雅思高分作文集锦

第一篇：雅思高分作文集锦

雅思作文高分实用

雅思小作文高分模版

小作文结构

开头段1-2句 转述原题

主体段11+X句 每个主体段第一句话概括本段，X句介绍数字

…

主体段N

结尾段1-2句 第一句介绍总数total(如果没有就不写)，第二句作结论

开头段

时态：一般现在时

替换词

proportion/ percentageinformation/ datanumber/ figures

family/ householdmales/ menfemales/ women

influence/ affect(v.) effect(n.)categories/ kinds/ typesdemand/ need

subway/ underground railwaystore/ shopuniversity/ college show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate

国家的替换(如美国，英国等)

主体段

时态：由题目的时间决定

1. 数据按顺序介绍，不要跳跃

2. 4类关键数据：maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend变化趋势，intersection交叉点(线图)

第一句，由图可见：

As can be seen from the table that…

It can be seen from the table that…

We can see from the table that…

According to the xx chart, …

It is interesting to note that…

Noticeably, (Interestingly)

第二句，具体来说：

To be more specific, … = more specifically

To be more exact,… = more exactly

替换词

上升

increased/ an increaserose/ a rise

急剧上升

rocketed (boomed)a rocket (a boom)

下降

dropped/ a dropdecreased/ a decreasereduced / a reduction

急剧下降

slumpeda slump

持平

stabilizedremained / maintained / stayedstable / constant / steady

波动

fluctuateda fluctuation

最高点

peaked atreached the highest point at (as high as)

最低点

reached the bottom at

速度快/慢

rapid rapidly/ slow slowly

幅度大/小

significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly

大约：about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under

到达某个数量

reached/ stood at / arrived at

预期值(将来时间必须用这个写)

A is expected/ predicted / estimated / projected to reach …

分别

respectively

占比

accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided

一些例句：

As can be seen from the graph, the number of … fluctuated during the period of … .

As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of *** from *** to ***

The period between *** and *** experienced a slight rise of …, with the number reaching ***.

It can be seen from the chart that *** accounted for the greatest proportion of ***

As for other categories, …

After that, an opposite trend occurred.

The highest … was A, followed by…

结尾段

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that …

流程图

The process diagram illustrates in *** stages how …

由图可见

In the first stage(picture, period), … / Initially,

In the next step, …

After that(Next/ Then), …

Finally, … (the whole cycle starts over again.)

追加描述

at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows

Therefore, the process diagram clearly shows that …

雅思大作文高分模版 – (1)

立场类文章

开头段

1. As the world continues to increase in complexity, ** (点题目的范围，比如education, crime, environmentalpreservation等) has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.

2. When it comes to whether … (这句从句一定要写对，就是点题) , people hold conflicting opinions.

3. Personally, I strongly think that …

第二段 (你反对的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2个观点)

双边结合：On the one hand, there is no doubt that sth. has certain advantages (disadvantages).

只选择一边立场：One’s first inclination might be to argue that sth. has certain advantages (disadvantages).

第一个观点To begin with, … .第二个观点Moreover, … .

论据部分可能的连接词：

as a result/ to be more specific/ in other words/ for instance

第三段 (你支持的那一方的观点，一般2-3个观点)

双边结合：On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantages it may bring along.

只选择一边立场：A quick look at the following facts, however, may show us a different picture.

连接词注意不要重复即可，如on top of that / besides / apart from

结尾段 (此类文章结尾必须要写)(仅以抽烟好不好为例)

只选择一边立场：Overall, despite the advantages smoking may bring, I think it has more disadvantages in terms of individual health and other aspects. Therefore, people should not be encouraged to take up smoking.

如果为双边结合的，结尾可用not only, but also 连接

如果支持那方有新观点，也可以放在结尾段。

雅思大作文高分模版 – (2)

解决问题类文章

开头段

As the world continues to increase in complexity, **(点题)has triggered a wide public concern and discussion. New solutions to this problem are being proposed, trialed and implemented with ever increasing speed.

This essay aims to analyze the reasons for and potential influences(effects) brought by this problem and tries to give some possible solutions. 一定要看清楚题目问了哪几个问题，cause, effect, solution不一定都问的。

第二段

The causes of the problem facing the world are diverse.

第三段

Obviously, the situation has had various influences (consequences) on our society, (both positive and negative ones).如果没有好的影响，逗号后面就写mostly negative ones.

第四段

Considering these causes, actions should be taken in several fields.

(The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable.) 这句话很好，但不适用所有的题目。

结尾段 (可以不写) 以下两种写法根据题目任选一种

1. In conclusion, I think there are many reasons why …, and corresponding measures should be taken. Only by

concerted efforts of governments and individuals, can this demanding challenge be addressed.

2. Progress is being made. The problem, though, remains the same. Will the change come quickly enough?

第二篇：雅思高分小作文写作步骤指导

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雅思高分小作文写作步骤指导

雅思写作部分的小作文即图表题从其在两篇作文中的“含金量”及字数要求150字来看，地位都不如大作文，所以对于有较好的书面英语表达能力，但总受制于时间不足的考生，可以在小作文处投入相对较少的精力，为了防范大作文来不及写，建议大部分考生可以在实战考试中先写大作文，后写小作文。此外，小作文分配时间决不超出20分钟。

那么怎样才能在20分钟不到的时间里，写出一篇不低于6分的考试作文呢?

可根据官方评分标准描述，有的放矢地选择重点任务突破。从雅思写作的官方评分描述看，每篇作文都将从"Task Achievement" "Coherence and Cohesion" "Lexical Resource" 和"Grammatical Range Accuracy"四方面给出评分，然后再算平均分。这四个方面，后两项完全是一个考生语言综合能力的体现，很难在短期内取得质的突破，当然也决不会因为怯场而语言能力明显下降一个级别。但前两项就和考生的备考及临场发挥有很大联系了，尤其是第一项的"Task Achievement"(任务完成情况)。 而在官方评分描述中，5分和6分也有着本质的差别。

6分：

Address the requirements of the task



(Academic) presents an overview with information appropriately selected 

Presents and adequately highlights key features/ bullet points but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate 

5分：

Generally addresses the task; the format may be inappropriate in places 

(Academic) recounts detail mechanically with no clear overview; there may be no data to support the description 

Presents, but inadequately covers, key features/bullet points; there may be a tendency to focus on details 

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Introduction：

题目改写(引出topic) 对象分类 (表明写作思路) Body：

组别一：共同点(topic sentence) 特点一：(描述+数据) 特点二：(描述+数据)

……

组别二：共同点(topic sentence) 特点一：(描述+数据) 特点二：(描述+数据)

……

Conclusion:

重申主要特征

或指出某个未提及的特点

备注：Conclusion部分可省略。所以如把小作文放在大作文之后写，时间不够可放弃该部分写作，对分值不会有大的影响。

步骤四：检查(1分钟)

此时，不宜做大的修改，把笔误的部分改掉即可。

一般语言水平在大学四级左右的考生，根据本文的步骤，重点关注第一第二步，必能在考试中取得至少6分的佳绩。

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第三篇：雅思教父刘洪波：教育类雅思作文高分范文及点评

雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品

《最简化雅思写作》

8月光芒上市

从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想

完全应对官方四大评分标准

最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板

涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文

幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分

中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐

Most countries spend lots of money on education as they start to recognize its importance. In your opinion which two following subjects are the most important for your people and which one is the least important?

Subject:

LiteratureSports

MathematicsEconomy

Physics History

Music Geography

It has been said that investing in education is investing in one’s future: this is true for both individuals and nations.It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important, the humanities or sciences, as both have value.However, I would like to make a case for the importance of math and economics in this day and age.Let us begin with math.Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields, from physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine.All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without advanced mathematics.To be sure, it will also play a critical role in meeting challenges like global warming and space travel, to name just a few, in the future.

Likewise, economics is a fundamental discipline that allows societies to be stable and move forward.History is full of example of kingdoms and empires that collapsed as their economies declined.Most obviously, we need look no further than the current economic meltdown to see the importance of economics.The jobs and wellbeing of individuals and nations alike depend upon a deeper understanding of this field.

While all subjects have their merit, perhaps Geography doesn’t have the same

importance it once did.After all, in our modern world we have 3-D maps online that allow us to see anywhere with the click of a mouse.But to reiterate, we need a balanced approach to education where we still produce artists and thinkers and historians and so on.

To summarize, math and economics are critical subjects in the 21st century.Governments must do their part to make sure we invest in these key areas and have qualified teachers.By doing so, they will ensure our prosperity and progress.

(294 words)

Harvey点评：

写作观点：数学、经济学重要，地理不重要。所以文章中间三段分别讨论三个学科。

这篇文章题型少见，题目内容对中国考生来说比较另类。说明哪个学科的重要性不难，难的是说明一个学科为什么不重要，还注意到题目中有最高级词汇：the most important, the least important。

我们受到的教育是行业没有三六九等，行行出状元。如果在小学课堂上讨论此类题目，有小朋友胆敢说地理最不重要，老师一定会发飙：“胡说，不要有偏见，各个学科都重要，人类都需要，缺一不可。”于是大家考试不能偏科，长大之后都没有了“偏见”。

而这篇文章就是逼着你写出偏见，让你偏科，还很极端，因为题目中有最高级。

所以我最欣赏的是在本文首段第二句话，在表达个人偏见前的让步：It is always somewhat subjective(主观的) to say which is more important, the humanities(人文学科) or sciences, as both have value. 这句话我相信也是大多数考生看完题目后的第一感觉，但表达不出来。

先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用

词汇

subjectiveadj.主观的

foundationn.基础

bridgevt.架桥，连接

criticaladj.关键的，重要的

meltdownn.彻底垮台

wellbeingadj. 福利，康乐，安宁

reiteratevt.反复地说，重申

短语

invest in投资于

make a case for 提出充分的理由

in this day and age 当今

play a critical role in 起到关键作用

meet challenge 应对挑战

to name just a few 等等 = and so on

depend upon依赖，依靠

allow sb. to do sth. 使某人能做某事

with the click of a mouse 只需鼠标一点

do one’s part to尽自己的职责

key areas 重要领域

三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子

 It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important, the

humanities or sciences, as both have value.

 Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields, from

physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine.

 All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without

advanced mathematics.

第四篇：雅思作文：看电视对孩子影响(高分范例)

Topic: Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children.

Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that using computers can facilitate children’s study, enrich their social life, broaden their knowledge and provide many other benefits. Yet, using computers on a daily basis introduces more problems than benefits on young children.

First of all, using computers everyday causes health problems. We all know that looking at computer screen for a long time will weaken children’s eyesight. Moreover, once a child gets used to this sedentary lifestyle, he or she would exercise less than used to be, and this unhealthy lifestyle will accompany he/she for long.

Secondly, computers usually lead to poor academic performance. It is undeniable that students can use computers to gathering information needed by their study. But do young children really need to use computers to do their homework everyday? We all have the experience that primary school or kindergarten homework can be easily finished by using paper and pens. So most children just use computers to play video games or watch Youtube. These activities will lower their interests on study. After all computer games or funny videos are much more interesting than learning math or history.

Finally, using computers can lead to the result of isolating children in a small world or

discouraging real interactions. An increasing number of children nowadays prefer to stay at home and play computer games or make friends online through social networks, like Facebook, rather than mixing with their peers. These ‘virtual’ relationships are poor substitute for real friendships.

In conclusion, young children can benefit from using computers, but they should avoid overusing computers.

第五篇：2011雅思考试作文集锦

1.咨询信--要求更改课程

Dear professor Moss:

I am Sandy Lee, an undergraduate student of the department of Electrical and Computer Engineering. At the beginning of this semester, I registered one of your courses, African Literature and Culture. It is a two-hour course held on every Thursday afternoon. Yesterday, I received a notice from my department that a major course, Computer Principle, would be changed to Thursday afternoon. This major course conspicuously influences my credits and it is every important to me. Unfortunately, I can not study your course this semester.

Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in next semester. I also heard that another course of yours, China Literature, is held every Friday afternoon. If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet, I will be so glad to participate in your class.

Sorry to bother you, your help will be greatly appreciated.

Sincerely yours,

Sandy Lee

2.作为一名员工，为本饭店的发展提建议

Dear General Manager,

As a staff of Sales Department, I’m very glad to see the rapid development of our hotel. With the coming of New Year, I am writing to you to pre I think more on the further improvement of our hotel—to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.

Firstly, with the development of Internet, more and more people are willing to go to the outside world through the information on Internet. Thus if we could establish our own website and introduce ourselves on it, more friends, especially foreign friends, could know our latest promotion at home whenever they want. Secondly, according to the statistics of World Hotel Association, 33% of clients made hotel reservation through the Internet last year. And the proportion will largely increase in year 2000. Thus if we could introduce reservation system on our homepage, clients

could contact us and make reservation directly. Finally, hotel promotion on Internet could reduce our operation cost greatly.

As someone says that Internet shorten the distance of the world, I believe that the one who could make use of Internet effectively today will be the winner tomorrow. We will get a lot and have a brilliant future.

Yours sincerely,

Livia Lim

3.用纳税人的钱修路，改善交通状况

To construct and maintain roads is a public service administered by the government. However,swheresdoes the money come from? Somebody believe that the government should allocate money from national finance on the road construction; but others think that the roads are constructed for people, so every tax-payer has the responsibility for constructing and maintaining the roads. It is so called“What is taken from the people is used in the interests of the people.”

To the first opinion, since government is the administrative organ, it has

responsibility to do overall plan on those public services of city construction, including constructing the road. They think that the government should do plan and allocate every penny on all things concerning people’s life.

However in reality, the government cannot do all specific plans and money allocations on every detail concerning the society running. It only has the right of macro-adjustment and control. To be specific on the road construction, many people believe that based on the principle above, since the road is constructed for the

convenience of people themselves, every tax-payer has duty to devote a little on the road construction, which is not only for the city overall plan, but also for their own use fundamentally. Once the constructions finish, the roads will be wider and longer, the facilities along the roads will be better in use, by then people could further improve their working efficiency, etc..

As I know, the second opinion is more reasonable and feasible, because it has two advantages: 1. The government could reduce heavy burdens, simplify and make clear the usage of money; 2. Tax-payers are clear about the usage of money they turn over, thus improve the transparency. Therefore, it is a good measure for both sides to allocate money from the tax paid by people on the road construction.

4.遗失信----财物遗失在民航班机上,写信给机场海关请求帮助

Dear officer:

In 01/01/2000, I took flight CA983 from Beijing to Los Angeles. When the flight arrived at Los Angeles, because of my carelessness, I left my handbag, a black leathered bag, on my seat. There are some important things in it, including my passport, ID card, credit card, some checks and one thousand US Dollars. But the most important thing is my business address book, in which record all my clients’phone numbers and appointment agenda in the following two weeks.

Since this bag is very important to me, my friends told me that I should contact your department to seek help, so I write this letter to you anxiously. Hope you and your staff can help me find my lost bag. Your meticulous and warmhearted help will be greatly appreciated.

For information about my lost thing, please contact me in the following ways.Mobile phone: 1390*********

Home phone: 888888888

Office phone: 999999999

Yours sincerely

Will Smith

01/04/2011