit, and brings high pressure upontransportation system as a whole. The rush hour may happen twice a day, in some cases even more. Therefore, urban citizens have to endure, and learn to survive in the congestion. Authorities als
As for the reasons, there are three main ones that must be mentioned. Firstly, the continuous growth of automobiles provides sufficient condition to cause traffic jam. Due to the industrial development, autos are increasingly affordable and thus become increasingly popular in urban residents. Moreover, despite some certain cases, the majority of the car owners travel to work, as well as leave for home, in almost the same time. Hence, with the help of an inherited nature of urban area, the dense population, the volum of traffic may understandably reach a peak during these hours. Last, the urban planning, especially for traffic, can rarellly be abreast with the pace of autos growing. When put these factors together, a conclusion can be conduct that rush hour is not an accident but a certain.
Obviously, rush hour brings a serious of defect. One of the troublesome consequences is waste of time. Because of lower speed and longer congestion, people who are unfortunately involved may cost more on way to work and easier to be late so that likely to have their mood mess. In other side, heavy traffic flow may lead to severe air pollution and inefficient use of fossil fuel which fall into category of social problem. In one word, rush hour delivers a negative effect on not only individuals in their daily life, but the society as a whole.
To solove this problem, some measures could be performed. For one thing, switching working hours can be effective since it will distribute the traffic flow. For example, institutions in some area put ahead their schedulel while others delay. For anther, citizens can be encouraged on taking public transportation such as subway, shuffle, or bus. Comparing with private autos, public transit is more efficient in conveying and hence reducing the traffic load. Additionaly, charging additional tax or fee for congestion can be used as a temporary way before the long and painful traffic system reform reach the finish line.
第五篇：雅思大作文解析
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雅思大作文范文解析
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Question: Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
这个题目的话题核心词是获取信息。也就是说，无论是图书馆还是因特网，其目的都是要通过这些媒介来获取信息。在准备这道题目的时候，考生们应该注意的是题目中的限制性词汇：free。这说明金钱问题将会成为支持图书馆的一个分论点。其次，考生们需要避免将中国式的图书馆和题目中问的图书馆混为一谈。很多学生在探讨图书馆的时候，都会把图书馆说成一个安静的自习的地方。但是其实这只是中国国情。图书馆本身就是借书，还书的地方。而且，这个题目所探讨的话题是获取信息，所以，凡是和获取信息无关的内容都属于跑题。下面我们来欣赏一篇由朗阁雅思培训中心的专家们给出的范文，供广大的烤鸭们参考：
1st argument: Despite the sheer volume of a diverse range of information available online, the exorbitant price of computer and Internet access in many regions of the world have rendered library the sole viable source of information to the majority of population around the world. An average computer, priced around US$1000, is apparently beyond the purchasing power of many rural poor, whose annual income is hovering around US$400. Besides, the daunting set of computer operations involved has also excluded the senior citizens in our society, most of whom are computer illiterate and unwilling to ride along the wave of Internet development due to their fear of high-tech products.
2nd argument: The reliability and accuracy of information online are by no means comparable 雅思培训 http://ielts.longre.com
托福培训http://toefl.longre.com to that of print media stored in libraries. User-oriented by nature, the Internet is largely characterized as a repository of contents contributed by anonymous, unverified online users, making it an unlikely source for researchers who hope to find some professional knowledge in a particular field of discipline. By contrast, the printed books are mostly authored by experts in their each respective specialized area of study and are thus more reliable and accurate.
3rd argument: Internet as a novel source and carrier of information overcomes the space limitations constraining traditional printed books. A national library may at best house millions of books; the Internet, in comparison, can provide million times more information. More importantly, as increasing importance has been attached to the speed of information update, library is evidently rendered obsolete as a result, for many books available for loan in libraries are simply too old! 思路：
整篇文章支持的观点是图书馆相比网络来说是更好的信息传播的工具。总共有两个分论点支持图书馆，一个分论点支持网络。首先，第一个分论点是从金钱的角度和这两种媒体所针对的人群数量来说图书馆具有优越性的。首先，全世界只有三分之一左右的人群能够上网，所以说图书馆对于大多数贫穷的人来说仍然是唯一的信息来源。而且，图书馆是免费的，也就是说人们可以随时来这里借阅书籍，不需要花任何的费用。而且，对于很多老年人来说，他们都不会使用科技产品。而且，很多老年人都非常地排斥科技产品的使用。他们并不喜欢使用这些产品。第二个分论点是从信息质量的方面来说。网络上的内容都是网上用户自己发的，这些信息的真实度并没有得到很好的认证。所以，如果想要去找专业的内容，网络的信息恐怕并没有任何的参考价值。而书，从另一方面来说，则是专业人士所写的。所以，书里面的信息的准确度和可靠度非常高。
相反的，网络相比来说的好处自然是信息量非常的大，这是图书馆所不能与之相比拟的。同时，网络正是利用了信息科技的发展，所以才能将最新的资讯第一时间传递给大众。这样一来，人们得到的才是一手的，最新的资料和信息。如果考生选择同意反方的话，可以考虑举雅思培训 http://ielts.longre.com
托福培训http://toefl.longre.com 几个例子来说明。比如说，对于做研究的人来说，他们不需要了解十几年前这个领域的发展情况，因为他们早已了解，可能已经烂熟于胸了。他们需要了解的是最新的领域的研究。所以，图书馆里面一些很旧的书籍显然已经不能满足人们的需要了。所以，这就需要人们去网络上搜索最新的资料。同时反方还有一个分论点就是如果是建立图书馆的话，那么就需要很多的资源，这都需要政府的大量投入。但是一旦建成，如果利用率低的话，就是浪费纳税人的钱。
Expressions: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. sheer volume 大量的，非常多的 a diverse range of 广泛地，各种各样的 exorbitant 非常昂贵的 render 使得… sole 唯一的 viable 可行的
beyond the purchasing power 超越了购买能力 hover around 大约在多少徘徊 daunting 有挑战的
10. exclude 不包括 11. senior citizens 老年人
12. computer illiterate 不懂电脑的人 13. ride along the wave 乘着什么的浪潮 14. by no means 绝不
15. user-oriented 以用户为中心 16. be characterized as 以什么为特点 17. repository 知识库 18. anonymous 匿名的 19. unverified 没有经过验证的 20. field of discipline 学科领域 21. by contrast 与之形成对比的是 22. specialized 专长的 雅思培训 http://ielts.longre.com
托福培训http://toefl.longre.com 23. novel 创新的
24. overcome limitations 克服局限性 25. constrain 限制 26. at best 最多，最好 27. house 容纳 28. obsolete 过时的