高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题

高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题（精选6篇）

篇1：高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题

2014届高三英语分层辅导资料---话题作文之家庭、朋友与周围的人

一．话题词汇记忆---中英互译

1.堂/表兄弟姊妹________ 2.侄女,甥女________3.侄子,外甥__________

4.友谊,友好_________ 5.家务,劳动_____________

6.主人________________ 7.女主人, 女房东_________8.邻居,邻国_________ 9.附近,邻近__________ 10.女儿_______ 11.长着蓝眼睛的（小女孩）___________________________ 12.心肠好的 _________13.脾气好/坏的_________14.及肩的（头发）________ 15.中年的 ___________ 16.campaign__________ 17.generation gap_________ 18.nurse__________

19.nursery ___________ 20.nearby __________ 21.good-looking(young man)22.在我18岁时_______________

23.获得金牌_______________ 24.过着幸福的生活____________________ 25.在烹饪方面有经验____________ 26.在音乐方面有天赋_____________________ 二．完成句子：

1.___________(出生在)Jiang Su Province, my history teacher is a beautiful woman, _________________________________(有长长的头发和大大的眼睛).2.Not only does he ______________(感兴趣)science , but also he ____________________(有音乐天赋).3.My mother, ________________________(一位中年家庭主妇), will always stand by me and remove the barriers for me whenever I am _________________(遇到困难).4._____________(毕业于)the department of English of Zhongshan University, she _________________________________(继续留学深造)and received a doctor’s degree.5.He is about ____________________________(1.72米高).三．语篇训练：写一篇题为“我们的班长”的短文，简况如下：

她叫李敏，个子高，身体好，很活泼。她各科成绩都好，喜欢体育活动，又能歌善舞。她刚进校时,在英语学习上遇到不少困难。但她不怕苦，不怕难，努力把英语学好。她在课堂上很活跃，课后进行了大量的训练。古语说得好，“不劳则不获”，她的英语取得了很大的进步。她严于律己，乐于助人，是大家学习的好榜样。

Keys:一.1.cousin 2.niece 3.nephew 4.friendship 5.housework 6.host 7.hostess 8.neighbor 9.neighborhood 10.女儿11.blue-eyed(girl)

12.kind-hearted

13.good/bad-tempered 14.shoulder-length(hair)15.middle-aged(man)16.[军]战役,(政治或商业性)活动, 竞选运动

17.代沟

18.护士, 保姆 19.托儿所

20.附近的, 邻近的 adv.在附近

21.标致的(小伙子)

22.at the age of 18

23.win a gold medal

24.live a happy life

25.be experienced in cooking

26.have a gift/talent for 二.1.Born in, with long hair and big eyes

2.show interest in, has a gift for music 3.a middle-aged housewife, in trouble 4.Graduated from, went on going abroad for further studies

5.1.72 metres in height 三.Li Min, our monitor，is tall, healthy and lively.She not only does well in all subjects but also is fond of sports and good at singing and dancing.When she came to the school, Li Min had quite a lot of difficulties with English.But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them.She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class.Just as the old saying goes, no pains, no gains.With great efforts she made much progress in English study.Li Min is strict with herself in her work and daily life and always ready to help others.She sets us all a good example.Keys:一.1.cousin 2.niece 3.nephew 4.friendship 5.housework 6.host 7.hostess 8.neighbor 9.neighborhood 10.女儿11.blue-eyed(girl)

12.kind-hearted

13.good/bad-tempered 14.shoulder-length(hair)15.middle-aged(man)16.[军]战役,(政治或商业性)活动, 竞选运动

17.代沟

18.护士, 保姆 19.托儿所

20.附近的, 邻近的 adv.在附近

21.标致的(小伙子)

22.at the age of 18

23.win a gold medal

24.live a happy life

25.be experienced in cooking

26.have a gift/talent for 二.1.Born in, with long hair and big eyes

2.show interest in, has a gift for music 3.a middle-aged housewife, in trouble 4.Graduated from, went on going abroad for further studies

5.1.72 metres in height 三.Li Min, our monitor，is tall, healthy and lively.She not only does well in all subjects but also is fond of sports and good at singing and dancing.When she came to the school, Li Min had quite a lot of difficulties with English.But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them.She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class.Just as the old saying goes, no pains, no gains.With great efforts she made much progress in English study.Li Min is strict with herself in her work and daily life and always ready to help others.She sets us all a good example.

篇2：高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题

（二）五、个人情感与人际关系 【必备词句】 个人情感

（1）be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安/紧张/孤独（2）be pleased with对……感到高兴

（3）be worried about / worry about 担心，担忧（4）be / get angry with sb.about sth.因某事生某人的气（5）be disappointed at sb.对某人感到失望（6）be confident of sth./ in sb.对某事/某人有信心

（7）We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我们深深感谢你的支持。

（8）It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我们明天必须离开，真是遗憾。人际关系

（1）learn from each other 互相学习（2）promote the friendship 增进友谊（3）improve the relationship改善关系

（4）show love and concern for sb.爱护和关心某人

（5）Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。

（6）A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.精华在线官方微博：http://weibo.com/jinghuaonline 良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。

（7）To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other.要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任。

（8）Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship.只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。

（9）They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。

（10）With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university.在他们的帮助下，我努力学习，成功地被一所重点大学录取。

（11）We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。

（12）With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life.在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。

六、计划与愿望 必备词句

（1）feel like doing想要做（2）be prepared to do准备做（3）decide/ be determined to决定（4）mean /plan/intend to do计划做（5）look forward to doing盼望做（6）have a desire to do希望做（7）long/hope/wish/want to do渴望/希望/想做

精华在线官方微博：http://weibo.com/jinghuaonline（8）He planned to go abroad for further studies.他计划出国学习深造。（9）So I am determined to meet the challenge.因此，我准备迎接挑战。

（10）There’ll be a football game in our school this week.本周我们学校有一场足球比赛。（11）Think twice before you do.三思而后行。

（12）Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人。

（13）Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。

七、节假日活动 【必备词句】 1.中国节日名称

（1）The Spring Festival春节（2）The Dragon Boat Festival端午节（3）The Mid-autumn Festival中秋节（4）New Year’s Day元旦（5）National Day国庆节

（6）International Labor Day五一劳动节

（7）Teachers’ Day教师节（8）Children’s Day儿童节（9）Women’s Day妇女节（10）Tomb-sweeping Day清明节（11）Double Ninth Festival重阳节（12）Lantern Festival元宵节

精华在线官方微博：http://weibo.com/jinghuaonline 2.西方节日名称

（1）Christmas day 圣诞节（2）Thanksgiving Day 感恩节（3）Valentine’s Day 情人节（4）April Fool’s Day 愚人节（5）Halloween Day 万圣节（6）Easter Day 复活节（7）Mothers’ Day 母亲节（8）Fathers’ day 父亲节 3.相关句子

（1）National Day is coming.国庆节快到了。

（2）National Day falls on Monday this year.今年国庆节是星期一。

（3）We celebrated the New Year with a dance party.我们举行舞会来庆祝新年。

八、购物 【必备词句】

（1）shopping mall/centre购物中心（2）department stores 百货商店（3）second-hand stores旧货店（4）discount折扣（5）change零钱（6）cyber ordering 网络订购（7）fake products 假冒商品（8）on-line shopping 网上购物（9）poor/ high quality糟糕/优异的质量（10）poor service 糟糕的服务（11）buy in group 团购（12）wrap up包装

精华在线官方微博：http://weibo.com/jinghuaonline（13）pay in cash以现金支付（14）pay by credit card通过信用卡支付（15）free of charge不收费（16）be all sold out /out of stock售空（17）avoid being cheated 避免受骗

篇3：初中“话题”作文写作之我见

关键词：“话题”作文,切入点,文体,情感

“话题”作文是指以所给的话题为中心, 并围绕这一中心内容进行选材而写出的文章。作文题表面上不含观点, 内容上不予限制, 写作形式也往往体裁不限。这种不拘泥于传统“命题”作文的新写作形式, 是当前一种新的教学理念和对学生写作能力的一种新要求, 正因这类作文显得非常“散”和看似没有要求, 往往使学生写作时感到困惑, 无从下手。如何贯彻新课改理念, 适应新课改要求, 提升初中学生写好“话题”作文能力呢?通过几年的不断探索, 我认为应从以下几点入手:

一、选准切入点是关键

选准切入点。就是指学生在所给的话题范围内, 选择具有代表性的某一方面甚至某一点, 切实展开, 充分发挥, 以表达某一观点或反映某一现象。同一话题, 切入点不同, 文章的选材、结构、立意等呈现形式定也多种多样。如果在作文构思时找到一个很好的切入口, 就为能写出一篇好文章奠定了基础。

(一) 从“点”上切入

作文所给“话题”往往比较开放, 限制少, 题目大, 范围广, 可写的人、事、物、理很多。面对这类话题, 学生难以把握和驾驭, 因此, 大处着眼, 小处着笔, 最好的办法是“化大为小”, 从“小”处切入, 写自己感受最深的一个小方面, 表达独到的见解。如:鄂教版七年级上册第三单元的话题作文“喝彩”, 可写的层面很多, 可以为人而喝彩或为事而喝彩, 为景而喝彩或为物而喝彩;为成功而喝彩或为失败与挫折中的坚强而喝彩;还可以为伟人大事而喝彩或为自己而喝彩等。我们写作时要尽可能收缩到一个“小”层面, 或写为朋友喝彩, 或为父母喝彩, 甚至让笔墨更集中, 专写某次成功, 从某一点上切入, 便迈出了“喝彩”的第一步, 使主题更鲜明。

(二) 从“面”上切入

对于思考空间大、取材范围广的话题, 我们可以宽题窄做, 在标题上做文章, 通过添加修饰语的方式加以限制, 以缩小入题的范围和角度, 从面上化多为少, 化大为小, 化粗为细, 最终确定文意的取向。如:鄂教版七年级上册的第一个作文以“童年”为话题, 我们可以在标题的前面加修饰语, 也可在后面加中心词, 还可前后同时加, 这样话题范围就缩小了。如:童年的趣事、欢乐的童年、那一年的夏天、童年的无知等。话题缩小了, 思路容易集中, 避免了在材料、立意等方面与别人的文章雷同等。

(三) 从“新”上切入

作文所给材料的内涵往往很丰富, 理解角度多样化, 如何将材料用活用新, 可运用一些技巧, 可以从特定的情景, 或就某一句话、某一个细节, 作为突破口, 开口小, 挖掘深, 由此及彼, 引领创新, 做到思维新奇, 见解新颖, 材料新鲜, 层次分明, 内容深刻。如:在写以“生活”为话题的作文时, 我们就可从材料的提取入手, 创新思维, 标题定为《生活的调味瓶》, 以酸、甜、苦、辣等分层依次叙写自己生活中的点滴感受, 甚至将范围定格在初中生活中的点滴感受。从标题的选取到内容的层次, 均给人耳目一新, 这样写出来的文章定是好文章。

(四) 从“实”上切入

对于虚拟话题的作文题材, 所隐含的寓意往往捉摸不准, 难以下手, 这时我们可以化虚为实, 变抽象为具体, 把抽象的话题转变为对某具体问题的议论, 便可有效地避免作文的空泛。如:某年的中考作文以“变化”为话题, 这是一个典型的虚题作文, 学生作文前必须要先锁定一个实体目标, 如果写家乡的变化, 就应考虑是写物质的还是精神的, 如果写精神上的变化, 还应再缩小角度, 写人的思想观念的变化, 并且紧扣时代精神, 把“变化”这个大而宽的话题通过实写一件小事而表现出来。有位考生就以奶奶穿裙子为切入点, 通过奶奶思想观念的变化, 反映经济社会的发展给农村带来的巨大变化。以一个小的“变化”现象, 却反映了当前农村社会观念的不断更新, 避虚就实, 便成了一篇好文章。

(五) 从“情”上切入

作文特别注重真情实感的抒发, 提倡体验生活, 感悟生活。只有写出先打动自己的人或事的文章, 你的真情才会感染别人。如我曾在指导写话题“心事”时, 有位学生满怀深情地在文章中写道, 爸爸妈妈经常吵架, 最后离了婚, 从此使他感到自己孤独和自卑, 以及她对温暖亲情和家的渴望, 反映了他丰富而细腻的内心世界, 催人泪下, 让人震撼, 产生了很强的“情感”艺术效果。

二、选择适宜的文体是重心

“话题”作文文体选择自由, 立意多向发散, 选材范围宽广, 给广大学生提供了“海阔凭鱼跃, 天高任鸟飞”的写作自由, 有利于学生充分发挥自身的写作优势, 展示写作才华, 激发创新意识。在选准文章的切入点后, 学生还应结合自己的选材内容, 选择最适宜的文体来表情达意, 才能够让文章更加有血有肉。选择文体应把握以下几点:

(一) 根据侧重点不同选择文体

有些话题对选择什么样的体裁是有所侧重的, 比如“假如记忆可以移植”的话题作文, 各类文体均可用, 但最好选择记叙文和抒情散文, 如果选择议论文写起来就比较困难;如果以“诚信”为话题的作文, 选择议论文要比选择记叙文等要顺手得多。

(二) 结合自身所长选择文体

对于侧重点差异不大的话题作文, 学生可结合自身特点、特长选择文体。如:形象思维较好的同学可以写记叙文;擅长讲道理、逻辑思维较好的同学可以写议论文;脑子灵活善于讲故事的同学可以写童话寓言、故事新编、小小说等。

(三) 适时运用特殊文体拓宽深度和新意

特殊文体指应用文体和文艺性文体。日记、书信、演讲搞、辩论稿、会议纪要、实验报告、新闻报道、广告等属应用文体;小说、戏剧、童话寓言、故事新编、散文、诗歌等属文艺性文体。在作文时我们运用特殊文体较少, 近些年来, 中考时运用此文体获取高分的学生也不乏其人。为此, 适时运用这类文体或可取得出其不意的效果, 当然运用不好, 也常有很大的风险。学生必须熟练掌握相应文体的特点才能保证效果。

1. 使用特殊文体表达观点更有创意。

如:“缺陷”这个话题, 思路是“维纳斯的断臂是一种缺憾美”。选择议论文比较平淡, 若写成一篇想像文章就比较新奇了, 设想维纳斯当初双臂齐全时默默无闻, 偶然失去双臂后却一举成名, 成为美的化身;或者设想维纳斯的双臂被发现并修复。再如:“环保”这个话题, 思路是“批判人类对环境的破坏”, 既可选择议论文;也可以某地为例写成一篇记叙文;但这两种文体的文章很一般。如果我们以童话方式来写, 让各类动植物具有人的思想感情, 纷纷到法庭来状告人类, 文章就很精彩了。

2. 特殊文体有时能有效地扬长避短。

如:“日记、书信”两种文体具有可记叙、可议论、可抒情, 可自由表达的特点;其结构自由, 不需要复杂的过渡承接;对于写作时文体不太规范的同学也能写好。“戏剧、对话体”两种文体具有不必叙述描写、文章结构也较灵活等特点, 对很适合思路活跃、善于写对话的同学。“童话、寓言、科幻故事”等文体很适合素材缺乏而又善于想象的同学。“故事新编”这类文体适合素材缺乏而又有大量故事原型、头脑灵活的同学。

三、写出真情实感是根本

“文非情不深”, 即文章没有感情就没有深度, 更谈不上感染力。生活乃情感之源, 我们要引导学生用真诚之心去观察生活, 关注身边的人和事, 加深情感体验, 这样写出来的文章才能真正打动读者。巴金说:“我写作, 不是我有才华, 而是我有感情”。只要我们在观察中抓住动情点, 就会发现人间处处有真情:早晨叶片上的一滴露珠、傍晚天边的一抹晚霞、伤心时好友的一句话都可以让学生感动不已。语文教育专家孙绍振说:写作, 贴近生活是不够的, 更重要的要贴近自己的经验, 写自己真正感受到的东西。学生在日常生活中学会了观察、思考、体验和想像, 有了观察所得、思考所获、体验所感和想像所创, 通过平时的积累, 写文章时就会自然而然地流露出真情。

虽然说只要用自己的语言写出自己发自内心的真实感受和认识, 写出来的文章就可达到说真话、抒真情的要求, 但是对于大多数初中生来说, 依然存在一个怎么说事、如何抒情的方法问题。所以, 在实际的作文教学中, 老师依然要指导学生掌握作文表达“真情实感”的一些具体方法和途径。例如, 我在指导写作鄂教版七年级上册第二单元以“心事”为话题的作文时, 我用多媒体配乐式朗读一个有关此话题的文章, 把学生的情感调动起来, 引领学生感悟生活, 挖掘生活中给自己留下深刻印象的人和事, 或者是自己一想起来就心潮起伏的人和事。为了让大家能够更加静心地聆听, 我又建议大家捂上眼睛, 这样会听得更加投入, 并且让几位同学在背景音乐中倾诉自己的感情, 叙说自己感慨最多、记忆最深、情感最炽的往事, 最终唤醒了所有学生脑子里感人的事情。

总之, 初中学生作文水平的提高不能一蹴而就, 它是一个长期积累、感悟和融会贯通的过程。教师要培养他们的写作兴趣, 教会他们写作方法, 就能提高他们的写作素质和写作技能。

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篇4：高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题

高三英语书面表达话题精选句子整理

关于“中国梦想”（Chinese Dream）

My dream is to be enrolled by / admitted into a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country.

Its easier and more convenient for urban residents to have access to modern transportation and enjoy a better living environment along with public facilities.

College students dream to have wellpaid jobs where they can bring their potential into full play.

The government should pay attention to food safety and strengthen its supervision over food so that people can have more pollutionfree and green food.

As for farmers， they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.

As a saying goes， “great hopes make great man”， “where there is a will， there is a way.” The Chinese dream is definitely to make our country powerful in the world， our society safe and harmonious and people happy and cosy.关于“食品安全”（Food Safety）

Food is to us what sun is to nature， so we cant attach great importance to food safety enough and take prompt and strict measures to deal with / address this problem in no time.

The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society， which should be severely criticized and penalized.

In the course of the rapid economic evolution， in order to pursue economic interests maximization， food manufacturers ignore the quality and security of the food product.

The lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.

The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry.

People should restrain their own behavior in order to be mature and qualified citizens in society.

关于“防病救灾”（Prevent Disease and Disaster）

1. Each of us has different living habits. Healthy lifestyle is conducive to preventing disease and can prolong life.

2. Health education also plays a key role in improving peoples health. By giving people more information about health， countries could help people understand the importance of disease prevention and ways to achieve it.

3. In fact， if we face H7N9 in a right way， it wont terrify us and we will be able to get over it. And we can do some things to keep healthy， such as washing hands more， opening the window to enjoy the fresh air， doing more exercise along with eating more vegetables and fruits.

4. Thousands of people lost their lives and ever more people were left homeless due to the earthquake. However， hand in hand， the Chinese people faced the disaster with great compassion and courage.

5. Were to offer survivors from the earthquake not only relief supplies but psychological comfort.

6. Terrible as the earthquake is， it can never defeat people working together. As a student in the disasterstricken area， Im so moved by everyones selfless devotion and assistance that Ive made up my mind to study hard to reward them.

关于“减压减负”（Burden Relief）

Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they cant fall asleep at night. As a result， they feel sleepy in the day time and cant concentrate in class.

Others cant get along well with their parents or with their classmates. As a consequence， they always feel stressed and easily get angry.

We need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life and turn to our teachers for help， including our teacher of psychology.

Good habits of learning and living do contribute to our success. Once a good habit is formed， it will definitely give us power to control ourselves.

Our parents have been devoting all the energy to making sure of our healthy development. Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work.

Listening to childrens ideas and encouraging them to think on their own may help the parents and the children improve mutual understanding and respect.

关于“文明举止”（Civilized Behavior）

1. School safety is the cornerstone of a harmonious campus and a civilized society， which is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the wellbeing of millions of families.

2. Students should be taught to take care of themselves on campus， behave well and act sensibly. And they have to realize that it is better to do well in exams than in arguments and fights because there is no honor in being aggressive.

3. If I have the chance to offer others a hand when they are in need， I will spare no efforts to help them out. Only if everybody devotes their love can we make a better world.

4. We should concentrate more on the education of morality and enforce laws to prevent uncivilized behavior from happening again.

5. To be a good student and a good citizen， we shall not spit or litter things and try to be friendly to others as well as keep away from bad habits， such as speaking loudly in public places or jumping the queue.

6. Im very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers. And I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help Ill be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future.

关于“环保低碳”（Environmental Protection）

1. Living a lowcarbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases， meaning using less energy in our daily life.

2. China is developing quickly， as Im sure you know， but with that development often comes hardship， such as the conflict between economic growth and environmental protection.

3. Governments also need to apply attractive measures to draw citizens to adopt means of public transportation， for instance， to reduce price and improve relevant facilities.

4. The terrible pollutions have done great harm to us as well as to the surroundings， which has aroused public awareness of it.

5. We must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.

6. We must change the past practice of sacrificing longterm environmental health for shortterm rapid economic development， and shift to developing green economy， circular economy and low carbon economy.

关于“合作学习”（Cooperative Learning）

1. By striking a balance between competition and cooperation， youth will feel better about themselves and have a greater desire to participate in future activities.

2. When it comes to cooperation， it helps kids to bridge the cultural differences and promotes mutual understanding among them.

3. I think the reason for my success is because I balance my study and leisure time so amazingly well.

4. We are making great attempt to create a cooperativelearning environment， where we are encouraged to work in groups. Within group work， we are guided to voice our individual opinions， listen to each other and respect each other.

5. Since everyone is a social person， we should unite as one with our partners rather than work individually to build our society more sufficiently.

6. By cooperation， students can share the enjoyment of learning language and feel the happiness of communicating together， which will arouse their hunger for knowledge.

关于“阳光生活”（Healthy Lifestyle）

1. It is sharing with others rather than keeping my worries to myself that has relieved me of trouble and made my studies more efficient.

2. We can say， in a certain sense， competition stimulates peoples interest in work and helps society to go forward.

3. There is no denying that being optimistic benefits us in many ways. It can encourage us to face difficulties bravely and help those around stay optimistic since it helps create an atmosphere that is lively and relaxing.

4. Combining basic traffic safety education with ordinary schooling is a good way to make students aware of road safety.

5. It is honorable to obey the principles and rules of our school and form a good studying and living habit.

6. Only when we have the heart of being grateful can we understand how to love others and how to repay our society.

实战训练篇：

“打造阳光生活，树立民族梦想，传递正能量”已经成为引领我们当前社会发展的新理念，也为全社会所重视与关注。请根据下列要点写一篇150词左右的短文，并谈谈你的具体想法。

A new concept of living a healthy life and realizing Chinese dream has been a hot button，which also has aroused the publics great awareness and concern.

Living a healthy life nowadays means not only having a good lifestyle but protecting the environment scientifically and its everyones duty to be ecofriendly from detail in our daily life. Besides， facing disease and disaster prevention， everyone ought to be optimistic and unite to overcome these difficulties. Furthermore， being civilized in public places is the essential part of social morality and its a good traditional Chinese virtue to offer a hand to those in need.

Meanwhile， Chinese dream really matters in that it urges us to spare no efforts to make our country rich and powerful in the world， our society more harmonious and people more welloff.

On my part， as a modernday student， there is no doubt that we should shoulder the task of powering our country and pass on the positive energy to everyone around us.

篇5：高三英语话题写作之旅游地理话题

命题人：高（***）

【话题设计】

阅读下列材料，按要求作文。

所谓“慎独”，是指一个人在独处的时候，即使没有人监督，也能严格要求自己，自觉遵守道德准则，不做任何不道德的事。慎独，是衡量一个人道德水准的试金石。一个人在公共场合不做坏事比较容易，而在独处时也能一样不做违反道德准则的事，则需要有很高的道德修养。据《后汉书•杨震传》记载，一次，昌邑官员王密带十金黄金，深夜去拜访杨震，并说：“暮夜无人知。”杨震严词拒绝了这份厚礼，回答说：“天知、地知、你知、我知，何谓无人知？”王密惭愧而归。这个历史故事体现了“慎独”的真实含义，为我们树立了“慎独”的典范。可以说，杨震的道德修养已经达到了“慎独”的境界。

这则材料中所谈的“慎独”能引发你想些什么？请以“慎独”为话题，自定立意，自定题目，自定文体，写一篇800字以上的文章。所写内容必须在“慎独”的范围之内。

【写作指导】

慎独是儒学的一个重要概念，其内容人们一般理解为“在独处无人注意时，自己的行为也要谨慎不苟”（《辞海》），或“在独处时能谨慎不苟”（《辞源》。

慎独，其实就是“慎心”，要诚其意，在各种物欲的诱惑面前，靠“心”把持住自己——不管是酒色财气，总归“吾心有主”，不为所动。

慎独，其实就是“慎始”，做任何事从开头就要十分谨慎，如果开始时就不谨慎，还怎么能保证有好的结局呢？

慎独，其实就是“慎终”，“慎终如始，则无败事”意思是说，当事情结束时，要像开头一样慎重对待。

慎独还需用礼来约束自己，就不会离经叛道，要“非礼勿视，非礼勿听，非礼勿言，非礼勿动”。

慎独还需克服源自动物性的“利己”性。

写作时可能会出现的不足:

审题时可能会因为对“慎独”理解错误而导致跑题，例如将“慎独”理解为“独处”、“独自反省”等等。“独处”只是一种背景，而“慎独”重点是要谈处于这种背景之下要“谨慎不苟”；“独自反省”是“慎独”的一个方面，但重心是言行要“谨慎不苟”，而不仅仅是“反省”。、【思路点拨】

写议论文：

纵向结构

1.可以“小议慎独”为题：引论：由常有一些社会现象引出本文的论点：恪守“慎独是”十分必要的。本论：为什么要慎独？从4点分析：①慎独让人得以自我完善。②慎独让社会公德得以净化。③慎独让人与人之间多一些信任少一些猜疑，多一些关爱少一些冷漠。④假如没有了慎独，人和人之间少了诚信。假如没有了慎独，人和人之间少了关爱。结论：那么，怎样才能做到“慎独”呢？①关键要在“隐”和“微”上下功夫。②“慎独”慎独离不开自重自律。③“慎独”也离不开自我反省。④慎独离不开坦荡为人。⑤慎独离不开诚实守信。（选择其中的两三个内容为分论点）⑥那么，就让我们用“慎独”警示自己，鞭策自己，坦荡为人，踏实做事，做一个道德高尚的人，使我们的社会更加文明，更加和谐。

2.可以“什么是慎独”为题：可按层进式展开：什么是慎独？《辞海》称：“儒家用语。谓在独处无人注意时，自己的行为也要谨慎不苟。”也就是说，不论何时何地，或明或暗，用心 爱心 专心

或在人群，或单身独处，都要小心谨慎，不可在思想和言行上稍微离“道”。为什么要“慎独”：①慎独是一种情操；②慎独是一种修养；③慎独是一种自律；④慎独是一种坦荡。怎样才能“慎独”。那么，该怎样慎独呢？①要让所有的角色身份都保持一致，不自欺，亦不欺人。②对自己要严格要求，不能原谅自己。③要“慎一”，否则会在权钱交易、权物交易、权色交易之类的泥坑中难以自拔。

横向结构：

3.可以“慎独之美”为题：文章应围绕慎独之“美”从三个方面“横向”展开论述：慎独成就了大自然的有序与和谐；慎独闪耀着崇高修养与人性的光辉；慎独为充满智慧的人们另辟蹊径。以此结构谋篇，文章层次清晰，做到了议论文论述应有的宽度。

写记叙文：

4.可以“书记的后悔”为题，编写故事，以小见大，通过现实生活中某些领导台上君子、台后小人，因不能“慎独”，在权钱交易、权物交易、权色交易之类的泥坑中难以自拔，最终锒铛入狱，成为阶下囚的故事，表现防微杜渐、拒腐防变的主旨。

5.可以“在无人的时候”为题，构想一个“无人”的场景，设置与“慎独”相关的情节，描写人物与“慎独”相关的言行。无论是歌颂正面典型，还是鞭挞反面人物，都要围绕“慎独”做文章，并通过逼真的细节来表现。但情节一定要有波澜。

写短剧：

6.可以“‘慎独永驻’三幕剧”为题，把古今常见的材料组织到一块，选取三个具有典型性的“慎独”片段，从“守住慎独”的角度谋篇，组成三幕短剧，表现人应该“慎独”，不然会遗憾终生，抓住历史与现实中的典型的人和事，按时间顺序紧扣话题来写。

【拟题参考】

1．慎独，人生的至境；2．千金难买是慎独；3．梨虽无主，我心有主；4．在无人的时候；5．也说“慎独”；6．慎独•慎始•慎终；7．为官要“四慎”；8．做“真实的自己”，你能吗？9．慎独是检验一个人修身养性的试金石；10．人在做，天在看；11．人生第一要义；12．慎独伴随你成功；13．人前人后我们都能是君子；14．为“以不贪宝”叫好；15．作一棵在孤寂夜空下看守心灵月亮的树；16．慎独是人生的必修课；17．拒绝第一回；18．难得“慎独”19．书记的后悔20．满城尽是电子眼。

【素材连接】

1．柳下惠的节操鲁国人柳下惠，姓展名禽。相传在一个寒冷的夜晚，柳下惠宿于郭

门。有一个没有住处的妇子来投宿，柳下惠恐她冻死，叫她坐在怀里，解开外衣把她裹紧，同坐了一夜，一直到第二天天亮并没发生非礼行为。于是柳下惠就被誉为“坐怀（槐）不乱”的正人君子。

2．宋人或得玉，献诸子罕。子罕弗受。献玉者曰：“以示玉人，玉人以为宝也，故敢献之。”子罕曰：“我以不贪宝，尔以玉为宝，若以与我，皆丧宝也，不若人有其宝。”稽首而告曰：“小人怀壁，不可以越乡，纳此以请死也。”子罕置诸其里，使玉人为之攻之，富而后使复其所。（《左传·襄公十五年》）

3．元代大学者许衡一日外出，因为天气炎热，口渴难耐。正好路边有一棵梨树，行人们纷纷去摘梨解渴，只有许衡一个人不为所动。这时候有人就问他：“为什么你不摘梨呢？”许衡就说了：“不是自己的梨，怎么可以随便乱摘呢？”那人就笑他迂腐：“世道这么乱，管它是谁的梨。”许衡说：“梨虽无主，我心有主。”

4．道光年间的刑部官员冯志圻有收藏碑帖字画之好。一个下属寻得一帧宋拓名碑，用古锦包好送冯志。冯连看也没看就当即退还。有人劝冯志看看无妨。冯志说：“一看恐怕就不想退了，而接受它就难免为送礼者所利用”。此乃慎始之举，守住第一次，就没有第二次了。（《清朝野史大观》）

5．据一则“轿夫湿鞋”的民间故事说：一个轿夫雨后穿新鞋抬轿。开始抬腿迈步十分小心，专拣干处走，生怕湿了鞋。后来一不小心脚踏泥水，弄脏了鞋，就再也不管了，干处湿处随便落脚。这说明轿夫虽“慎始”，但坚持时间不长，自然就没有“慎终”之说了。

6．刘少奇同志在《论共产党员的修养》中也对慎独做了通俗的解释：一个人在独立工作，无人监督，有做各种坏事的可能的时候，不做坏事，这就叫慎独。

【针刺文】

小议“慎独”

佚名

现实生活中，常有这样的现象：在众人面前讲究卫生，独自一人时就随地吐痰，乱扔废

弃物；有警察时遵守交通法规，一旦路口无人值守就闯红灯；在自己熟悉的集体中谦恭有礼，一旦置身于陌生的环境就不再遵守公德。

由此可见，一个人在没有外在监督而独处的情况下，严于律己，遵道守德，恪守“慎独”是十分必要的。

“慎独”是自我完善的必修课。早在两千多年前孔子就提出了“君子慎独”。一个人越是在无人监督的时候，越能严格要求自己，做到谨慎从事，不做违德背理之事，就越能接近自我完善的思想境界。

“慎独”还是道德品质的“试金石”。《后汉书•杨震传》有一则“暮夜无知”的故事：杨震赴任东莱太守时途经昌邑，被他推荐为昌邑县令的王密夜晚拜见，想送他十斤黄金，杨震拒绝了。王密说：“暮夜无知。”杨震义正词严：“天知，神知，我知，你知，怎么说没有人知道呢!”王密羞愧而返。同是暮夜无人时，同样面对十斤黄金，杨震、王密二人的道德修养，就高下分明了。

“慎独”更是社会生活的“净化器”。人一旦缺少了“慎独”精神，就会降低自己的道德水准，只顾个人利益而无视他人利益。可怕的是这种思想一旦“传染”开去，别人也会以他为“榜样”，如果人人效仿，久而久之，世风日下就成必然。

那么，怎样才能做到“慎独”呢？关键要在“隐”和“微”上下功夫。即无人在场和有人在场都是一个样，不让任何微小邪恶的念头萌发，这样才能使自己的道德品质日臻完善。“慎独”离不开严格要求自己。三国时刘备的“勿以恶小而为之，勿以善小而不为”就是慎独自律、道德完善的体现。2005年感动中国的王顺友，一个普通的乡村邮递员，就是当代恪守“慎独”的典范。他一个人20年走了26万多公里的寂寞邮路。尽管生存环境和工作条件十分恶劣，但他没有延误过一个班期，没有丢失过一封邮件，投递准确率达100％。他说：“保证邮件送到，是我的责任。”在漫漫“孤独之旅”上他对自己的严格要求，在“一个人的长征”中，他服务无数山里人的执著，为人类创造了一笔宝贵的精神财富。

“慎独”也离不开自我反省。一个人要进步，就要经常地、认真地反省自己。伟大的科学家爱因斯坦说：“我每天上百次地提醒自己：我的精神生活和物质生活都依靠别人的劳动，我必须尽力以同样的份量来报偿我所领受的、至今还在领受着的东西„„”蜚声中外的医学院士吴阶平在年老时这样反思自己：“我自己认为，在1950—1960这十年里是取得了可喜成绩的，那时自己也的确十分勤奋，但这并不代表一生中都在坚持不懈地努力。自己在科学研究中锲而不舍的精神还远远不够，自己也有偷懒、靠小聪明过关甚至是一知半解的地方。”科学家们这种勤于反思、严于自律的精神为我们做出了表率。

“慎独”是一面盾牌，可助你抵御各种各样的诱惑，防范各色各类的“糖弹”；“慎独”是一盏明灯，可帮你照亮前行之路，明辨是非曲直；“慎独”是一剂良药，可使你内心清朗，精神昂然。那么，就让我们用“慎独”警示自己，鞭策自己，坦荡为人，踏实做事，做一个道德高尚的人，使我们的社会更加文明，更加和谐。（摘自《高中议论文阅读训练》）

【简评】

这是一篇说理透彻的议论文。

从身边的种种“摆平”现象入手，很自然的引出了文章的中心论点。接着，用三个自然段阐述了“慎独”的内涵，即“慎独是什么？”每段开头都以一个形象的比喻句作为本段的论点，三句构成排比，结构严谨、思路清晰。把“慎独”比作“自我完善的必修课”、“道德品质的试金石，”、“社会生活的净化器”。从个人上升到社会，三个比喻句层层递进，步步深入，把深奥的道理浅显化„„这是本文的一大亮色，作者在这里可谓“颇具匠心”！接下来，提出了一个观点：怎样才能做到慎独呢？关键要在“隐”和“微”上下功夫。这个观点把“慎独”这个观点诠释得“入木三分”！紧接着，又提出慎独的方法：①严格要求自己；②自我反省：举了2005年感动人物：王顺友的事例，贴进社会生活，紧跟着时代的步伐，给文章注以“新鲜的血液”，使论据充分，有说服力。结尾更是本文的“一道风景”，一组排比句中又含有耐人寻味的比喻，清新自然、文采飞扬！（高星云）

【例文1】

人生不能没有慎独

湖南新化一中高星云

第一幕

时间：春秋战国时期

地点：鲁国郭门里

内容概要：在一个天寒地冻的夜晚，柳下惠宿于郭门。有一个没有住处的美貌女子来投宿，柳下惠恐她冻死，叫她坐在怀里，解开外衣把她裹紧，同坐了一夜，一直到第二天天亮并没发生非礼行为。

画外音：柳下惠之所以被誉为“坐怀不乱”的正人君子，是因他能够坚守慎独。深更半

夜，面对楚楚动人的美女毫不动心，能挑战自我，战胜色欲，表现出读书人的高尚人生修养。

第二幕

时间：宋朝

地点：子罕家中

内容概要：宋国有个人给大夫子罕送来了一块好玉，子罕却不肯收。送玉者误以为他嫌

玉的质地不好，急忙解释它是块经玉匠断定的宝玉。岂料子罕却说：“我把不贪图别人的财物当作‘宝’，而你把这块宝玉当作‘宝’，如果你把它给了我，那么我们都丧失了自己的‘宝’。还是让我们各自守住自己的‘宝’吧!”

画外音：子罕“以不贪宝”，被誉为千古美谈。他身居高位，却能两袖清风，面对价值

连城的美玉，能挑战自我，战胜物欲，坚持操守，毫不动心，表现出为官者的高尚道德情操。

第三幕

时间：元代战乱的某个夏日

地点：大梨树旁边

内容概要：元代大学者许衡一日外出，因为天气炎热，口渴难耐。正好路边有一棵梨树，行人们纷纷去摘梨解渴，只有许衡一个人不为所动。这时候有人就问他：“为什么你不摘梨呢？”许衡就说了：“不是自己的梨，怎么可以随便乱摘呢？”那人就笑他迂腐：“世道这么乱，管它是谁的梨。”许衡说：“梨虽无主，我心有主。”

画外音：“梨虽无主，我心有主”。言约意丰！它充分显示了许衡的高尚情操，更重要的是，它向我们揭示了一个做人的道理：做人就要咬定做人的崇高准则，不论外界环境如何变化，都要时时牢记心中有主，不随波逐流，挑战自我，战胜口欲，恪守慎独。

第四幕

时间：二十世纪末二十一世纪初

地点：云南马班邮路

内容概要：一个普通的乡村邮递员，２０年来一个人、一匹马，走在一条路的艰苦而寂

寞的邮路上。他冒着生命危险跋涉在人迹罕至的高寒深山：摔倒了，爬起来；口渴了，喝口泉水；肚饿了，吃点干粮；天雨了，躲进帐篷。马驮人送，走村串户。深山独行53万里。尽管生存环境和工作条件十分恶劣，但他没有延误过一个班期，没有丢失过一封邮件，投递准确率达100％。他说：“保证邮件送到，是我的责任。”

画外音：“保证邮件送到，是我的责任。” “深山信使”王顺友心系山民，20年如一日，上高山，下深谷，冒严寒，顶酷暑，行行重行行，严格要求自己，恪守慎独，堪称典范。结束语：柳下惠坐怀不乱，宋子罕以不贪宝，许衡不食无主梨，王顺友认真送信：同样的慎独，不一样的表达。人间慎独，时时处处闪光。

【简评】

构思新颖，层次清晰地以四幕剧形式，概述了人生中时时处处应坚守慎独，绝不可错过，不然会遗憾终生，抓住历史与现实中的人与事，按照时间顺序紧紧扣住话题，意义深远。文章总体上是分——总的结构，而中间部分，采用内容“概要+评价”的方式，十分新奇，足见作者对文章的把握。文章通体明亮，夺人眼球；古今结合，辐射性强。（高星云）

【例文2】

君子慎独

湖南师大附中张 乔

毛主席曾说：“一个人做点好事并不难，难的是一辈子做好事。”那么同样的，一个人在大庭广众之下做一个君子不难，难的是独处时也做君子。

“慎独”是一种高境界的道德修养。我国古代的贤者很早就明白：君子处世，所慎在独。早在《礼记》中就有记载：“莫显乎微，故君子慎其独也。”历览前贤，历史上道德彰显之人莫不慎独。圣人孔子，不仅在朝堂之上严遵“君君臣臣”之仪，在颠沛流离之途也坚守君子之礼，席不正不坐，语非礼不言。诗人屈原，虽身处浊世，惨遭罢黜流放，仍能“沐后弹冠，浴后更衣”。四知堂上那一声断喝：“天知，地知，你知，我知，何谓无人知！”令污者抱头鼠窜，令美德彪炳千古，从而成为“君子慎独”的最好注脚。

“君子慎独”是一个人对自己的诚实。一个人只有对自己诚实，方能对他人守信。《五元灯会》上曾载有这样一则故事：由于战乱，普陀寺的众禅者决定迁移庙址。在迁徙途中，只有豫通大师一人坚持早课，从不荒废。有人劝曰：“此处无佛，大师可不必如此。”豫通大师答一偈子曰：“此处无佛，我心有佛。既诚我心，是诚我佛。”好一个“既诚我心，是诚我佛”！其实每一个人的心中都有一尊佛——自己的良心。大庭广众之下的君子是众人的君子，只有独处一室之时的君子，才是自我的君子。君子慎独，对自己诚实，就像是空谷中的幽兰，即使无人知晓，也始终散发清香；而那些不懂得“慎独”之人，徒然地欺骗着自己的良心，内心最终会成为一间臭不可闻的鲍鱼之肆！

“君子慎独”还是一种对自己的审视。每当夜深人静、独处一室之时，当颜面亿代未易的星图高悬头顶，你能够因为无须顾及旁人而放纵身心吗？不，灿烂的星空遥望着你，皎洁的月亮守望着你。隐隐地，有一种声音，仿佛是灵魂对自己的拷问，在这独处的静谧里。君子慎独，他的灵魂始终谨慎不苟。

当一轮新月升起，照在空寂的幽谷里，有一株独生的兰花，冰清玉洁，直立在自己的芬

芳中。就在这独处的正直中，他赢得了满天星光。

【简评】

中学生对“慎独”一般不大容易写好。本文能准确理解题意，采用“总——分——总”的结构方式谋篇。主体部分从 “慎独是一种高境界的道德修养”，“慎独是一个人对自己的诚实”，“慎独是一种对自己的审视”展开论述，论述中事实论据的运用和对所用材料的理解准确到位。作文结构、材料虽不新颖，但显示了作者的文化和思想的积淀。（高星云）

【满分作文】

“慎独”与“莲”

湖北一考生

我一个人坐在花园中，静静看着塘中饱满欲爆的莲花，清风带来夏日夕阳的暗香。花苞盈盈颤动，粉色嫩尖好似少女的粉腮，惹人怜爱„„站起身来，走至塘边，轻抚如纱诱人的瓣边，我多想折下一枝，插在书房中，让这香气伴我左右！四下无人，仅有我与满池莲花，相对默默无言。

纤长指尖终还是滑下花脉，收于身侧。慎独啊，慎独！我默念着这重似千钧的至理之言，离开了花园，夕阳从身后进来，送我一条暗色影，伴我踏上归途。

星空闪烁，月华流转，书桌前缺了一枝清莲，却并不让人遗憾，我甚至任性地想，一池莲花，是否会在深夜窃窃私语，悄悄回味着暮色四合之时，手指与瓣脉离开一瞬的韵味？

想着想着竟有几分痴了，忽然又冒出几分涩味：若换成别人，莲的境遇又会是何般？这也许就是自己才解得开的谜题罢。”慎独”二字，在我咿呀学语之间，满腹诗书的祖父便一遍又一遍地让我记得，小时不明所以，却是在此时此刻，暮色四合，才恍然大悟。确是至理名言，不枉人一生铭记。

独处时，人心有些不似平常。似乎一切都可以松弛下来。平日里的善行善举，行端言慎，又是几分真心，几分假意？这都市光怪陆离，世界变数无穷，又有谁能有通天彻地之晓，掐指一算，告诉你什么是该，什么不该？不知不觉中，生活也许已经不由人反抗，在你脸上牵上一幅面纱，喜怒不由人！一副伪装，让人变成另一人，人生如戏，丐子将相，又有谁知那

面纱下真面目？独处时，一切都可以卸下，周身散发一切，只留下自己和自己，抚心低语。

或许你在人前满腹经纶，可自己却明白，全是虚伪的装饰；或许在人前善行屡屡，可自

己却明白，这样非自私的本意„„独自一人，你如何对待自己？是无赖撒泼，还是喜怒无常，全然不似平日？

举手投足间，泄露一个人如何与自己对话。对自己诚恳的人，是为人的最高褒赏，人独

自来这繁华世间，又独自静静离去，修身自养比乞巧于人更值得去躬行，无人之时，一个眼神都能泄露最真实的自己，独自走过断柳，躬身而行透出你的温良；独自面对病狗，怜悯避开透出你的和善；独自面向困难，安之若素地经过，透出你的不卑不亢„„

是所渴望“慎独”！独处时，用良善温俭之心面对一颗赤子之心，这不经意的举动，泄露了你的真实与诚恳。

我面窗临月，仿佛嗅到不远处的莲香，独处时，如此清新美好的时光，绝不只有自己在体味，还有的，是自己的举手投足之间，不经意留下的气质与芬芳。

【简评】全文充满了一种文化气息，“慎独”是一种境界，显现在举手投足之间，与儒家

篇6：托福写作论据之常见话题

【插图】

there are a great many beautiful and delicate pictures to illustrate the words and make it more understandable. With those wonderful pictures, learning can be real fun and easy!

【环境优美】

The amazing part is its picturesque view and enjoyable surroundings. Having a walk beside the lake and rockery, I can smell the fragrance of grass and the flowers, hear the cries of the birds and feel the bracing breeze on my face.

【学习英语】

With the language surroundings, it’ll be easy for me to polish my speaking and listening skills.This can render me a good opportunity to practice my English, and eventually put me in a favorable position in the upcoming competition.

【勇敢】

You’ve got to have faith and courage; the only thing we have to fear is fear itself. In this rapid developing society, if we’re easily freaked out by various challenges, then there’s no way we can succeed.

【放松】

It drives away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. What’s more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off the depression and pessimism .

【好笑】

The scene is extremely hilarious and funny and make me laugh. Laugh can definitely drive away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. What’s more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off

the depression and pessimism .

【结交朋友】

I would be able to make friends with those who share the same love for this. Perhaps we can have a little get-together. We can talk, laugh, I mean, exchange our ideas and share our feelings. We all feel like one big family.

【榜样作用】

Since he is the role model for us, heneeds to speak and behave appropriately, in order to set a good example for us. No one can deny that a good example can exert an profound influence on the people.

【守信】

He is a man of his word and he never breaks his promise. I remember once I asked him to pick up my cousin when I couldn’t come back. He did so even though he had caught a bad cold. I said thanks and sorry but he said it’s ok

because he promised me. It is the characteristic of keeping faith enabled him to win my complete trust.

托福独立写作范文：礼金你想买什么

You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

The choice between spending money on tickets to a concert or spending money on jewelry is an easy one. Given this choice, I would buy jewelry. The reasons are obvious. Jewelry is an investment; it is permanent; and it is fashionable.

Jewelry like a gold bracelet for example is a very good investment. It is important for women (and for men, too) to have gold jewelry. If you have some serious financial problem, you could always set your jewelry to help you over any rough spots. You could not sell your used concert ticket.

Jewelry, unless you sell it, is permanent. You always have it to wear. Each time you put it on, you will remember the day you bought it. It will give you pleasure for years and years. You could not wear the ticket stub from the concert.

Jewelry is very fashionable. I would feel very smart wearing a beautiful gold bracelet or diamond pin. People would comment and tell me how much they loved my jewelry. They would compliment me on my good taste.

I would feel very rich with my jewelry. I would have a good investment which is permanent and fashionable. Then, when someone invites me to a concert (and pays for my ticket), I will have something beautiful to wear.

托福独立写作范文：企业应该终生雇佣员工

Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Should business hire employees for their entire lives? My answer is no. A business has the responsibility to take care of the right and interests of its employees, therefore it should keep them as long as it can. But it is not realistic that a business can hire its employees for their entire lives.

Firstly, on the business side, in order to survive and thrive, a business, like a human body, needs to constantly bring in new ideas and fresh minds into the corporation, and eliminate those positions which are not needed any longer. Although this might sound cruel, but it is for the survival of the business. If the business itself cannot continue, every employee will lose his job. People generally think big companies like IBM or Nortel are the kind of place where people can keep their jobs for ever, but these days we often hear about the news that these companies also lay off hundreds and thousands of people due to economic situations.

Secondly, on the employee side, securing a life-time job in one company is not good for his personal advancement. He tends to be satisfied with his current job, and make no plans for future career advancement. This is harmful for both the company and himself. In fact, it is those hop around among different companies who can get a big increase in terms of salary and benefits, and bring new experiences and skills to their new employee.

In conclusion, I think it is not a good idea to hire employees for their entire lives. It is both harmful to business and its employees, and therefore, also harmful to the society.

托福独立写作范文：现场演出更好看

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people like attending live performance rather than watching the same event on television. They think that will be enjoyable. Others like me, however, do not think so. There are no less than three disadvantages in attending a live performance rendered below:

First and foremost,people who will go to a live performance may not see or lister to clearly. Not all seats there are the best place.May be you will feel disappionted after attending it,and you must think the price for ticket is not worth that.

There is another factor that deserves some words here.The quality of the performance will depends on some external factors.Suppose that you go to a concert outdoors.Before you leave home, you have to consider how the whether will be go.It is likely that audiances are wet because of rain during the performance.So, even though the performance is in high quality,you may not feel comfortable more or less.

In addition, attending a live performance may waste your time. You must go there ahead of time,and you have to park.That will spend much time.