第一篇：书面表达部分范文
英语书面表达
寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.
A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before. More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house. 44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich. Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future. To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.
Keeping optimistic
We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.
In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam. I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university. Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study. I’m grateful to them and agree with them. From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam. On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success. As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：
上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天(周
一、周二)，因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。
Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates. Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache. I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever. So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days. Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday
任务型写作
总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story. After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.
你认为制订目标很重要吗?The quest for success always begins with a target. Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction. Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.
你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功?There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard. Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks. 举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest. At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough. I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again. Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作
社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分;书本知识有限;社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。
Most of the students think that social practice is not important. In fact social practice is an important part of school education. After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited. Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us. For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more
experience and have more knowledge about our society. Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.
任务型写作
总结：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.
描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off. I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.
你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.
一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.
第四周周六下午
热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心;英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验;工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费;这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处;:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。
Dear Sir or Madam
I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood. Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work. Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer. What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays. If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships. It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for. I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.
Sincerely yours
Ling ming
就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信
Dear principal ,
I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago .It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.
In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar. They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.
同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages. So far, there has been no consensus on it.
你对此决定赞成或反对?Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.
(理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while. Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other. It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life. So it is better to continue music lessons
汕头一模
1. 为何与人合作：现代社会必备;可省时间和精力;更多互相学习的机会
2. 与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖
掘其优点
3. 你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误
Good afternoon,everyone !the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner .”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other .We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him .however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike .In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages .In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way .Thank you for your listening !
失败是件坏事吗?
概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life .But there are different attitudes towards failure .Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds .
失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude .As for me ,I like success .Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter .
失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course .
你对失败的看法和态度 (1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure .As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success .Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success .”
(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed .Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes .Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success .
广州一模
基础写作简介学校的植物园
1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时
Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters. The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008. as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour. The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.
读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评
(1) Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students. The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance. His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.
你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it. Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first. Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour. It only shifts the problem from the school to the community. If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school. Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.
假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生?If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers. The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.
(2) Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students. The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance. His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.
I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action. If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning. As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential. If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace. Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.
If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well. I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers. But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.
梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程
1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果
Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow. In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards. Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green. At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around. It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.
经济危机，大学生就业难
概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…; The story is mainly about…
Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off. The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.
现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.
建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs. It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries. It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take. To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.
政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes. Supplying certain amount of loans without interest. I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.
第二篇：高考书面表达
书面表达范文
例文一：
据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。
众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。
吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。
为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。
It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.
As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it.
Smoking causes many illnesses. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.
In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking. Please stop smoking at once.例文二：
What is happiness in my mind?
Happiness means different things to different people. For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything .
I don’t quite agree with the above points. I don’t think money means happiness. We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.
例文三：
进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。
1.污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。
2.列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。
3.希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。(平衡：balance) In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet. The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter. It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants. We can’t have fresh air.
Fish died front polluted water. It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places
because of pollution. I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective
measures to solve this serious problem. We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we
see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned. It is indeed our urgent task to do everything
possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四(2012高考题)
春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是
如何欢度春节的。
作文必须包括以下要点：
1. 春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。
2. 除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。
3. 在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能
得到许多压岁钱。
4. 春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好
运。
The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the
lunar year. It is a time for family members to get together. People go back home from all parts of
the country.
On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.
During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time. They can play all day long
instead of going to school. And they can get money from their parents.
The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.
They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.
To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.
例文五：(2011高考题)
在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的
书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的
观点。
演讲稿的主要内容应包括：
有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因
为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我
们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们
需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理
解的。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or
read our diaries. Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to
do what we like. In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this. After all, there are times
when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.
Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good
for us to develop our own identity. Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form
our own judgement about things. Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.
Thank you.
例文六(2010高考题)
假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的
英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。
求职信必须包括如下要点：
1. 今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。
2. 在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计(CAD)一等奖。
3. 去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。
4. 我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。
5. 希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。
A Letter of Application
Dear Mr. Lin,
I’m Wang Hong. I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer. My major
is Computer Science and I like it. Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded
the first prize. Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned
quite a lot. Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do
something for you. With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my
future job. I sincerely hope Mr. Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would
appreciate an early interview.
Yours faithfully,
Wang Hong
假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。
要点：
1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。
2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。
3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。
4、今天不能到校，请假两天
Dear Miss Zhang,
I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today. My head hurts and I feel tired. I don’t feel like eating anything. I have been like this ever since last night. I have seen the doctor. She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold. She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today. I’d like to take two days off. Thank you.
Yours,Li Hua 例文七：
假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
(1)你怎样得知David的愿望;
(2)你愿意成为他的朋友;
(3)你打算如何帮助他;
(4)你盼望他的回复。
注意：(1)电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数;[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]
(2)词数：100左右。
Dear David,
I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.
I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三篇：书面表达
中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练
【考点扫描】
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条;
2、看图作文;
3、根据汉语提示作文。
无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。 【名师解难】 一. 训练方法
1. 记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2. 练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3. 写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、 1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。 二. 应试策略
1. 审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。
4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5. 写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1)语态、时态要准确无误。
2)主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4)注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
2 5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：
1)外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2)服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3)内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4)感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5)动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1)表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2)表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3)表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4)表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5)表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6)表示列举的：for example , such as… 7)表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1)格式是否有错。 2)拼写有无错误。 3)语言是否用错。 4)时态、语态错误。 5)标点错误。 6)人称是否用错。 三. 注意事项
书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 【中考范例】
VII. 书面表达(共1题，计10分)
假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。
要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。
Hello!I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.
4 I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。
5 1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。
2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：
1、收到对方的来信;
2、愿意和对方交朋友;
3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址;
4、自己的身份、特长和爱好;
5、自己的希望。
3、列提纲：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4. a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5. hope we’ll meet in China
4、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。
5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday. I’m very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.
I’m a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day. I’m sure we’ll have a good time together. Please write (to) me soon. Yours, Zhang Qiang 6
6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。 【满分演练】
(1)
华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山(the Hua Mountain)
1.位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。 2.乘汽车去大约要花1个小时;也可以乘火车去。
3.登山便可领略其云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。 注意：
1.字数：80词左右。 2.请不要逐字翻译。 (2) 根据提示和要求完成下面短文
假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(100个词左右)表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1. 向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。
2. 礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。
3. 告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。
7 注意1. 信的格式已经给出。
2. 信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。 (3)
根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。
今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……
请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。(请注意日记格式) 1.fine day, sun, bright 2.visit, Beijing Zoo 3.animal, so interesting, people, love 4.see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say (4)
根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。 注意1. 字数60~80。
2. 所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。(可适当发挥) 3. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。
假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。
name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…
Dear friends
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening. (5)
根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。
今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。
注意：1.字数100左右;
2.必须使用所给英文提示。 Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9 (6) 看图写话。
根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。 要求：1. 叙述要用第三人称。 2. 词数60~80个左右。 3. 要表达自己的看法或想法。
4. 选用下列词语：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ (7)
请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。 注意：1. 语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。 2. 表达符合图意，书写规范。 3. 给出自己的观点。 4. 文章的开头已给出。
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参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源) From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ (8)
请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。
参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火
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Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...”
__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ (9) 看图写话。
要求：1. 根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。 2. 至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。
3. 标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden. ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ (10)
根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。
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(11)
假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。
注意：1. 短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2. 词数：70～90
3. 生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe
________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________ (12)
请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。(词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词)
内容要点：
过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】
(1) 参考答案：
The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the east of Shaanxi. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It’s not far from here. It takes you about one hour to get there by bus. You can also go there by train. When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It’s really a nice place to visit. (2) 参考答案：
36 Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：
How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I’m very happy to hear from you again. I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!
15 You remembered! It’s just my size. Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I’m fine here in China. Last week I had a birthday party. Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food. We really had a wonderful time together. How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much. I always miss the days we were together last summer. I hope you can come to China someday. Please write back soon. Your friend, Li Lei
(3) 参考答案：
Sunday June 23rd
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong. The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them. When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”
(4) 参考答案： Dear friends,
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin. I’m fifteen years old. I live in Beijing. One of my favorite subjects is biology. I’m
16 interested in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. I want to be a biologist when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all. Thank you for listening. (5) 参考答案：
Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history. There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors. Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows. Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.
(6) 参考答案：
Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning. It was the rush hour. He rode his bike to school very fast. He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment. Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily. The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right. Then a policeman came over. He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous. Tim thanked him and went to school. All of the young men should obey the traffic rules. 17 (7) 参考答案：
From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes. The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died. Many people often waste water. For example, they often forget to turn off the taps. If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die. We can’t live without water. So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources. We must save water and stop polluting it. If we do that, Things will be much better. (8) 参考答案：
Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window. Wow! He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire. Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone. He made a call to the police. Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour (to) fight against the fire. Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out. And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot. (9) 参考答案：
TAKING CARE OF TREES
One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden. They found
18 that a young tree there was dying. They thought they must save the young tree. Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it. Some days later the tree came back to life again. Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”
(10) 参考答案：
Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school. On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street. Suddenly a car passed by very fast. The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground. The apples in her basket were all out on the street. Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples. Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street. The old woman thanked us very much. (11) 参考答案： 内容要点：
(1)上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。 (2)上星期六(第二天)早上六点半我就起床了。 (3)我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。 (4)到南河边，我们开始植树。(也可描写动场面。) (5)看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。
Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day. On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket. My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.
When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank. (On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)
After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank. (12) 参考答案：
Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings (there are many tall buildings here and there). The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them. People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work. 走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢?突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的;当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。
于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜
20 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。
妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。
我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁;秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣;本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死;结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。
几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化;应该说人的素质也应有所提高;一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的;有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上， 21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应;俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”;可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。
然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残;我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。
树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾;看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线;争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢?
家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情;把金钱和利益看淡一些吧! 人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。
今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情. 22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵. 主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇;把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家;又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机;齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家;齐天成为东北大学学生;齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。
齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。
23 可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。
那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼?
毋庸置疑，是亲情。
寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢?他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”
生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。 最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐!她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了!她的灵魂才得以解放。
亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。
亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们;亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们;亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。
亲情是雪，晶莹剔透;亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。
亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和;亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。 不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。
24 没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉;没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代;没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥;没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。
亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。 “兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”
“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。 “我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。
无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了. 我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!
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第四篇：书面表达技巧
2010高考二轮复习英语教案
专题二十一 书面表达
【专题要点】书面表达的体裁、题材、情景具有多样性、实用性。近年来，书面表达取材比较广泛，内容较为丰富，题材多为日常生活和一般交往所涉及的内容。体裁包括记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文，命题的方式多种多样，主要有文字提示、图画提示和图表提示三种。
【考纲要求】考试大纲对成人高考英语书面表达的要求是“要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100-150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的，对象，时间，地点，内容等等，提供情景的形式有图画，图表，提纲等”;要求考生能： 1.准确使用语法和词汇;2.使用一定的句型、词汇，
清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;英语课程标准中关于成人高考写作的要求为：1.能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写出短文或报告;2.能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度;3.能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。
【教法指引】综观近几年的成人高考英语发展势态：书面表达旨在训练学生对所学语言知识的实践应用，特别是测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力的必考题型，也是成人高考中重要且难度较大的题型，所占分值为25-30分，要在30分钟内写出80-100个词左右的短文。历年来，成人高考英语书面表达主要有以下特点：
一是文体的常用性，即其所涉及的文体有：1.议论文，以摆事实，讲道理的方式表述观点，事物，方法的原则，须具备论点，论据，论证三大要素;2. 说明文，用说明作主要表达方式来说明某个事物的形状，性质，功能或形成原因，发生发展过程等;3. 应用文，有书信，日记，口头同志，便条，广告，启示，请柬，贺卡，海报等形式，其中信的形式有包括求职信，感谢信，商务信函等;4.记叙文,以记人，叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式的一种文体，包括介绍人物地生平事迹，记叙事情发展过程，说明前因后果等。
二是题材的熟悉性，既书面表达的取材主要涉及中学生所体验到的日常生活。
三是内容的控制性，它通过图画，表格，要点等来限定考生的写作内容，使得考生在写作时自由发挥的余地较小。
四是题型的稳定性，由上所述，近年来考试的命题形式主要以图画，表格形式出现，有时以提纲，要点形式出现。
五是要求的渐进性，既成人高考对书面表达的要求在逐年提高，由原来的要求写对，到以前的要求写好，再到现在的要求写出文采，使用高级词汇和复杂结构等，并对由此而产生的错 - 1 -
误采取了宽容的态度。
以30分作文为例，一般评分标准：
A.内容充实，主题突出，覆盖所有知识要点，应用了较多较高级的词汇和语法结构，有效得使用了语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑，给25-30分。
B.内容较充实，能表述作文要求，语法结构和词汇能满足内容要求，有一些错误但不影响全文理解，全文连贯，给21-25分。
C.内容基本充实，尚能表述作文要求，句子简单但能表达内容要求，给15-20分。
D.漏掉或未能写清主要内容，有些内容与主题无关，语言错误影响了读者对写作内容的理解，缺少连贯性，信息未能清楚地传达给读者，给10-15分。
E.明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题，不知所云，字迹潦草，给1-10分。
从高考评卷及平时测验题，学生在做书面表达题时，得分率较低，卷面普遍存在的缺点：1)文不对题(文体格式不规范);2)离题太远(抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多);
3)词不达意(有的甚至用汉语标注或留空);4)病句太多(时态、语态、人称、数等语法);
5)卷面不工整(字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞)。如何指导学生克服上述缺点，少犯错误，提高该题的得分率?因此教师在引导考生复习备考突破该题型时要注意如下几点：
一、遵循循序渐进原则
对书面表达题型的训练要从简单到复杂的顺序进行，可以从一些简单的看图作文-记叙文着手;可以从单句-复杂句着手;可以从单段-多段;从不分段到分段等着手对学生进行训练。
二、点拨技巧，事半功倍
分析要求和阅卷情况，在平时的训练中要让考生养成良好的做题习惯如：
1.养成审题的习惯
1)审题时要明确体裁，掌握格式
学生的书面表达往往存在不讲究逻辑、文体和格式的现象，所以很有必要让学生明确常见的几种文体和格式。就中学阶段，最常见的 文体有：应用文(书信、通知、日记、便条)、记叙文和说明文。近十年书面表达内容题材不外乎上述三种文体。若是记叙文，要弄清事件的时间、地点、人物、原因和结果;若是说明文，要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序;若是以图画形式提供情景，即看图作文，首先应看懂每幅图的意思，还要弄懂几幅图之间的关系。
2)抓住要点，一一对应。
能否找出覆盖主要内容所有要点是得高分的关键，评分标准一般分五个档次，要点越齐全，得高分 的可能性就越大;反之，若欠缺要点或描述与表达内容要点无关的，得分当然低。
一般要求找出5--6个要点，可先用汉语或用keywords列出，
2.养成谋篇布局，谨慎用词的习惯
1)谋篇布局是审题的结果，也是写好文章的关键。一篇优秀的文章都是层次分明，思路清晰，要求达到此标准，必须依据提示进行分段构思，合理布局。
2)选词造句，点石成金。
书面表达要求用100词左右写出包含5--6个要点的短文。从近几年高考英语参考答案看，一般都以8-10个句子组成一篇文章。若用较少于8句话来表达，则句子容易复杂冗长，容易失控;若用多于10句话来表述，则句子零乱与琐碎，文章缺乏整体感。且大多数用简单句，少数用并列句和复合句。
因此，在教学中首先应对简单句五种基本句型以及“there be存在结构”等进行强化训练，然后对并列句、复合句进行适当的训练，使学生获得了扎实的句子结构基础知识，从而从根本上为迅速提高书面表达能力打下了扎实的基础;在平时训练中提醒学生在做题时，要善于避生就熟，当遇到某一难以直接表达的要点时，不妨变通一下，进行“曲线”表达。
3.养成合理安排，联句成文的习惯
书面表达不仅仅是“句子堆积”,要注意文章的连贯性和逻辑性。如何使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。用好各种连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要。要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适应的连接词，将句子连珠成串，使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。因此，在引导考生复习备考时，教师可介绍一些常用连接成分。如下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词：
4.养成检查修改，卷面整洁的习惯
做书面表达时，力求用词准确。作文写完后应认真阅读，检查文章中的拼写和标点错误、语法错误、逻辑错误等;检查词数是否符合要求;检查内容要点是否全面，删繁就简，使表达更加精炼，措词更加恰当。定稿后应认真誊写，要求书写规范、正确、美观，并保持卷面整洁。从参加阅卷者都有这样的体会：要在比较短的时间里，阅读完一篇作文，当看到那些字迹潦草卷面不整洁的，心情就特别烦，评分可能比想象的要低;而看到那些书写规范、卷面整洁的，就倍感爽心悦目，有可能得到比较高的分数，这也是情理之中的事情。因此，在训练时，学生要养成书写工整、规范，卷面整洁的习惯，在做高考题时，才不致书写潦草、卷面不整洁，从而导致丢失本来不该丢的分。
第五篇：书面表达基本技能
常见礼仪文体类型
一、礼仪致辞/表情类：(10)：
1、开幕词
2、欢迎辞
3、贺词
4、闭幕词
5、酒会辞
6、剪彩辞
7、悼辞
8、欢送辞
9、答谢辞
10、告别辞
二、礼仪书信/表情类(2)：
11、感谢信
12、慰问信
三、讲演稿
开幕词
表情——表事——表意
开头：表情(问候、感谢)
主体：表事、表意
1、会议背景
2、工作回顾
3、会议说明(主题、目的、任务、意义、安排)
4、表意
结尾：表情(希望)
开幕词例文
各位参赛选手、各位来宾、同志们：
云南省烟草专卖局(公司)第三届烟叶分级职业技能竞赛今天开幕了。 (表事)本次竞赛为国家烟草专卖局批准的省级二类竞赛。为了举办好这次竞赛，国家烟草专卖局劳动人事司给予了高度重视和支持;国家局职业技能鉴定指导中心组织了本次竞赛理论考试命题，专门下发国烟职技鉴字2006)56号文选派了国家级裁判员担任本次竞赛的裁判工作;中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心作为协办单位，为本次竞赛成立了专门机构，为竞赛决赛阶段的各项工作做了精心准备，并将提供热情周到服务。在此，我代表云南省烟草专卖局(公司)及本次竞赛组委会向国家烟草专卖局劳动人事司、国家局职业技能鉴定指导中心、中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心表示衷心感谢!向参加开幕仪式的裁判长、各位来宾、参赛选手、领队和工作人员表示热烈欢迎和亲切慰问!(表情)
本次竞赛以“高技能、新技师”为主题，以加快培训和选拔企业急需的具备高水平烟叶分级技术的高技能人才为目标，以职业技能竞赛为载体，展示云南省烟草公司系统烟叶分级技能人才新风貌，并以此推动全省烟草公司系统高技能人才队伍的建设与发展。同时，也是为明年参加国家烟草专卖局举办的“第三届全国烟草行业烟叶分级职业技能竞赛” 选拔参赛优秀选手做准备。(会议说明：目的)
本次竞赛级分初赛和决赛两个阶段：初赛阶段，14个参赛单位已通过初赛选拔出80名优秀选手参加决赛;决赛阶段;从今天正式开始，将在郑州中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心进行强化培训和竞赛。(会议说明：过程)
举办这次烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，是为做强做大云南烟草提供高技能人才保障的重要举措，是加快烟叶分级人才的培养步伐，提升烟叶分级人员的整体素质，不断满足各企业(单位)对烟叶分级人才需求的有效手段，是增强行业和企业的核心竞争力及自主创新能力的需要。 (会议说明：意义)
目前，云南烟草专卖局(公司)系统烟叶分级高技能人才的总量、结构、业务素质还不能适应行业持续稳定发展的需要，与全国烟叶大省的地位不相符合。尤其是作为主业把关人员的烟叶分级技术人员中存在着高素质、高技能人才匮乏、年龄结构和技能水平参差不齐等问题。全省烟草公司系统要想持续稳定健康发展、不断提升市场竞争力，培养造就一支高素质、高水平的烟叶分级职业技能队伍就显得犹为紧迫和重要，这次竞赛也为各企业(单位)锻炼队伍、检验水平、发现问题、找出差距、提高技能提供了一次极好机会。(会议说明：背景)
职业技能竞赛是锻炼和培养具有高水平、高技能人才队伍的有效方式之一。过去我们成功举办了两届云南省烟草专卖局(公司)烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，通过职业技能竞赛这个平台，更多的烟叶分级职工展示自己的才能，交流了实践经验，涌现出了一批全国烟草技术能手、省局技术能手;推动了云南省烟草专卖局(公司)烟草系统职工学技术、提素质、练好看家本领良好风气的形成，树立烟草系统职工新形象、努力维护“三个至上”的观念在全省烟草公司系统已深入人心。(会议说明：回顾1)
对这次烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，全省烟草公司系统各企业(单位)给予了高度重视，精心组织、积极准备、踊跃参加。参赛选手分别来自全省烟草公司系统12个州市公司和2个直属单位。许多单位在收购繁忙季节，克服人员紧张等因素，在第一阶段进行了内部选拔赛，选手们都非常珍惜本次竞赛难得的学习交流机会，带着单位的重托努力学习、刻苦钻研，业务技能水平有了新的提高。在竞赛组委会的精心组织下，竞赛各项准备工作进展顺利，今天下午，我们的80名选手将前往郑州，参加第二阶段的强化培训及决赛。(会议说明：回顾2)
在这里，我着重强调三点意见：(表意)
第一，本次职业技能竞赛过程要严格按照《国家有关竞赛规则》的规定进行，严格杜绝任何违规现象的发生，并自觉接受大家监督。(表意1)
第二，要尊重裁判、遵守纪律、服从裁决。每位参赛选手一踏进赛场，你们代表的是云南省烟草专卖局(公司)的形象，要以良好的心态和奋勇拼搏的精神风貌，赛出成绩，赛出水平，赛出风格，把云南省烟草公司系统烟叶分级技术人员的精湛技艺和良好的精神风貌展示出来，把优异的成绩和丰富的实践经验带回来并带回各企业(单位)去。 (表意2)
第三，希望竞赛组委会和全体工作人员认真贯彻《云南烟草专卖局(公司)第三届烟叶分级职业技能竞赛规则》和《守则》，坚持高标准、严要求，一丝不苟地把各项工作扎扎实实做好，恪守职业道德，始终坚持“公平、公正、公开”的原则，为本次竞赛搭建一个好平台、创造一个好环境;也希望通过此次职业技能竞赛的成功举办，在全省烟草公司系统深入掀起学习业务知识、钻研业务技能的新高潮，以提高业务技能为目标，以搞好本职工作为目的，为云南省烟草公司系统持续、健康、稳步发展做出更大贡献! (表意3)
最后，预祝本次竞赛取得圆满成功!祝各位参赛选手取得优异成绩!(表情)
案例国家烟草专卖局副局长何泽华在中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛上的开幕词
尊敬的各位领导、各位嘉宾、女士们、先生们：(敬称 )
大家上午好! (问候 )
“中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛”今天在红塔集团召开了。 (表事 ) 我谨代表大会组委会，向前来参加论坛的各位领导、各位嘉宾表示热烈的欢迎! (表情 )向支持、关心“高层论坛”的各界人士表示衷心的感谢! (表情 )
这次活动，是由国家烟草专卖局、中国烟草总公司和云南省委、省政府共同举办，云南省中烟工业公司和红塔集团承办。举办论坛的主旨在于：在十七大精神的指引下，全面贯彻落实科学发展观，认真总结中国烟草行业的改革发展成果以及“红塔山”等品牌的发展经验，鼓励企业进一步做大作强核心品牌，促进中国烟草行业总体竞争力的提升。通过总结经验、展示成果、深化认识，进一步明确中国烟草行业未来的改革方向和发展目标。(本次会议主题、任务介绍)
云南省委、省政府对此次活动高度重视，白恩培书记、秦光荣省长等领导下午将亲自出席，程映萱副省长将全程参加此次论坛。出席本次论坛的还有云南省改革和发展委员会、经济委员会、财政厅的领导，玉溪、楚雄、大理三市州的市州长以及新闻媒体的各位朋友，我谨代表国家烟草专卖局、中国烟草总公司向云南省委、省政府对中国烟草长期以来的关心、支持，对本次论坛的高度重视表示衷心的感谢!向前来参加论坛的各位领导、各位嘉宾表示热烈的欢迎!
(表情 )
现在，我宣布：“中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛”正式开幕! (表事 )
本文思维模型：
一、开头：表情(问候、感谢)
二、主体：表事、表情
1、会议背景?(缺乏背景感、时代性、主流感、敏感性)
?(缺乏连贯性、趋势性)
3、本次会议主题、任务介绍
4、表情
三、结尾：表事(希望)
欢迎辞
表情——表事——表意
开头：表情(欢迎、问候)
主体：表事
1、地区、城市或单位基本情况介绍
2、会议主题背景介绍
3、本单位相关工作情况介绍
结尾：表意(希望)
对会议的希望、祝愿
欢迎辞
尊敬的克明副局长，国家烟草专卖局的各位司局长，各位代表、同志们：
在我们全省上下掀起学习贯彻十七大精神热潮、奋力推进四川经济社会又好又快发展的关键时刻(背景)，全国烟草行业质量体系建设研讨交流会在山川秀美的都江堰隆重召开(表事) ，这是中国烟草全面提升企业管理水平、提高整体竞争实力的一件盛事，也是推动四川烟草行业创新管理、实现发展新跨越的难得机遇(意义) 。在此，我谨代表中共四川省委、省政府向会议的召开表示热烈的祝贺!向参加会议的各位领导、各位代表表示热烈的欢迎!(表情)
四川，地处中国西南腹地，长江上游。自古就有天府之国的美誉，这里，沃野千里、江河纵横，历史悠久，钟灵毓秀。这里，风光无限，旅游资源得天独厚，“童话世界”九寨沟、“人间瑶池”黄龙、“佛教圣地”峨眉山-乐山大佛、千年水利工程都江堰、古蜀文化遗迹三星堆等等，驰名中外，美不胜收。这里，人杰地灵，巴蜀文化璀璨夺目。唐代诗人李白曾从这里杖剑远行，杜甫曾在此地望月怀乡;陈子昂、白居易、苏东坡、郭沫若等一代名人，在这里留下了千古佳句。这里，物产丰富，是全国的农产品供应大省，国家最大的粮、油、猪生产基地之一，川菜、川酒、川茶在全国乃至全世界享有盛誉。这里城市清新，人民纯朴，社会充满生机和活力。(地区基本情况介绍：历史文化)
在四川这片热土上，我们紧紧抓住国家西部大开发的机遇，大力实施跨越式发展战略，着力培育电子信息、水电、机械冶金、医药化工、饮料食品、旅游6大支柱产业，经济社会发展突飞猛进，综合经济实力不断增强，今年，全省国民生产总值可望突破万亿大关，将再次抒写四川历史上最为精彩的篇章。当前，四川正坚定不移地以十七大精神统揽全省工作，深入贯彻落实科学发展观，紧紧围绕省第九次党代会确立的“坚持科学发展，构建和谐四川”的主题，认真落实“奔富裕、求发展、促和谐、树新风”四项任务，努力推进“四个跨越”，由传统农业向现代农业跨越，由工业大省向工业强省跨越，由文化大省向文化强省跨越，由旅游资源大省向旅游资源强省跨越，加快富民强省全面小康的进程。 (地区基本情况介绍：当代省情)
我们不会忘记，今年8月中旬姜成康局长来川视察时做了一系列讲话和指示，明确提出把
四川烟叶打造成全国重要的战略性优质烟叶生产基地，把“娇子”培育成全国性重点骨干品牌，为我省“两烟”发展注入了强大动力。(表情1)
我们不会忘记，最近克明副局长在百忙之中两次来川，上月中旬，出席了百万箱娇子工程启动仪式，对我们今后的工作提出了希望和要求，今天又现场指导企业管理工作，让我们倍受鼓舞，更加坚定了建设“两烟强省”的信心和决心。 (表情2)
我们不会忘记，在建设全国优质烟叶基地的进程中，在做大做强“娇子”品牌的战略中，各省市烟草行业对四川烟草给予了全力支持和大力帮助。 (表情3)
借此机会，我再次代表四川省委、省政府，向长期支持、关心四川烟草发展的国家烟草专卖局领导和各省市烟草行业表示最衷心的感谢! (表情4
万里征程，催人奋进。烟草行业是我省重要的财政支柱。省委、省政府将坚定不移地支持烟草工作，支持省烟草专卖局(公司)和川渝公司的改革与发展，进一步推动四川“两烟强省” 战略的实现。希望四川烟草专卖局(公司)和川渝公司以这次质量体系建设研讨交流会为契机，再接再厉，再鼓干劲，强化管理，提升水平，不断增强四川烟草总体竞争实力。同时，恳请国家烟草专卖局一如既往地关心、支持四川烟草的改革发展，请各省市烟草行业继续支持帮助四川“两烟”做大做强，推动四川烟草实现新的跨越。 (表意1)
最后，祝本次会议取得圆满成功!祝愿烟草行业实现新的发展，再创新的辉煌!祝各位领导、各位来宾在川期间生活愉快、身体健康、万事如意! (表意2)
谢谢大家! (表情)
致 辞
表情——表事——表意
开头：表情(祝贺、感谢)
主体：表事
1、目的
2、意义
3、前景
结尾：表意、表情(希望)
案例：
中国烟草博士论坛主持人赵百东先生的致辞
根据2002年广州中国烟草博士论坛的倡议以及国家烟草专卖局副局长、中国烟草学会理事长潘必兴同志的指示精神，在各方面的积极支持下，经过半年的精心筹备，中国烟草网上博士论坛终于开通了。我作为中国烟草博士生的一员和代表，对此表示热烈的祝贺!(表情)
“论坛”将成为国内外烟草科技人员之间加强了解、增进友谊和扩大合作的纽带，办好“论坛”，将给广大烟草行业具有博士学位和正在攻读博士学位的科技人员，提供为一个更加自由、灵活和便利地进行思想交流、学术讨论和展示才华的舞台。 (表事1：意义)
经济全球化、控制烟草运动、深化改革烟草体制、卷烟产品降焦减害、研发中式卷烟产品、推进信息化步伐、提高中国烟草总体竞争实力等重大课题给我们带来了新的发展机遇与挑战。我们要以“三个代表”重要思想为指导，从烟草行业深化改革与平稳发展的大局出发，围绕烟草发展的重大课题，提倡“百花齐放，百家争鸣”的方针，以“论坛”为阵地，积极提出问题、认真思考问题，进行学术和理论的创新。通过“论坛”反映我们的心声、要求、希望、意见、想法、建议，让博士们活跃的思想在行业内发挥先导前瞻作用，为烟草行业的长远发展提供思想支持与理论基础，为中国烟草走向世界作出我们的贡献! (表事2：目的)
中国烟草行业在党中央、国务院的领导下，取得了举世瞩目的成就。随着人类已经迈入了新的世纪和新的千年，烟草行业面临深刻变化，我们处在中国烟草发展的关键时期，这是呼唤人才的时代，也是烟草英才搏击风浪、施展才华的时代。可喜的是已经有了70多位博士生加盟中国烟草事业。这是烟草行业的希望与未来，但是创造美好的未来还需要我们全体的共;同努力与开拓创新。(表事3：前景)
我受中国烟草学会的委托，将尽全力为办好论坛奉献自己的绵薄之力。让我们携起手来，为烟草行业持续、平稳、健康发展，为开创烟草科技美好的明天而积极努力。 (表意)祝愿“中国烟草博士论坛”不断发展壮大! (表情)
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我叫**，今年33岁，大专文化，中共党员，助理工艺师。87年技校毕业分配进厂，现为一车间制丝班班长。
进厂十八年来，我一直与烟叶、烟丝打交道，长期在制丝车间工作。常烟不断壮大，我也由当初的懵懂少年成长为一名成熟的基层管理骨干。工作中，我始终立足本职工作，大胆创新，特别是在联合工房工作期间，积极探索生产组织、设备保养、现场管理的最优管理模式，积极实施“5S现场管理法”，创造了整洁有序的生产环境，较好的向外界展示了联合工房的窗口形象。三年来，制丝线在我的带领下，烟叶单耗逐年下降，现为36.23kg，达到行业先
进水平，为企业，创造了可观的经济效益。由于工作成绩突出，今年我所管理的制丝班被车间推荐为“特殊贡献集体”侯选单位。 今天，我竞争的岗位是物资采购处业务员，坦然接受检验，自认为有三个方面的优势：
首先是经历与能力优势。我认为自己具备担当此任所必须的经历和能力。我一直在制丝车间，从挡车工干起、做过修理工、设备管理员，特别是在班长和调度的工作岗位上工作后，进一步加深并强化了我对制丝工艺的熟悉程度，熟悉烟叶的物理特性与管理使用，对产地、等级的鉴定也有一定的了解，有助于适应新岗位的需要。
此外本人从事制丝生产与管理多年，积累了丰富的与人打交道的经验，培养了我吃苦耐劳的优良品质，雷厉风行的工作作风，具有较强的分析问题、解决问题的能力，具有很好的协调与管理能力。 其次是年龄优势：我今年33岁，精力充沛、喜爱忙忙碌碌的工作，思想活跃，接受新事物较快，工作中能发挥主观能动性，让我能够为新岗位工作的开展尽全心、出全力。
第三、我具有烟叶业务员所要求的道德品质。在工作中，我始终坚持诚实、正派的做人宗旨，能够与人团结共事。尊重人、关心人，乐于成为大家的知心朋友，能较好的把握情与理的关系，上下级之间的关系，让我在与同事、朋友、领导相处中形成了合力，与各方面的关系协调处理，和睦融洽。
通过竞争如果我能就任业务员这个岗位，我将力争作到如下几点：
1、努力学习，不断进取、充实，勤钻业务，力争快速进入业务角色，为企业严把原料关。
2、坚持党性原则，提高党性觉悟，不断加强自身价值观与世界观的修养。
3、尊敬领导，团结同事，营造良好的工作氛围。
各位领导、各位评委，我深知原料是企业发展的第一要务，烟叶业务员的责任更大。如能成功，我定会尽全力作到最好。最后，在新的一年到来之际，祝在座的各位：“新年快乐，工作愉快!”
谢谢大家!