高考英语经典作文

高考英语经典作文（共8篇）

篇1：高考英语经典作文

2016高考英语作文经典句型集锦

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英语作文精彩句子集锦

1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。。。更重要

Eg。Nothing is more important than health./ to be independent.

没有什么比健康独立更重要。

2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.。。。

是我所遇到、见到、知道最。。。

Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.

张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。

Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.

友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。

3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.

We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….

我们再怎么强调。。。的重要性也不过分。

Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。

We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.

广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。

4. Only when we。。。。。can we….只有当我们。。。时候，我们才能。。。。。

Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.

只有当我们投身于学习，我们才能获得成功。

Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.

只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。

5. As the saying goes 正如谚语所说

There is a saying that goes,

As a proverb says,

Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

正如谚语所说，“有志者事竟成”。

There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”

有谚语说：“失败乃成功之母。”

As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.

正如谚语所说，“不劳则无获。”

6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…

也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……

7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。

历史上，……的.问题从来没有比现在更加突出。

8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…

也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。

9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。

越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。

10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…

对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论：……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……

★ 高考英语作文介绍信常用句型模板

★ 高考英语作文常用的句式句型

★ 高考英语满分作文解析

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★ 高考英语写作常用的几种句型

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篇2：高考英语经典作文

fish farming is also important, so fresh-water fish can be produced wherever you hive. vegetable waste is used to feed pigs and chickens in the country. gas also is produced by human and animal waste there, and it is used to heating and cooking.

using waste can make the environment around us cleaner and cleaner.

篇3：高考英语经典作文

一、分割定语从句 (朗读并翻译下列句子, 认真查看定语

从句的特点:

1.I was the only person in my off ice who was invited.

2.Do you remember one afternoon ten years ago when I came to see you ?

3.The day will surely come when everybody realizes the danger of pollution.

4.He arrived in Jinzhou in 1984, Where he became a manager some years later.

5.China has produced many great writers over the past ten years , among whom was Mo Yan.

要点归纳:分割定语从句, 先行词余定语从句被其他成分分割时, 首先要根据句子意义确定先行词和定语从句, 然后选择合适的关系词。

二、含有插入语的定语从句

1. Ahead of me I saw a woman who I thought was my aunt.

2.I will hire the man who they say is a good English speaker.

3.The girl who you suppose is honest is her sister.

要点归纳:关系词后含有插入语you think /suppose /believe/imagine/say/guess等地定语从句中, 确定关系词在从句中的成分时, 要先去掉插入语, 然后再确定句子成分, 不要受插入语的影响。

三、定语从句与并列从句的区别

1.MR Li has three daughters, none of whom is an engineer.

2.Mr Li has three daughters, but none of them is a dancer.

3.Mr Li has three daughters; none/they are doctors.

要点归纳:并列句用but , and, 或分号连接;定语句子用关系词来引导, 关系词具有两个作用, 一是放在先行词与定语从句之间起连接主语和从句的作用, 二时充当从句的一个成分。

四、where定语从句where状语从句的区别

1.He left the key where he had been an hour before . (状语从句)

2.He left the place where lived for many years. (定语从句)

3.Rice grows well where there is enough water. (状语从句)

4.I still remember the farm where/on which my parents worked the years ago. (定语从句)

要点归纳:where引导的定语从句用来修饰表示地点意义的名词或代词, 可以改成介词+which;where引导的地点状语从句用来修饰动词, 表示动作发生或存在的地点, 不可以改成介词+which;做题时, 先根据句意确定有无先行词。如有, 是定语从句, 无则是状语从句。

五、定语从句与强调句的区别

1.It is on the morning of May 1st that I met John at the airport. (强调句)

2.It is the factory where /in which John works. (定语从句)

3.It is in Qingdao you’re going to pay a visit to that this kind of washing machine is produced . (强调句)

4.It was in Beihai Park where they made a date for the first time that the old couple told us their love story. (强调句)

5.——Wasn’t it Doctor Wang who spoke to you just now?

——Yes, it was. (定语从句)

要点归纳:定语从句去掉it be …that句子不完整;强调句去掉it be …that句子完整。有时强调句还以省略形式出现例如2就是省略了强调句。

六、定语从句与结果状语从句的区别

1.I have the same computer as you have. (定语从句)

2.She is such a kind girl that all of us like to make friends with her. (结果状语从句)

3.He is such a good teacher as we all love and respect. (定语从句)

4.He is such a good teacher that we all love and respect him. (结果状语从句)

要点归纳:such/the same …as中, as是关系代词, 其后句子不完整。as在从句中充当成分 (主语, 宾语或表语) ;such…that结果状语从句中, 其后句子是完整的, that只起连接作用。

七、that引导同位语从句与that引导定语从句区别

1.The text tells me a fact (that) I have already known. (定语从句)

2 . T h e t e x t t e l l s m e a f a c t t h a t s m o k i n g d o e s h a r m t o people’s health. (同位语从句)

3.The news that he told me yesterday made me surprised. (定语从句)

4.The news that he had passed the exam made me surprised. (同位语从句)

要点归纳: t h a t连接同位语从句常放在抽象名词 (news, fact, idea, suggestion , advice, hope) 等之后, 表明抽象名词具体内容, 中间加be可以理解。同位语从句本身句子完整, that无意义, 只起连接作用, 不在从句中作任何成分, 不能省略, 也不可用which代替;that引导定语从句, 定语从句句子不完整, that是关系代词, 它在从句中不但起连接作用, 同时在从句中做成分 (主语, 宾语或表语) , 做宾语时可以省略, 指物时还可以用which代替, 指人时常用who代替。

八、it, was与that三种句型的转换

1.What is well known to us all is that the 2008 Olympic Games were a great success.

2.It is well known to us all that the 2008 Olympic Games were a great success.

3.As is well known to us all, the 2008 Olympic Games were a great success.

九、结束语

篇4：迎战2009高考英语经典试题

A. whyB. thatC. soD. which

注释:答案为B,考查固定结构。仔细分析句子可知去掉it’s…____后,句子适当调整顺序仍然成立,所以属于强调句型。例如:It is what he said that made his mother very upset。句中去掉it is…that…后仍然成立,属于强调句型。这种方法属于判断强调句型的便捷方法。

2. ____ do the pubs stay open?

A. WhenB. WhereC. HowD. Until when

注释:答案为D,主要考察语境的照应。由题干中stay open可知应该属于延续性动作。译文:俱乐部一直开门到什么时候?

3. 10 percent of the workers’ salary was ____ by the employer for no right reason.

A. kept awayB. kept offC. kept backD. kept up

注释:答案为C,主要考查动词短语的意思区别。A意思:避开,不接近;B意思:雨雪暂时不下,挡住阳光等;C意思:隐瞒,扣下不付,留在后面;D意思:继续,保持。此类试题直接从意思着手即可,尤其在平时学习中应该注意短语动词的特殊含义以及用法,这一点属于近几年的高考热点。

4. When she was awake, she found that she was standing on ____ seemed to be a piece of stone.

A. thatB. whichC. whatD. It

注释:答案为C,测试连词的特殊用法。从结构分析可知试题中含有四套主谓结构,因此需要三个连词来连接句子。但是句子中只有when和that两个,还缺少一个;另外,题干中seemed to be a piece of stone缺少主语,故而所选择的连词应该起双重作用:既引导句子又作句子成分(主语)。例如:What he said is right.

5. ——Your brother is very careful and honest.

——I agree. What he has just done ____ itself.

A. speaks outB. thinks ofC. speaks forD. thinks out

注释:答案为C,主要考查动词的固定搭配。speak for itself/themselves不言而喻,不辨自明,本身就说明问题。例如:There is no need for me to commend his action; it speaks for itself.不必对他的行为进行评价; 它自身就可以说明一切。1994 has been a very good year for us—the figures speak for itself. 1994年对我们是个很好的年头——一看数字便知道。

6. Don’t be discouraged. ____ things as they are and you will enjoy every day of your life.

A. TakingB. To takeC. TakeD. Taken

注释:答案为C,主要测试祈使句的固定结构。通常祈使句可以用于下面的结构:祈使句+and/or+主语+will/can+其它…。例如:Study hard and you will make great progress in English. 努力学习,你会在英语上取得更大进步。Stop stealing or you will end up in prison. 停止偷盗,否则,你早晚会坐监狱的。

7. What limited money the able housewife made full use of ____ such a big family!

A. to supportB. supportC. supportingD. supported

注释:答案为A,主要考查结构的分析能力。一定要排除定势思维。句子译文如下:这位有能耐的家庭妇女充分利用了多么少的钱来支撑一个如此大的家。故此,句子中缺少的是目的状语。

8. Never give a gambler more money than ____.

A. being necessaryB. is necessaryC. it is necessaryD. what necessary

注释:答案为B,主要考查省略。句子中than充当的是关系代词作主语,相当于that或as。例如:You spent more money than was intended to be spent. 你花的钱比打算花的多。句子译文:永远不要给一个赌徒比必须的钱多。

9. ——I wonder why Mr Green hasn’t showed up at the meeting yet.

——I’m not sure, but he ____ in a traffic jam driving here.

A. could be stuckB. might stuck

C. might have been stuckD. must have stuck

注释:答案为C,由答案着手,充分利用上下文。主要测试情态动词和完成时连用表示推测。

10. As he was about to go in, the doors opened and a group of very old people started coming out, ____ the doorway and moving very slowly, helping each other out of the door and down the steps. Ben holds one of the doors ____ for them and stands politely to one side.

A. filled…openB. filling…openedC. filled…openingD. filling…open

注释:答案为D,主要考查伴随状语和形容词表示状态。第一空考查伴随状语。主要应该分清句子结构,找到平行动作。例如:The boys and girls entered the classroom, singing and dancing. 男孩和女孩们唱着跳着走进教室。第二空考查形容词表示状态。

11. Ben reached for the phone book ____ under the pay phone.

A. hangingB. hungC. hangedD. hang

注释:答案为A,主要测试现在分词表示状态。此处,hanging相当于形容词表示状态。例如:He sat there with a cigarette hanging out of his mouth。他坐在那儿,嘴里叼着一根烟。句子译文:本伸手去够挂在公用电话下的电话本。

12. Mrs. Robinson, ____ makes me sick that I said that to you.

A. thatB. itC. allD. this

注释:答案为B,形式主语的测试。句子中make sb. sick意思是:使不高兴,使难过。例如:People like you make me sick. 像你这样的人让我恶心。句子译文:罗宾逊女士,告诉你那件事让我难过。

13. They will act ____ your suggestion today.

A. toB. withC. onD. by

注释:答案为C,主要测试动词的固定短语。act on (one’s) advice/order/suggestion/…按照(某人的)意见、命令、建议等办事。例如:Acting on a friend’s advice, he bought $50,000 of shares in a television company。他按照朋友的意见买了一家电视公司5万美元的股票。

14. The horse was ____ hard to come up from ____.

A. running…behindB. running…the bottomC. pushing…lastD. pulling…back

注释:答案为A,主要考察动词以及介词词义的区别。句子中from behind的意思是:从后面。译文:那匹马努力跑着目的是从后面赶上来。

15. He married ____ himself, but he is happy, and what more is required of a marriage?

A. withB. toC. belowD. above

注释:答案为C,主要考查介词的意思。译文:他委屈自己结了婚,但是他高兴,对一桩婚姻更多的要求是什么呢?

16. Say that I am ____ with her. Is that so terrible?

A. a friendB. friendC. friendlikeD. friends

注释:答案为D,固定短语的考查,be friends with sb.与某某是朋友。例如:My parents have been friends with the Murkets for twenty years. 20年来我的父母和默克特一家一直是好朋友。译文:假如我和她是好朋友。那有那么害怕吗?

17. To what extent will future scientific discoveries ____ the prolonging of the human life?

A. be made possibleB. make possible

C. make it possibleD. be made it possible

注释:答案为C,主要考查动词的固定搭配。注意分析句子的结构。译文:将来科学的发现使人类的生命延长到什么程度变成了可能?由译文中可以看出正常结构如下:Future scientific discoveries will make the prolonging of the human life to what extent possible.

18. ——Would you like to attend the annual conference with me?

——Yes, ____.

A. I’d likeB. I wouldC. I’d like toD. I do

注释:答案为C,主要考查简略答语。英语中的简短回答应该注意适当省略以及上下文的照应。例如:——Why didn’t you come to my party last night?——I had planned to but I had an unexpected visitor. “昨晚为何没来参加我的晚会?” “我本来计划来的,但是来了一个不速之客。”

19. Lee ____ in the election, but he began to come from behind in the last week and won in the end.

A. was losingB. was lostC. lostD. had lost

注释:答案为A,由答案出发可知本试题主要测试时态。有关时态试题首先应该弄明白其基本定义,另外记住某些时态的特殊之处。过去进行时可以表示过去未实现的愿望或打算。例如:She was coming. 她本来打算来的。He was watching the play yesterday, but he was too busy. 他昨天本来要看那场戏的,但是太忙了。

20. The Nanjing Yangzi River bridge is ____ second ____ railway bridge in our country.

A. a…longB. the…longerC. the…longD. the…longest

篇5：经典英语高考作文欣赏2

Learning is one’s own business, which can not rely on others.As we know, learning is a process of accumulating knowledge.It is one’s life-long task, which cannot be accomplished in one move.A successful learner is an independent one, who has both an indomitable(不屈不挠的)will and amazing endurance.He will try to discover his own way of learning.Instead of waiting for the teacher’s help, he will make efforts to create favorable conditions on his own initiative.It will certainly be of great help, if there is good environment, sufficient books and equipment, as well as instructions from teachers and beneficial friends.But even if one has got all these favorable conditions, one cannot be sure to succeed in learning.7

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common occurrence(发生的事情)in our daily life.Whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success or failure.Although everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, sometimes failure can’t be avoided.Different people hold different attitudes toward failure.When faced with it, some can stand up to it, draw a useful lesson from it and try their best to fulfill what they are determined to do.Others, however, lose heart and give in.They do nothing but complain about themselves and objective conditions.As a popular saying goes, “Failure teaches success.” In my opinion, what really counts is not the failure itself, but the proper attitude we should take after it.I trust that as long as we keep to what is right and correct what is wrong, that is to say, learn a lesson from failure, we will be certain to succeed.So I am of the opinion that failure is not a bad thing.8

On Today’s Education

I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on test score.It has become the most important criterion(标准)for college enrollment(入学).A student, however creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college for his total scores are just one point less than required.It is also one of the crucial(至关重要的)factors either in job assignment(分派)or in employment competitions.The competition for high scores among students becomes intense.Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies（策略）to achieve high scores than on acquiring the knowledge.They will play truant(逃学)of some subsidiary(辅助的)courses and skip over the substance which will not be tested on.Teachers are apt(有…倾向的)to give their students high scores.As their job is judged mainly by the students’performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students on or narrow down the

scope(范围)of the exam, even give them the hint(提示)to exams, or favor their students with fighter score.As a result, the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually affects our education results.9

Knowledge and Power

Knowledge and power are the two things most desired by man.There is close connection between these two things.The man having done his best in acquiring knowledge, will easily get a high position and perform it successfully.Power depends on knowledge.Knowledge to power is just like a compass to a ship, by which her sailing is made safely across an unknown ocean.A great statesman（政治家）or a learned scholar can render(give)his good services to his country just because he has perfect and profound knowledge.Power only follows knowledge.A man cannot do anything well unless he has some information as how to do it well.A man will sometimes lose his way in a strange land;an apprentice(学徒；生手)cannotproduce any delicate(精密的)work.Why are these so? Because they are in want of knowledge.If the apprentice wishes to produce good work, he must pay attention to his instructor’s advice.We are all the future masters of our country.Our country needs our services.How can we fulfill our future tasks? To get more knowledge is the only answer.10

Rome Wasn’t Built in a Day

Learning English is like building a house.Laying a strong foundation（打基础）is the first and most important step.In other words, you should read and speak English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases is also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember “Rome wasn’t built in a day.11

Television Addiction

篇6：经典高考英语作文开头结尾

2. This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 4:be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)

3. Compared with A,B……与A比较，B…… 2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV.

4. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩

5. All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子

6. All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马

7. A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半

篇7：高考英语作文经典解析（范文）

高考英语作文模版：对比观点题型

（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1． 有一些人认为……2． 另一些人认为……3． 我的看法……

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．

高考英语作文模板：阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．2． 分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.高考英语作文模板：解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1．问题现状2．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).高考英语作文模板：说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

1．说明事物现状2．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3．你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people preferAbecause it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测）

高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一___.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途

径一_.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is _途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..高考英语作文模板：图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is

书写高考英语作文的四步流程

如果你曾经为英语作文日日伤心以泪洗面，如果你曾经面对作文题目苦思冥想头脑里天马行空却不知如何动笔，如果你看到发下来的卷子上英语作文上犯的一些小错误后感到痛心疾首大呼懊恼，那么这套流程对你来说应该有一定参考价值。

第一步，审题。

拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用，开始审题。看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华，还是随便一个名字？ 要议论文还是记叙文？对分几段写有无要求？等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息，都最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错，也许你一开始会记得，可随着时间的流逝，你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢？还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读，这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。

第二步，草稿。

有的同学怕出错，全文都打草稿再誊写，我姑且认为不太可取，毕竟考场时间宝贵，即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做，更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿，我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错，二来边写边想思维不连贯，即使思维连贯也无法审词酌句，展现自己最好的一面，容易后悔。

草稿怎么打？

1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。

2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。

譬如一省作文题： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情

况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。

关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺，和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词（指词的英文表达）写在纸上。有一些词的拼写，譬如学历，可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚，这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来，以免一会因干扰而遗忘。

可能看到聪明这个关键词时，你最初写下的往往是clever，再仔细想想，你是不是又想到了smart, deligient好多词，挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折，你写了but，这会再想想，是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢？挑一个吧。千万别用but.3.句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。

三．正式写。

这样的草稿打完后，就要快快写了。注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，一定要把字写整齐，写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。

四．检查。

篇8：高考作文经典素材的运用技巧

1.凝缩素材, 取其一点。凝缩就是“挤干”素材中与主题无关或关系不大的“水分”, 或舍去细节而概述总体, 或舍去总体而取其细节。往往只攻其一, 不及其余。写作时要根据文章的需要, 对有关素材进行剪裁、加工, 选取主干, 去粗存精, 进行定向叙述, 并且要深入挖掘;其余部分, 即使很精彩, 也应“忍痛割爱”, 绝不手软。请看下面的文章片段:

汉有昭君, 不赂画工, 寂寂深宫她沉婉若水。修心如莲, 终得一日, 天理昭昭。她的倾城姿容醉了天子, 醉了使臣, 以公主之位和亲匈奴。识大体的智慧, 济苍生的胸怀, 沉着大气的风范, 令她成为一首绝唱。直至百千年后, 人们仍可从杜甫的吟诵中瞥见那一抹惊鸿的倩影, 惊艳了岁月。是什么让一位红颜以扶柳之态名留青史?是其内在的德。修心如莲, 凭自我价值在历史长河中熠熠生辉。

——2015年高考湖南佳作《修心如莲》

作者引用了王昭君的例子, 却只攫取了人物“自我修行, 成就美德”的一面, 从而论证“人, 只有自我修行, 提升道德, 才能彰显价值”的观点。素材指向集中, 能起到以一当十的作用。

2.同类叠加, 多人组合。面对作文题, 如果觉得使用单一素材不能有效论证中心, 那么可以将同类的素材有机地罗列在一起, 同类互补, 形成集团效应。或从相同角度来论证中心, 或从不同角度来论证观点。如果能够做到点面结合, 构成有力的群例证明, 则会使论证更有说服力。同类叠加的素材要有共同之处, 风马牛不相及的材料不能放在一起使用;要有共同的指向性, 都指向并服务于中心;句式尽可能一致, 力求营造铺陈之美;防止杂乱堆砌, “摆事实”的同时还需“讲道理”, 要进行深入剖析。请看下面的文章片段:

于是心诚者文如其人, 由笔尖到人心, 一脉相承, 原汁原味。“夜台无李白, 沽酒与何人”, 如诗仙者, 三分诗七分酒;“林花谢了春红, 太匆匆”, 如后主者, 感时伤人。“安然度过生命的秘诀就是与孤独签订体面的协议”, 如马尔克斯, 孤独哲思。

——2015年高考浙江佳作《文字之上》

为了论述“文如其人”的重要性, 文章列举了多则素材, 即李白的酒后赋诗、李后主的感时伤人、马尔克斯的孤独哲思, 这些经典素材都从“文如其人”的方面进行论证, 使得观点具有较强的说服力。

3.正反对比, 对比映衬。在一些人物素材中, 有正面人物, 也有反面人物。写作时, 我们可以将有关联的正反两面的人物进行对比, 在对比映衬中表明自己的主张。“正反对比”主要分“同质对照”和“异质对照”两种。“同质对照”又叫“纵比”, 就是将同一个人物在不同时期、不同境况下的不同情况进行对照, 是同中求异;“异质对照”又叫“横比”, 就是将两个存在差异的人物放在一起进行比较, 好坏优劣不言自明。因为比较的双方形成鲜明的对照, 互为映衬, 所以, 这种方法特别能突出一方面的性质, 具有很强的说服力。在鲜明的对比中, 优与劣、好与坏、美与丑等自然会更加鲜明突出, 从而使文章的中心更鲜明突出, 更有利于突出主旨。运用此法关键在于精选素材, 不能强作对照, 要有可比性, 要确立对照点。“异质对照”所选人物务必是截然相反或有明显差异的;对比映衬应该有主有次, 一般以正面人物为主, 反面人物为辅。如下面的文段:

回溯古代, 杜甫能体验到“会当凌绝顶, 一览众山小”的气概;李白能感受到“黄鹤之飞尚不得过, 猿猱欲度愁攀援”的蜀山之险要;苏轼有对长江“哀吾生之须臾, 羡长江之无穷”的赞叹, 有“莫听穿林打叶声, 何妨吟啸且徐行”的淋雨漫步之悠闲。古人对自然有着无比丰富的体验与感受, 毕竟他们与天地伴, 与日月行。然而, 却缺乏对自然的深刻认识, 不能把握天地之属性, 世界之本原, 树木之纲属, 因而不能利用自然规律, 以造福于人类, 以改造自然。……

再看现代, 不少人仅仅满足于“数字自然”, 缺少对大自然“身临其境”的感受, 难道“百度网上动物园”能体现鹰翔狼啸的气势么?难道一张张图片能尽显花木之美?更难道那一段段生硬的文字能描述出长江之气势如虹?珠峰之直入云霄?现代人也许能说出很多关于自然的种种, 然而当被问及草木之气味、花鸟之姿态时, 却哑口无言。那么, 让我们放下手机, 离开电脑, 走进大自然, 去亲自体验“漠漠水田飞白鹭, 阴阴夏木啭黄鹂”的恬适, 去感受“行到水穷处, 坐看云起时”的淡然……

——2015年高考广东佳作《远近结合, 感受自然》

在以上文段中, 作者将古代人感受自然和现代人感受自然进行了鲜明的对比, 从而得出结论, 我们创新科技, 可以利用其了解、改造自然, 但也不要忘了初始的方式、最原真的体验, 将二者相结合, 我们才能真正感知自然, 享受自然之美。

4.片段组装, 剪辑组合。这种技法又叫“镜头组合”, 即全文由若干个片段组装而成, 一个片段相当于一个镜头, 使文章结构呈现“块状叠加”的特点。每一个片段一个小标题, 或不设小标题, 仅用序号标明层次。虽是组装, 但必须用一根线贯穿每个片段, 使全文浑然成为一个整体。每个片段从不同的层面和角度表现主题, 共同支撑文章的观点。素材的剪辑组合主要体现的是一种强化功能, 具体组合类别可分为以下三类:一是同向强化组合, 取相似素材组合, 使论述说明的对象更具广度和力度。二是异向强化组合, 异中求同, 异中求新, 取相反或相对素材组合, 形成前后对比, 呈现两种价值取向, 突出强调其中一种, 给读者以极强的震撼力。三是延伸强化组合, 取呈递进关系的素材加以组合, 将情与理一步步引向深入。如有一篇高考满分佳作《英雄兴亡论顾虑》的主体部分就由三个片段组装:

巨鹿

阴风怒号, 旌旗猎猎。身后, 是英勇善战的江东子弟;身前, 是如狼似虎的暴秦之师。刚毅的神情现于面庞, 沉重的铁戟握在手中, 神勇的乌骓跨在身下。项羽, 正面临人生中第一次真正的考验!

渡船, 早已凿沉了;铁锅, 早已砸烂了;粮草, 早已告急了;退路, 早已没有了。他知道, 此时此刻, 只要有一丝的顾虑, 推翻暴秦、解救苍生的大业就会付之东流。

“杀!”一声令下, 江东儿郎们如滚滚江水, 杀向对面的秦军!项羽一马当先, 斩将夺旗, 士气大振!他几进几出, 如入无人之境!终于, 威风八面的秦军土崩瓦解!

残阳如血, 战马哀鸣。流血漂橹, 伏尸无数。项羽威风凛凛, 环视战场, 得意之形, 溢于言表。

乌江

匹夫自有得意日, 英雄终有落魄时。

残破的战袍, 疲惫的身躯, 迟钝的乌骓, 乌江畔, 昔日叱咤风云的英雄项羽, 孑然一身。面对冰冷的江水, 他神情凝重。

“霸王, 小人乃乌江亭长。得知霸王战事不利, 特来接应!请霸王快快上船, 汉军快到了!”

“上船?呵呵。”项羽摇了摇头。

“霸王, 胜败乃兵家常事。对岸就是江东, 以霸王的声望, 携数万之众卷土重来, 又有何难?”

“卷土重来?想当年, 我率八千江东子弟, 推翻暴秦, 是何等的豪气!如今, 纵使江东父老怜而王我, 我又有何面目见他们?时不我与, 又何谈卷土重来?”

终于, 他拒绝了亭长的好意。身后, 汉军蜂拥而至。一阵力战, 仅汉军伏尸数百。

可是, 他不想再杀人了。利剑出鞘, 颈项处一道裂口清晰可见。 一个伟岸的身躯, 轰然倒地。

残阳如血, 乌骓长嘶。岸边, 汉军在疯狂瓜分他的身躯。

咸阳

咸阳城里, 刘邦频频举杯, 踌躇满志:“项羽为我所败, 是因为我疑人不用, 用人不疑。韩信、英布纷纷倒戈, 项羽有一范增却不用, 焉能不败?”座下文武百官, 无不连连称是。

韩信垂首不语, 心中暗忖:“假如项羽能勇敢地渡过乌江, 昔日落魄的汉王, 又能在此意气风发到几时呢?”

这篇文章很好地运用了片段组装、剪辑组合法。第一组镜头是“巨鹿之战”的画面演绎;第二组镜头是“项羽自刎乌江”的画面剪辑;第三组镜头由“咸阳城庆功”的画面组成。三组镜头, 集合了项羽的主要人生经历和刘邦、韩信对他的评论, 共同演绎了项羽的英雄悲剧, 实现了时间和空间的大跨越, 使文章具有一种历史厚重感。同时, 三个片段的话题全都指向“顾虑”, 分别从“没有顾虑”和“顾虑重重”两个角度来论证。这种结构的好处是, 上下文无须过渡, 且一目了然。

5.点面结合, 拓宽深度。点面结合就是对一些经典的素材, 有的在“点”上铺开进行重点叙述, 有的则在“面”上进行一般性概述。这种方法就是通常所说的以一二例为主、其他例为辅, 以点带面、点面结合的写法。此法适用于考试时见到话题或题目后, 一时想不到那么多可用的事例, 这时, 可从想到的那些与论点相近或相一致的有限的事例论据中, 选择自己认为较典型、较全面的事例论据稍作详细叙述, 并加以挖掘, 与之相关的其他事例论据则可简笔带过作次要叙述, 从厚度与深度方面加强文章的力量。如下面的文段:

渴求物质的价值观念让人们深陷物欲横流的漩涡。当人们被物质生活绑架的时候, 人们也就束缚了生活的快乐, 每天愁苦于难以满足的无尽的物欲, 逼迫自己选择生命的弯路, 如陈希同、刘志军、周永康等, 走向毁灭的结局也正是因为人生价值不同选择就不同。

于贪官如此, 于社会生活亦是如此。当今社会, 众多本应该踏踏实实做学问的大学教授和科研人员深陷论文抄袭、学术剽窃的泥潭, 在物质利益的价值观念里, 舍弃了精神的追求与渴望, 既失去了学术的灵感, 也丧失了生活的快乐。为了快速获得所谓的成功和名利, 他们放弃了自己本应该坚持的学术道路。……

——2015年高考山东佳作《价值观念决定选择》

文章通过“点”例——陈希同、刘志军、周永康, “面”例——众多本应该踏踏实实做学问的大学教授和科研人员深陷论文抄袭、学术剽窃的泥潭, 采用“点面结合”的方法, 比较全面而深入地论证了价值观念在选择中的重要性。

6.妙引名句, 画龙点睛。围绕写作话题或中心题旨, 利用比较多的名言名句, 去组织文章结构。搜索一下记忆, 我们会发现, 名言精炼, 歌词新鲜, 俗语流行, 以这些作为写作素材, 在文章中巧妙引用古今中外哲人、名家箴言、警语或古代诗人的佳词丽句作为内容, 必能使文章意境深邃, 回味无穷。写作时可以直接引用, 也可以间接引用;可以全部引用, 也可以局部引用;可以浓缩引用, 也可以扩充引用;可以点化引用, 也可以组合引用。如:

由此观之, 过分的强硬与柔软都会导致人格缺憾的产生。真正和谐的自我, 应当如稼轩一样, 有“金戈铁马, 气吞万里如虎”的铁血豪情, 亦有“看美人头上, 袅袅春幡”的刻骨柔情;应当像龙应台一般, 有与儿子安德烈互通书信的慈母情怀, 又有愤而质疑“中国人, 你为什么不生气”的浩然正气。生而为人, 我们既要有对大是大非的恪守, 又应有对小情小爱的珍视;既要坚守住自己的人生准则与态度, 又应有对风花雪月灵敏感知的能力。

梁晓声有言:“以敢憎而与可憎较量, 以敢爱而捍卫可爱。以与可憎之较量而镇压可憎之现象, 以爱可爱而捍卫可爱在我们生活中的发扬光大。”善哉斯言!必要的强硬, 才可守住所真爱的柔软;适当的柔软, 方可凸显出真正的强硬。柔软与强硬虽泾渭分明, 但并非南辕北辙, 事实上, 他们相傍相依。

——2015年高考上海佳作《刚柔相济》