第一篇：雅思大作文常见论点
雅思写作论点论据
格伦轻松英语 唐志云
有些同学在写作文时容易出现思维问题，及虽然看懂了题目，也能确定自己的观点，但是在想原因的时候却想不出个一二三来，或者只能想出一个原因。这种问题很正常，因为有很多话题我们平时很少触碰(想想你初中高中一直作为一个解题机器怎么可能有时间去思考那些话题)。再看看官方培训的书中给的建议，往往只有一个很抽象的单词，那就是建议你多做brainstorm。于是乎，真轮到你写作文的时候了，你也就只能靠稍纵即逝的灵感了，或许更惨的是开始写火星文。下面我给大家介绍几种方法，我不敢说万能，但是在绝大多数情况下激发你的思路还是很管用的。很遗憾我没有给它取什么好听的名字，暂且给它取个法号叫“顿悟”吧。
(1) 人与社会法则
各位有没有发现雅思写作主流话题(教育，科技，环境，媒体，社会，政府)针对的对象都是“人”和“社会”，那么在写作时我们可以去想这个话题对对象在某一个方面具体的影响(利弊)。
从对“人”的角度想利弊：
·physically (想该事物对人们生理健康的影响) ·mentally (想该事物对人们心理健康的影响) ·money (想对人们就业，挣钱的影响) ·relationship (相对人与人之间关系的影响)
·education/horizons (想对人的视野，教育，素质方面的影响)
举两个简单例子，比如讨论电脑对孩子的影响(Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child)，那么我们可以从physically and mentally(身心方面)两个方面去阐述它对孩子的影响。再如，如果讨论科技对社会的影响，我们可以从money(经济)和relationship(人际关系)，甚至从horizons(视野)的角度。
从对“社会”的角度想利弊： ·economy (对社会经济的影响) ·culture (对文化的影响) ·employment (对就业的影响) ·environment (对环境的影响)
同样，如果讲多元文化的利弊，我们可以从移民对一个社会的经济，文化，就业的影响来论证。讲经济发展，如果要说弊端，我们可以列举它对环境的影响。当然，思路仅仅不局限于这些，平时建议大家广泛阅读，积累ideas。
(2)变化角度法则
有时候我们换个角度看问题往往会豁然开朗，而且论点也会显得更有层次。这里我建议大家可以“一分为二”甚至“一分为三”的看问题：从当事人的角度，从当事人对立面的角度，从第三方的角度。比如，如果要讨论国际旅游的利弊，我们可以从旅游者的角度，当地人的角度，还有环境的角度很轻松的想出三个论点。还有，剑桥6的Test 4：Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 此题我们可以从不同人群的角度去写，比如对于老年人，他们就不喜欢改变。而对于年轻人，很显然，更愿意尝试新鲜的事物。同样，还有很多题，我们都可以变化角度的来想论点。
(3)过去现在法则
最后，我们还可以通过变换时间、空间来想论点。比如，如果剑桥8 Test 3的一道题：In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. 我们可以从过去和现在人们的生活习惯来分析人们肥胖的原因。同样，在说到环境问题，大家也可以想想以前没有那么多工业工厂时的蓝天，再想想现在工业高度发展造成的阴霾天空。
当然，还是那句话，方法没有万能的，即使再普通的观点只要你语言能力强也能获得考官的承认。毕竟，雅思是语言能力测试，又不是开心辞典考IQ，我记得一个同行开玩笑的说：考雅思写作7分不需要文化~所以，关键在于自己活学活用，再加上各方摄取营养，最终无招胜有招!
第二篇：雅思小作文常见错误
A 普通图表作文
1. “millions” 或者“thousands”在句子中出现时不能加复数，只有“数字+million or thousand”的说法。 2. “the number of”后面一般接可数名词的复数 ，“the amount of”，“the quantity of”和“the volume of”类似，后面一般接不可数名词。
3. 图表作文中不可以出现“I”或者“We”，雅思图表作文需要正式的书面语言，因此在语言使用方面要减少第一人称的使用，减少非正式的说法。
4. 引用数据时不需要使用定语从句，直接引用数据即可。
错误的例子：North America had a lower proportion of degraded land, which was only 5%.
正确的例子：North America had a lower proportion of degraded land, at only 5%.
5. 上升”和“下降”这些词(Increase, drop 等)都是不及物动词，没有被动语态。也就是“was increased”错的。
6. Reduce 和 raise 这两个词小作文用不到，因为是及物动词;arise 也不能替代 rise;“ascent/descent”不能用在小作文里。
7. 表示“占据”的时候，最好不要用“occupy”，而是使用“account for/represent/constitute”
8. “outnumber”的主语一般是可数名词的复数，不能是不可数名词;而“overtake/surpass”的主语多用于不可数名词，或者是“number/figure/amount/proportion”这样的词;“exceed”表示超过某一个特定的数字或容量。
9. 对象词的错误。对象词就是图里的数字所代表的东西。
10. 时态的错误。多为一般过去时，有时候可能出现一般现在时或者将来时态。过去进行时不可能出现。 11. 动态图过分注重数据和小的波动，而忽视趋势。所谓趋势，就是一个区间内最主要的一个变化(譬如说，如果大部分时候是上升，就是上升趋势)
12. 静态图过分侧重读数据，没有将数据归类和归纳(具备类似特征的数据要放在一起)
13. 很多学生使用奇怪的上升或者下降的替换词，而忽视词性的变换(应该使用名词或者分词去替换动词)。 14. Increase/rise/drop 这些词用作名词的时候，要用不定冠词“a”，譬如说“saw a drop” 15. 比较句中，比较对象不一致。 16. doubled 不及物动词，没有被动。
17. rise 的过去时是 rose，而不是 rised。过去分词是 risen，而不是 rose。
18. “Percentage/proportion…accounted for”永远是错的，只有人或者物可以充当 “accounted for”的名词。
19. Per cent 前面要加数字,譬如说“40 per cent”，而 percentage 一般充当主语，后面要 加 OF，“the percentage of …”
20. While 是连词，要连接两个句子。
21. 副词修饰动词，应该在动词后面。譬如说“increased slightly”，但是不能说“slightly increased”;slightly 也不能修饰名词，也就是“a slightly increase”是错的，应该是“a slight increase” 22. 形容词不能修饰比较级别，譬如说“was slight higher than”是错的，要说“was slightly higher than”
23. remained 后面只能加形容词，也就是“remain constantly”是错的，只有“remain constant”。“Maintain”不是“remain”的替换词，譬如说，只能说“remained the most important means of transport”，而不能是 maintained 24. “reach”这个词后面直接可以读数据，譬如说“reached 32 million”，不需要加“to” 25. 在动态图里，一般是 rose “数字”-fold，而不是“rose five times” 26. 没有“comparing with”的说法，只有“compared with”的说法
27. 当表示“数字很低，几乎可以忽略”的意思，应该用 minimal，而不是 minimum 28. 表示年龄的时候，可以说“people aged between 20 and 40”，不能把“aged”写成“age” 29. 图表作文总结段不能表达个人观点、进行推测和预测，图表作文只需要根据数据进行总结和分析。 30. 图表作文总结段不能出现数据，因为数据的表述已经在主体部分完成。
B 流程图
31. Equipment 是不可数名词，facilities 是可数名词复数
32. Materials 是材料的意思，而 element 是元素的意思(不能用于流程图) 33. 如果 A 步骤是在 B 步骤之前发生，那么应该是“A happens, before B” 34. 流程图不能使用祈使句
C 地图
35. Cross 是动词，而 across 是介词(不能充当谓语) 36. Expand 是扩大的意思，expend 是花费的意思
37. Happen, take place 表示“发生”的意思，都没有被动语态
38. 地图题只能说西边和东边(western side 或者 eastern side)，不能说左边和右边(left side 和 right side)
第三篇：雅思大作文
雅思大作文模板|雅思大作文写作模板 很多考雅思的同学都很想知道一些雅思作文模板|，雅思考试有大作文和小作文，这里先重点讲讲雅思大作文，当然也会提供给烤鸭们一些雅思大作文模板.英语作文写作讲究的是形式与内容的高度统一和协调，中国的雅思学生在写文章的时候中文理由一大堆，却苦于不知如何表达，要想在短期内有所突破，唯一的方法就是去模仿范文中比较好的句式和模板，据为己用，然后进行修改和整理最后才能是自己的东西。才能拥有属于自己的雅思大作文写作模板.因此，模仿这一关一定要过，而且要理解后再模仿，不能生搬硬套，否则就要闹出很多笑话，或者干脆生搬硬套，那是肯定不行的.作文模板痕迹太明显，考官不会给好分数的. 下面给大家一些雅思大作文模板|雅思大作文写作模板，希望烤鸭们能理解后变化运用. 雅思大作文模板
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希望大家能在理解的基础上合理利用这些雅思大作文模板
第四篇：雅思大作文
雅思大作文模板(1)--五大题型模板
1 五大题型模板
开头段：
(opinion) The discussion about _____ is a very controversial one. Those who criticize (/oppose/object to/are against) _____ contend (/argue/hold) that _____, but people who advocate (/favor/are for) _____, on the other hand, maintain (/assert/ claim) that _____. From the personal perspective, I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____.
(agree/disagree) When it refers to _____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade. It is commonly accepted that _____; however, I disagree with the statement. I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____. (I partly approve this claim and there are several reasons and instance as follows supporting my view.)(advantages/disadvantages) Just a few years ago, the idea of _____ seemed far-reaching for most Chinese. Now, however, we are all aware that everything has two sides. _____ is no exception in its development. With the advert and popularity of _____, its advantages and disadvantages have been a subject of discussion.
(discuss both views) _____ now plays such an important role in so many people’s lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing or a curse. People’s opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial topic. Advocates maintain that _____. Opponents, on the other hand, contend (argue/insist) that _____. Obviously, both sides have over-simplified this issue. Actually, its value to people and society depends on how it is used.
(problems&solutions) According to a(n) survey (/investigation/analysis/statistics/report) released (/conducted/made) by _____, there is a growing (/increasing/declining) number of _____ who (/which) _____.
To be specific, ______. (What amazes us most is that _____.) Among countless factors which directly and indirectly influence _____, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.
正文段：
(opinion) (agree/disagree) The main reason for my propensity to _____ is that _____. What is more, _____. Moving on to wider themes, I agree with the statement that _____ without reservations for the reason that _____. Naturally, _____. It can be given a concrete example that _____.
Another equally essential factor why I advocate _____ involves the realm of _____. No one can deny that _____. Obviously, it is imperative that _____. Meanwhile, a recent survey (/a typical example) will make this point clear and acceptable; _____.
However, we should concede that dispite the merits of _____ mentioned above, overextented _____ will be indeed counterproductive, even harmful. The harm it produces is, in my opinion, both palpable and profound. For individuals, it has a debasing impact on _____; for society, it may promote a negative tendency toward _____.
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3. However, _____ has also brought about (/given rise to/led to/resulted in/caused/created) a lot of problems.
4.Good (/Superior/Wonderful) as A is, _____, it has its own disadvantages (/brings its own problems), too.
For one thing, _____. For another, _____, Finally, _____.
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The reasons (/causes/factors) for _____ are complex (/varied/profound). Some attribute it to _____. Others put it down to _____. Still others owe it to _____. In my opinion, however, three (/some) factors shout louder than others (/weigh heavier than others/stand out from others). The most critical
reason lies in _____. Moreover, _____. Another important factor should not be ignored. _____.
Among a myriad of suggested solutions to _____ (/measures against _____ /plans for _____ /moves toward _____ /ideas on _____), three have begun to stand (/stick) out. First of all, _____. An equally effective measure (/solution/recipe) is _____. Last but not least, _____.
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(opinion) (agree/disagree) Weighing the pros and cons of _____, I strongly commit to the notion that _____, not only because _____, but also because _____.
(advantages/disadvantages) To sum up,the key point is how to make good use of its positive aspects and avoid its negative points. While taking advantage of _____, we must try to find ways to reduce its disadvantages, namely, _____, to a minimum.
(discuss both views) In any case, whether the ultimate effect of _____ is beneficial or detrimental, one thing is certain that _____ in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society. (Weighing the two sides, both arguments seem to be reasonable, after all.) (problems&solutions) To promote (/suppress/cultivate/popularize/curb/enhance/root up) the issue in question, the public attention (/more stress/more emphasis) should be placed (/put/focused) upon two proposals (/moves/measures/solutions): _____.
第五篇：雅思大作文写法
如此下笔雅思大作文
雅思大作文在写作分值中占60%，且要求达到250字以上，整个考卷中，这是一项庞大而艰巨的工程，综合考查考生平时的积累、练习和运用，此部分建议用时40分钟。那么如何在这时间里创作出优秀的作品呢?
审题是有效完成任务的第一步，也是最关键的一步，用时大概在2-3分钟左右。首先通读题目，了解大意，再细读，分析句子间的逻辑关系，最后再读题目，辨别关键词，区分主题词和限定词，推测考官的出题意图。由于大部分考生只做到了读题的第一步，所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。
审清题目之后，接下来就是文章的结构。用大约3分钟时间，对关键词加以延伸，根据已经获得的素材确定写作框架，列出简单提纲。明确的思路能让文章写作得心应手。 万事开头难，有个性的开头往往能提升文章的含金量。大作文的第一段是情景铺垫，在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论或解决什么问题及问题的背景，也可以加入个人观点。用时8-10分钟。首段一定要避免出现语法错误，这是为了给考官有继续读下去的勇气。 正文部分可以从正反两面论述，再阐述自己的观点或看法，一般在15-20分钟。需要强调的是，一定要紧扣题目，注意句子的连贯性，如连接词的运用、承接、转折、句子长短搭配等，在用词方面尽量多用学术性更强的词汇以增强文章看点。
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，结论段，是文章的完整性的体现，用时在5-8分钟。好的总结能起到画龙点睛的效果。开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，高分当然会光顾你了。
最后再用1-2分钟进行检查，此时不宜作大的修改，把笔误的部分改掉即可。 整个写作过程中，要把握好时间，掌控好情绪，明确思路，正确运用各类词汇和句式，多增加文章提分点。不用怀疑，好的文章就出自你的笔尖。