高考英语书面表达

第一篇：高考英语书面表达十篇

2011高考英语书面表达预测-俗语写作

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2011高考英语书面表达预测-俗语写作

——成功源于付出

根据下面中文提示写一篇150词左右的短文。

俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作。

The early bird will catch worms

【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习和当今的教育密切相关的话题。一些俗语具有教育意义。2010年有些省份可能对考生进行人生规范、立志等方面有关的俗语进行考查。

【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文，给出的要点虽然不多，但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历，谈出自己对此的感受即可。

【参考范文】

The early bird will catch worms

An old saying “The early bird will catch worms” reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.

For example, the Chinese athletes’ excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don’t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they can’t compete with others and get more medals.

Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldn’t pass the exam, for I wasn’t prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didn’t study more hard, so I failed.

In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.

第二篇：短时间提升高考英语“书面表达”有技巧

在复习迎考的冲刺阶段，如果能科学合理安排训练，并掌握一定的应考策略，那必定会起到事半功倍的效果。就英语考试中书面表达部分的备考和应考策略，给考生一些建议：

一、备考方略

1、解读“说明”。书面表达既要求考生具备扎实的词汇语法功底，又要求考生具备较好的语篇表达能力。今年《考试说明》在书面表达部分增加了一篇漫画示例，要求考生根据对所给漫画的理解，描述他们可能的做法，许多学生在做这类题材的书面表达时感觉困难较大。其实，这类题材的文章可采用3段式：第一段描述漫画，提出漫画中揭示的问题;第二段分析问题的成因或问题可能导致的不良后果;第三段谈个人看法或建议。此类作文常用句式有：(开头段)From the picture we can see that __(描述漫画中的情景). What is illustrated in the picture is __(提出漫画所揭示的问题). (中间段) There may be__(2 or 3)__ reasons responsible for / accounting for/ contributing to this phenomenon. (结尾段) As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be taken to __。

2、有效训练

要在书面表达中得高分，词汇是保证，语法是基础，句型是关键。

在短时间内提升谋篇能力和遣词造句能力的有效方法是：掌握必要的“启、承、转、合”常用词句。如：“启”——创造良好开端。常用表达“启”的过渡词语和词组有：in the first place等。 “承”——顺势承上启下。常用表达“承”的过渡词语和词组有：in addition;besides;in other words等。“转”——巧妙转折过渡。常用表达“转”的过渡词语和词组有：but, however等。“合”——完美结束段落或全文。常用表达“合”的过渡词语和词组有：in a word等。

二、应试技巧

有了前期的充分准备只是成功的一半，考生们还必须要有一定的应试策略才能确保最后取得高分。做题时考生们应该注意以下“五要”：

1、审题要准确。

2、构思要清楚。

3、语言要规范。

4、书写要清楚。

5、检查要仔细。英语写作能力的提高既需要正确方法的引导，更需要有一定量的训练。训练有助提高遣词造句的能力，只要准备充分，应试方法得当，考生们在书面表达中获得高分或满分也并非神话。

第三篇：高考英语书面表达热点话题及范文

(六)

抗震救灾，众志成城

1、考题示例

假设你是李华，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，作为校学生会主席，你决定给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信， 主要内容包括：

1、得知四川发生突如其来的特大地震灾害，心情非常难过;

2、看到你们表现得非常镇定、坚强，感动得热泪盈眶;

3、患难见真情，全校师生向你们表示慰问的同时，共计捐款12万元;

4、美好家园可以重建，希望你们要看到希望、充满信心。 参考词汇：捐款 make a donation to I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. A better hometown can be rebuilt. Therefore, never give up whatever happens. Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!

高考英语书面表达热点话题及范文

(五)

观光旅游、景点导游

1、考题示例

假设你是李华，你是一名奥运会志愿者，你将带领一个来自美国的奥运旅游团游览某城市一著名的旅游景点---XXX。请用英文写一个关于XXX和活动安排的口头导游词，主要内容包括：

1、欢迎来到XXX城市，我很高兴成为你们的导游;

2、XXX是一个具有悠久历史的城市;

3、XXX是XXX市的历史性建筑，是XXX的发源地;

4、“XXX”已经成为世界文化遗产;

5、祝愿大家在XXX玩得开心。

2、参考范文

Ladies and gentlemen I feel honored to be your guide for the one-day tour to the XXX. First of all, on behalf my travel agency, I’d like to extend my welcome to all of you. Our schedule for today is to visit the famous scenic spot --- the XXX, which is the historic architecture in the city of XXX. As the origin of XXX, the XXX has become the world cultural heritage. I’m quite sure that you will be impressed by the beauty of the royal construction and the long history of the city as well. Wish you have great fun during the whole day!

高考英语书面表达热点话题及范文

(四)

迎奥运、讲文明、树新风

1、考题示例(1)

为迎接奥运会在中国举行，请写一篇关于讲究文明礼仪的倡议书，具体内容包括：

1、讲究文明礼貌是中华民族的传统;

2、面对外国友人应热情大方、彬彬有礼;

3、要坚决杜绝公共场所大声喧哗、拥挤打闹、随地吐痰等不文明行为;

4、奥运即将召开，我们将代表中国形象。 参考词汇：喧哗 uproar

2、参考范文(1) My dear fellow students, The Olympics are just around the corner. Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy. We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people. In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics. Beforeforeign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly. In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden. In a sense, each of us will not simply stand forourselves but stand for China. Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

高考英语书面表达热点话题及范文

(三)

奥运精神

1、考题示例

仔细观看下列海报，写一篇短文阐述图中所表达的奥运精神。 要求：表达连贯，可适当发挥想象，100词左右。

参考词汇：羽毛球 badminton 橄榄忮 olive branch 接力棒 baton

2、参考范文 Olympics in Posters There are two people in either posters, each of which tells something about Olympic spirits.

In the first poster, two badminton players hold one gold medal together, which suggests that cooperation always comes first in Olympics. Although all the players struggles to be higher, faster, and stronger, the teamwork usually plays a very important role in a lot of events, such as football, group gymnastics and relay races. In the second poster, in the relay race one athlete is passing an olive branch, instead of a baton, on to the next one. What does it mean? It shows us that the Olympics mean more than just competition. Peace and friendship are also part of the Olympics!

高考英语书面表达热点话题及范文

(二)

奥运与健身

1、考题示例

请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇报告，描述奥运会给中学生生活带来的变化。

迎奥运之前迎奥运之后 学校每周两节体育课，并且有时被文化课占用每天一小时体活课，师生一起开展户外活动 学生只顾学习，忽视运动锻炼重视锻炼，认识到身体好可以促进学习 参考词汇：忽视 neglect

2、参考范文

As the form reflects, with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games’ drawing nearer and nearer, some positive changes have taken place. Before that, each week, only two so-called PE lessons were scheduled, during which sometimes we were actually having lessons such as Chinese, Math, Physics and so on. Most of us, who mainly cared for our studies, always neglected physical training.

高中世博会英语作文 魅力上海，闪耀世博

Throughout its existence of more than 150 years, the Expo will bring new knowledge from a specific period of time and trend of development, reflecting the human civilization. The main attractions of the first session of the World Expo in 1851 in the Crystal Palace in London: almost 500 meters long palace built of cast iron and glass. Subsequently, the participating countries will offer similar advantages to introduce from time to time every few years. Today EXPO is the economic and cultural Olympiad of the world, a competition among nations, as well as among exhibitors from the private sector on a given subject. At the same time, it is about marketing countries internationally. Expositions of the first category last a maximum of 6 months and may be held on an enormous area. But at a time when information as well as goods can be had through the internet and other technologies, they remain a place of rendezvous and of authentic experiences.

第四篇：高考英语书面表达书信和通知辅导教案

【题例一】 书面表达：(NMET1999) 假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith 先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，

听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图(图片无法显示，见《高考纠错本 英语》一书，下同)，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化。

注意：1.回信须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯。 2.词数100左右。

Dear Mr Smith, I’m glad to receive your letter.①Yes,you’re right,in the past three years great changes happened in my school. There ②is only one school building in my school three years ago,but now,there is another new building ③at the east of our school and a library ④at the weast ⑤where used to be my playground.The new playground is built ⑥ out of my school age.⑦So my school becomes larger than before.Also around my school there are lots of trees which are planted by ourselves. ⑧Now,my school becomes large and beautiful.I hope some day you can come to my school.⑨We’ll welcome you! Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【误点及纠错】

1.短语句子不符习惯 【纠错】本文要点基本齐全,但在表达中有些层次不清,且有多处语法和用法不当的错误. ① 第二句话Yes, you’re right, in the past three years great changes happened in my school.中,有用词搭配错误，change 不能与happen一起使用，happen应改为take place,而且此处时态应该用完成时和时间状语in the past three years呼应。改后的句子为：Yes, you’re right, in the past three years great changes have taken place in my school.② 第二段第一句中is 应改为was.③ at the east of our school 应改为 in the east of our school.④ at the weast应改为 in the west, weast 是拼写错误。⑥ age是明显的拼写错误，应该是gate,这种错误应尽量避免;out of my school gate 指的是大门外，不妥。把out of 改成in front of 或outside较好。 ⑧ Now, my school becomes large and beautiful这句话可改为：Now, my school become more and more beautiful.理由同⑦。⑨We’ll welcome you ! 应改为:You are welcome! 又如“题例二” ③ get to 是固定词组。⑤write down是固定词组，意为“记下”。⑥“在吃午饭时”，应用介词短语。⑧“to one’s joy”是固定词组，意为“令某人高兴的是。” ⑨another意为“又一”。

又如“题例三” ①raise 相当于lift,指把某物位置升高;improve相当于http:// become better,意为“改进;提高”。⑤按英语习惯，表达“欢迎某人做某事”时，经常把welcome用作形容词。

又如“题例四”⑦can’t常用来表示“能力;可能性”，此处最好用shouldn’t。

2.上下文缺乏逻辑

【纠错】⑤ where used to be my playground 中存在逻辑错误，应改为：where our old playground used to be . 3.结论不当

【纠错】⑦ So my school becomes larger than before 这个结论不太恰当，学校不会因为操场的迁出而变大，况且在原操场处又建了图书馆，这句话应去掉。 参考范文：

Dear Mr Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building---our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some day. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【题例二】书面表达：

用日记形式记一次有意义的旅行。

提示：1.时间：2000年4月16日，星期天;2.天气：晴;3.人员：你班全体人员;4.地点：森林(乘车两小时到达);5.活动内容：记录看到的动植物，野餐，检验河水，看看是否有污染。 要求：词数不少于100词。 习作：

Sunday, April 16,2000 Fine This Sunday(Today①) our class organized a trip to a forest. We went by bus and it takes(took②)us two hours to get to③) the forest. When we arrived, we walked through the forest separately. While we were walking, we (we④) recorded all the wildlife and plants we could see in the forest (as we walked).When we found an unknown plant, we wrote (it down⑤) in our notebooks. Lunch(At lunch⑥) time we made a fire in the open and cooked the meal over it. After lunch, we came to a river and tested the water to see if it was polluting(ed⑦).Late in the afternoon we returned. In(To our⑧) joy, we not only learned about some wildlife and plants, but also enjoyed http:// ourselves very much. I hope I’ll have other(another⑨) chance to go out for a more interesting outing. 4.时间状语误用

【纠错】①日记记述的是当天发生的事情，故此处状语使用“Today”更准确。 5.时态误用

【纠错】②日记多用过去时，与上下文时态一致。 6.缺乏句子间的连接成分

【纠错】④此处用as引导状语从句，意为“一边„„一边”。 7.时态和语态误用

【纠错】⑦“检查河水是否受到污染”，从句中应用被动语态。

【题例三】书面表达：

英语学生会将举办英语演讲比赛，请用英语起草一份通知(notice).通知包括以下内容：

演讲时间：下周六下午三点 地点：201室

题目：自定，演讲时间不得超过10分钟。 报名办法：向班长报名(sign up)

评判及奖励：邀请五位教师任评委(judge),获前十名的参赛者(contestant)获奖

举办单位：学生会

写通知日期：2002年5月18日 习作： Notice May 18, 2002 In order to raise(improve①)the student’s ability to speak English, the Students’ Union of the English Department will hold an English contest in Room 201 on Saturday at 3 p.m.② next week. Those who are willing to take part in it sign up with the monitors now. Every contestant can speak about the (any③)subject within ten minutes. Five teachers will be (invited to be④)judges. The first ten winners will be given awards as an encouragement. Welcome all(All) the students(are welcome⑤)to be present at the contest. The Students’ Union 8.时间顺序不当

【纠错】②当句子有两个时间状语时应先说具体的，即先说小的，后说大的。 9.内容要点遗漏

【纠错】③根据提示，演讲者可自选任何一个主题。④句中应表示出“邀请”字样。

又如“题例四” ③ 本通知是在上语音课之前，科代表在教室里发表的，所以动词应用go。④there本身即副词，不必用in。 【题例四】书面表达：

假如你是英语科代表，在去语言实验室上听力课之前，向全班宣布注意事项：

http:// ①请提前5分钟来语言实验室;②换鞋进语言实验室;③除教材外不要带其他东西;④按老师指令做，不要随便动机器;⑤课堂上只许讲英语，不许讲汉语;⑥可以复制听力材料;⑦课后关机，按顺序离开实验室。 注意：

不要逐条翻译，以口头通知形式写一篇短文。字数：100字左右。

通知开头已给出：Hello, everyone. May I have your attention, please? Hello, everyone. May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you.①

When we have classes in the sound lab, please go (be②)there five minutes earlier. Change your shoes before you come(go③) into the lab. Don’t take anything into the lab except your textbooks, Once you’re in④ there, follow the teacher’s instruction(s⑤).Don’t touch the machines unless the teacher tells you(to⑥).In class you can only speak English. You can’t(shouldn’t⑦) speak Chinese. You can use the machines to make a copy of the⑧ listening material. When class is over, turn off your machine and leave the lab one by one. That’s all. Thank you .(这是口头通知常用的结束语。⑨) 10.用词不当

【纠错】①文章开场白写得好，符合口头通知习惯用语，上下句衔接自然。②此处用be或get，语义表达才更确切。⑧此处不必要使用定冠词。 11.单复数不一致

【纠错】⑤instruction在作“指示;说明;指令”解时，应使用复数形式。 【整合练习】

I).下面6幅画描述了5月9日中午你和父母，姐姐在动物园一起午餐时所发生的

事情。根据这些图画用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1.日记应包括图中要点，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯。 2.词数：100个左右。

3.日记的开头已写好，不计入总词数。 May 9, Sunday Fine This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo„ 生词：废物箱 litter-basket

II) .假如你是南京某中学学生李华。“十一”国庆节将至，你校外籍教师Alex打算利用“十一”长假外出旅游，请根据下面的图例和中文提示用英语写一封信，为Alex提供旅游建议。 日期活动安排

10月1日上午8：00从南京出发，下午游览天安门广场 10月2日登长城

10月3，4日游览颐和园;逛商场，购物

http:// 10月5日登泰山

10月6日早上看日出，下午返回

注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容，要点，可适当增加细节，使其连贯，通顺。 2.词数：100左右。

3.信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Alex, Here is my suggestion about your journey during the long National Day holidays„

III).假如你叫李明，你有一位英国网友名叫Tom，他听说过中国的故宫，但知之不多，于是给你发来了email，请你给他介绍一下有关故宫的一些情况。请你根据下面提供的一些要点给他回一封电子邮件：

1. 故宫(the Palace Museum)又叫紫禁城(the Forbidden City)。它于1407年开始修建，二十万人花了十四年的时间，于1420年建成。 2. 它所有的宫殿一共有999个房间。在中国“9”这个数字传统地被认为是吉祥的。

3. 现在，每周星期二，故宫免费向中国学生开发。

4. 故宫保存着中国历史上五千多年来的珍宝(precious treasures)。请他亲自来看一下。

IV).假如你是李华，你的邻居张达去年七月毕业于安徽大学，现准备到南方找一家公司任职，而你的表哥恰好是南方一家公司的人事部负责人。现在请你用英语为他写一封推荐信。张达的个人资料如下表： 姓名张达性别男年龄23婚姻状况未婚 政治面貌党员

身体健康，身高1.82米 专业广告设计

特长绘画，打字，英语读写，汽车驾驶 性格特点少言语，细致，耐劳，有创新精神 爱好乒乓球

注意：词数100个左右。

V).假如你是校学生会主席，根据学校的安排，由你给全校同学播送一条通知。内容如下：

1. 10月16日(星期六)下午2：30有一个实事报告 2. 报告人：英国剑桥大学Smith Milton教授

3. 报告内容：东西方不同建筑风格及其对艺术，文化的影响 4. 地点：学校礼堂

5. 要求：所有同学都要参加，准时到场，认真听讲，做好笔记。在听报告期间，如有问题询问，可举手或递纸条给报告人。报告会结束后将分班进行讨论

请根据以上内容写一则100词左右的英文广播通知。 参考答案：

http:// 1.May 9,Sunday Fine This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At noon we had a picnic on the grass. I ate too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich. As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advice. She pointed at the notice, which said, “ No litter.” And she asked me to throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slowly towards us. Suddenly an idea came into my mind. I could feed the elephant with my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seeing this, my sister smiled and said, “How clever you are!” 2. Dear Alex, Here is my suggestion about your journey during the long National Day holidays. On October 1,you may take the 8:00 flight to Beijing. You are to visit the Tian’an men Square in the afternoon. Next day, I suggest you visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next two days, you can go to the Summer Palace, walk around and do some shopping. On October 5,you are to take a train to Tai’an City to climb Mount Tai on the top of which, if lucky, you’ll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning. On the afternoon of October 6,you may return to Nanjing by train. I wish you could enjoy your travel. Yours, Li Hua 3. Dear Tom, It is nice to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something about the Palace Museum. Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It took 200,000 workers more than 14 years to build it. The Forbidden City was finished in 1420.As the largest museum in the world, the Palace Museum holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history. The City’s palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number. Students from all over China can now visit it in groups free of charge every Tuesday. The museum is under reconstruction. I hope you can come to China and take a look at this museum with your own eyes. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming 4. Dear cousin, I am writing to you to introduce my neighbour, who is also my friend, to you. His name is Zhang Da, a Party member. He had studied advertisement http:// design in Anhui University for four years, and in July last year he graduated from the university with good achievement in his study. I learned he wanted to find a job for himself in a company in the south, and I immediately thought of your company. Zhang is a tall young man of 23,and is unmarried. He is good at many things especially at drawing, typing and driving. He also speaks and writes English excellently and he plays table tennis well. He speaks little but he works hard and carefully with the spirit of making innovations. So I think you need such a person. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 5. Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? Now I have an announcement to make. There will be a lecture in our school auditorium on Saturday Oct.16.It is about the different styles between eastern and western architecture and their effects on art and culture. The lecture will be given by Smith Milton, a professor from Cambridge University in England. It will begin at 2:30 p.m. Everyone is required to attend. Please listen carefully and take notes. If somebody has a question, please put up your hand or write it down on a piece of paper and pass it to the speaker. After the lecture, we’ll have a discussion in each class.

Please do remember the time and place:2:30 p.m. Saturday Oct.16,school auditorium. Don’t be late. That’s all. Thank you.

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第五篇：高考英语书面表达感谢信必备开头结尾

感谢信必备开头结尾

开头：

【例句一】我真的不知道如何表达我对你的帮助的感激之情。 I really don’t know how to express my gratitude for your help. 【例句二】我想表达我对你及时帮助的诚挚的谢意。

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help. 【例句三】对你的好客表示诚挚的谢意。 I warmly appreciate for your hospitality. 【例句四】我写这几行文字是为了表达我诚挚的谢意。 With deepest gratitude, I write to you here a few lines. 【例句五】你做的给我们留下了深刻的印象，并且我希望我能对你表达我的感激之情对于那些我们曾经在一起度过的美好时光。

What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with you. 结尾：

【例句一】对你的慷慨的帮助，我必须再次表示感谢。 I must thank you again for your generous help. 【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。 My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. 【例句三】对你无私的捐赠表示感谢。 I am most grateful for your selfless donation. 【例句四】我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表达感谢。祝你万事如意! I, (on behalf of) my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us. May you be blessed in everything you do.

【经典文章】

假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。

提示：1.对老师教学的评价2.回顾在校时你的心情3.对老师的理解和祝愿。 注意：词数100左右。信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy? How I miss you! Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours, Li Hua