往年六级作文范文

2022-06-02

第一篇：往年六级作文范文

六级作文开头结尾+作文公式

准备项目：对于社会热点问题和热议现象，四六级作文也希望大学生有自己的见解和主张，比如盗版现象，电子书，以及一次性塑料袋等。

准备重点：对于这一命题，我们主要以两种模板来应对两种写作模式。一种以社会热点引出的问题开头，着重于现象背后的缘由以及其解决方案。另一种以分析可争议问题的两面性为主体。

准备内容：

Hot Issue型

(1)模板一

With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________ (主题问题). Accordingly, _______________________________ (伴随主题问题出现的新问题) is becoming more and more serious。

Confronted with ___________________________ (主题问题)， we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _________________________ (解决方法1). For another, _________________________________ (解决方法2). Finally, _________________________________ (解决方法3)。

As far as I am concerned ,the best way out is ________________________ (解决方法3). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because____________________ (解决方法3的优点和好处)。

(2)模板二

With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________ (相关事物或现象)， we have to face a problem that ______________________ (主题问题)。

What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, _____________________ (阐述原因1). Moreover, __________________ (阐述原因2). In addition, _______________________ (阐述原因3)。

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________ (解决主题问题). For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control。

利弊型

(1)模板一

Nowadays many people prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, ________________ (主题的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ (主题的优点2)。

But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2)。

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far out weighits negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society。

(2)模板二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life ,but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ________ (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one。

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, __________________ (原因1). Furthermore, ______________________ (原因2). Eventually, __________________________ (原因3)。

Good as ____________ (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that ___________ (缺点例子1). In addition, ___________ (缺点例子2)。

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and make our life more comfortable。

时间安排：

这一部分作文是议论和说明写作方法并存，属于备考的重点，建议每个模板都可以套用2个真题或模拟题练习。

一、开头万能公式

1.开头万能公式一：

名人名言：有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”很好办：编!原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理，而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

经典句型：A proverb says,“ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that„

2.开头万能公式二：

数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

看起来这个数字文绉绉的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：

Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：A recent statistics shows that „

二、结尾万能公式

1.结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子：

Obviously(此为过渡短语)， we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion ,in brief, on account of this ,thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that„， Therefore, we can find that„

2.结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

第二篇：六级作文

The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal CommunicationThe drawing vividly depicts a scene that a father asks his daughter how was her school today. The daughter replies that he can learn it from her blog, which seemingly cannot be a satisfying answer to the father’s question.

What is conveyed in the drawing is that the Internet decreases the chance people communicate with each other in spite of its numerous merits. This kind of social phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence. Due to the rapid development of the Internet, we spend so much time surfing on the Internet that our ability to

communicate with others is degenerating. The Internet, which makes is common to be seen that people in the subway are immersed in playing mobile phones or tablets, has estranged people from their colleagues, friends, even families. Measures should be taken to deter the increasingly severe phenomenon. First and foremost, we have to realize that daily communication is irreplaceable. What’s more, we are supposed to communicate with others proactively to share our joy or sorrow. Last but not least, it is wise to create an environment to increase opportunities of face-to-face communication for the government.

To draw a conclusion, we cannot deny the convenience the Internet brings.

Nevertheless, we should strike a balance between its pros and cons. Don’t forget the most basic communication with your intimate friends.

第三篇：六级作文经典

第一节：六级作文试题分析

一. 六级作文试题分类

六级作文从试题角度可以分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型与应用文五种类型。(一) 现象解释型：此类作文在六级考试作文中最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状;其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。例如：1.现象解释六级真题(2003年6月)(二) 对比选择型：此类作文同样是六级考试中常见的类型，它的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确，富有针对性，即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。例如：(2000年6月，1999年6月)(三) 问题解决型：此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性;然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施;最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。如2000年1月真题。 (四) 观点论证型：此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。如：1999年1月六级真题。(五) 应用文：应用文中的信函，也是六级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的文章来。

二. 解决方案

1. 建议考生分解作文观点，扩充内容。2. 建议考生在写作时只选择自己能够驾奴的句式和词语。3. 建议考生在文章中长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。4. 建议考生选用作文模板，限定文章逻辑结构。5. 建议考生采用固定的句式，限定文章的字数。第二节：写作技巧及作文结构安排

一. 写作技巧。1. 根据文章大意判断作文题型。2. 各种题型的写作方法。

现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→对现象做出预测或如何促进(限制)这种现象的进一步发展。

对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由;阐述第二种(相对或相反的)观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由;表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。

问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。

观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题→得出结论→举例论证→得出结论(证明观点的正确性)。

应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景→选择写作方法。

3. 三段式作文的结构安排

题型

第一段第二段第三段

现象解释型

描述现象

说明现象产生的原因

表明个人态度或阐述个人做法

对比选择型

表明一方或双方由的观点及理

表明另一方的观点及理由，指出双方观点不足之处及理由

表明个人态度或阐述个人做法

问题解决型

提出问题

分析问题，给出解决方案

表明个人态度或阐述个人做法

观点论证型

提出论点

例证论点

得出结论或表明个人看法或做法

应用文

描述事实

阐述原因

表明观点或提出建议

第三节：十二句作文法写作模板

一. 现象解释型写作模板

1. 现象解释型模板一 Tojpic sentence

①——has become a common part of people’s life. 1.空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。

②And——has always aroused the greatest concern. 2.空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象 ③what impresses us most is ——. 3.现象的具体表现

④The reasons——are varied. 4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。信息提示

5. Among the various reasons,——plays an important role. 5.原因之一。 6.That is to say,——6.具体说明原因一。 7.What is more,——7原因二。

8.For example,——8 举例说明原因二

9.When talking about——，——，9.空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。 10.On the one hand——10.支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面。 11.On the other hand,——11.理由二或第二个方面。 12.In brief,——总结 2003年9月真题

Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life. And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern. What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively. The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.

Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part. That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other types of books do. What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on relevant fields are highly demanding. For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.

When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books. On the one hand, in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major. On the other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons. In brief, college students should choose books according to their interests and needs.

1. 现象解释型模板二

1.We have witnessed ——1.空格内填最近出现的总体现象。

2.According to ——，——空格一根据题目填the chart,thereport等，空格二内填现象的具体表现一。 3.And ——3.现象的具体表现二

4.Many reasons contribute to——过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。 5. To begin with ,——. 5.原因之一。

6.More over,——6. 原因二 7.In addition ,——7原因三。

8.As a result ,——8 原因导致的结果。

9.As to me,——，9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。 10.First of all,——10.支持看法的理由一。 11.Besides,——11.理由二。 12.To conclude,——12.总结。

We have witnessed that college students vary in reading preference. According to the table of the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, the circulation of popular fictions and general nonfictions accounts for 65.9% and 18.2% respectively. And the table shows that the circulation of science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books is 10.8%and 5.1% respectively. Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.

To begin with, popular fictions usually possess more appealing plot than ther types of books do, so many readers are attracted by popular fictions. Moreover, popular fictions and general nonfictions are easier to be understood. In addition, science and art books demand certain knowledge in special field of study. As a result, more students tend to choose popular fictions and general nonfictions.

As to me, I’m in favor of books of science and technology. First of all, in order to deepen what I’m leaning, I need read more books relevant to my major and observe the new development in science and technology circles. Besides, there books can also broaden my vision. To conclude, college students should choose books according to their interests and needs. 1. 现象解释型模板三 1. ——has been brought into focus. 1.空格内填最近出现的总体现象。 2.Nowdays,——. 2.空格内填现象的具体表现一。 3.In addition, ——. 3.现象的具体表现二

4.Many reasons contribute to——4.过度句到分析原因 5. Generally speaking ,——. 5.承上启下开始列举原因 6.First of all,——6. 原因之一。 7.More over,——7 原因二。

8.Therefore ,——8 对原因一二进行总结。

9.As far as I am concerned,——，9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。 10.As we known ,——10.支持看法的理由一。 11.Furthermore,——11.理由二。

12.In a word,——12.总结。

此类型真题有2002年6月、1996年6月。

一. 对比选择型作文模板 1. 模板一

1.Different people have different views on—1.开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2. Some people perfer,——. 2.表明一部分人的看法 3. Others tend to, ——. 3.另一部分的看法。 4.As to me, I agree with /to ——4.作者的看法。

5. Of course,——. 5.承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。

6.For example,——6. 举例说明支持第五句

7.But,——7 转折指出这种观点的不足。 8.The following reasons can account for my preference——启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。

9.The main reason is ——9.支持观点的理由一。. 10.A good example to illustrate is ——10.举例说明理由一。 11.Fur another,——11.理由二。

12.From the foregoing,——12.总结全文，从长远看来。 2002年6月真题：Is a test of spoken necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Different people have different views on it. Some prefer to have such a test. Others tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English. As to me, I agree with the first statement.

Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English. For example, if a candidate draws a topic which he of she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken English. But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English. The following reasons can account for my preference.

The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance of spoken English. A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability. For another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier. From the foregoing, I think a test of spoken English is of necessity. 1. 模板二(1999年6月真题) 1.There is no complete agreement among people as to ——

1.开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2. Some people consider,——. 2.表明一部分人的看法。 3. However, others think, ——. 3.另一部分的看法。

4.Some people may say ——4.观点一的理由。

5. They hold this opinion because——. 5.深入阐述观点一的理由。 6. However, others believe,——6. 观点二的理由。

7.They argue that,——7. 深入阐述观点二的理由。 8.Personally,I am in favor of the——8. 我的看法。 9. Firstly, ——. 9.个人看法依据一。 10.Secondly,——10. 个人看法依据二。

11.Most important of all ——11. 个人看法依据三。

12.Taking abovementioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that ——12.总结全文。

模板三

1. When asked about ——,different people will offer different opinions.开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。

2. Some people take it for granted that——. 2.提出观点一。 3. In their opinion, ——. 3.观点一的理由一。 4. Besides ——4.观点一的理由二

5. However, others hold——. 5.提出观点二。

6.They maitain——6. 观点二的理由一 7.And——7观点二的理由二。

8.Weighing up these arguments, I am for——8 我的观点。

9. For one thing——. 9.个人观点理由一。10.For anther,——10. 个人观点理由二。

11.For instance,——11. 举例说明。

12.Therefore, as stated ab12.综上所述再次强调自己的观点。

Is a test of spoken necessary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). When talking about it, different people will offer different opinions. Some people take it for granted that college students should take a test of spoken English. In their opinion, it is good chance for them to test their spoken English. Besides, it also make them know the importance of the spoken English.

However, others hold that a test of spoken English is unnecessary in the university and colleges. They maintain that college students’ practice of spoken English is not for testing but for daily use. And they think it is hard to manage such a subjective test.

Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first point of view. For one thing, spoken English is very important. For another, a test of spoken English can guide and supervise students to make conversation practice. For instance, when choosing books and other materials, students can pick them according to the bands of the test they want to take. Therefore, as stated above, the first point of view can hold water.

一. 问题解决型作文模板

1. 模板一

1. With the development/improvement of ——,——. 1.空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。

2.关注解决现象引出的问题很必要。

2. It is necessary that——.

3.解决问题很必要的理由一。

3. On the one hand, ——.

4.解决问题很必要的理由二。

4. On the other hand, ——

5. Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention. 5.承上启下，填要解决的问题。

6. 解决办法一。7 解决办法二。8. 举例解释解6.Firstly——7.Secondly——

决办法二。

8.For example,——9. Thirdly, ——.

9. 解决办法三。10. 阐明解决办法三。

10.In other words,——

11. 指出解决问题的办法多种多样。

11.In fact, ways to —— are countless.

12. 强调解决问题时不可待。

12.It’s time that ——

2004年1月真题：Reduce Waste on Campus

With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious. It is necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus. On the one hand, our waste has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity. On the other hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.

Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention. Firstly, we should turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible. Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes. For example, we should use a basin when we clean faces. Thirdly, we should be economical. In other words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.

In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless. It’s time that we cultivate the habit of thrift in every possible way.

1. 模板二 1. There has been a discussion recently abouot——. 1.提出现存的问题。

2.解决问题很必要的理由一 2. It is obvious that——.

3.解决问题很必要的理由二。 3. Additionally, ——.

4.承上启下，说明解决问题的必要性。 4. So it is high time, ——

5.解决办法一 5. First of all, ——

6.解决办法一的理由.。 6.The reason is——7.Secondly——

7.解决办法二。8. 阐明解决办法二。 8.That is to say,——

9. 解决办法三。 9. Thirdly, ——.

10.In fact, more than three ways can be adopted,——

10. 指出解决问题的办法多种多样。

11. 小结解决问题的根本途径。 11.As for me, ——

12. 总结全文。 12.All in all, ——

Reduce Waste on Campus

There has been a discussion recently about waste on campus. It is obvious that a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity have been caused by waste. Additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. So it is high time that we took actions to reduce the waste on campus.

First of all, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. The reason is that there is a great shortage of water in the word. Secondly, we should be economical. That is to say, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. Thirdly, we should turn off the light when we leave dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible.

In fact, more than three ways can be adopted. As for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. All in all, every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus. 1. 模板三(2001年1月)

1.提出问题及解决的必要性。 1. I t is certain that——.

2.解决问题很必要的理由一 2. For one reason,——.

3.解决问题很必要的理由二。 3. For another, ——.

4.转折到如何解决问题。 4. However, some still puzzle on how to ——.

5.呈上指出解决问题的方法很多。 5. Here come some suggestions.

6.解决办法一.。 6.To begin with,——7.Secondly——

7.解决办法二。8. 阐明解决办法二。 8.For instance,——

9. 解决办法三。 9. Thirdly, ——.

10. 其理由。 10.That is because——

11.The solutionvary according to different situations. 11.解决问题的办法随具体情况不同而变化根本途径。

12. 总结全文，要灵活地依据具体情况处理问题。 12.Therefore, ——

第三节。观点论证型作文模板

1. 模板一

1.提出普遍存在地观点。 1. It is true that——.

2.谈不同地观点。 2. However,——.

3.自己地观点，即文章地论点 3.I think——.

4.过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。

4.—— can be listed as follow.

5.论证理由一 5. First of all, ——

6.论证理由二。 6. Secondly ——7.For example—

7.举例具体说明理由二。8. 论证理由三。 8.Thirdly,——

9. 举例说明理由三。 9. A case in point is ——.

10. 提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。 10.It goes without saying that——

11. 得出结论。 11.There is no doubt that ——

12. 总结全文。 12.In conclusion ——

It Pays to Be Honest

It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only the whole society. The reasons can be listed as follows.

Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time. Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers. Thirdly, honesty can make our society. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.

It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the same and the individual. There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty. In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society. 2.模板二

1.直接提出本文的观点。 1. Some people believe that——.

2.进一步强度观点的正确性。 2. The truth is deep and profound.

3.论证理由一 3. As we know,——.

4.论证理由二 4. In addition,——.

5.承上启下。 5. There are numerous examples ——

6.举例一具体论证。 6. A case in point is——

7.总结例一。8. 举例二具体论证。 7.There is close to suggest——

9. 举例三具体论证。 8.For another example——

10. 总结上下，重申论点。 9.Moreover,——.

11. 指出该论点应注意什么。 10.All mentioned above tell us——

12. 总结全文。 11.But one thing we have to notice is that ——

12.In a word, ——

It Pays to Be Honest

Some people believe that many dishonesties, such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. ruin our normal life, and they maintain that being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to oneself. The truth is deep and profound. As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her. In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious.

There are numerous examples supporting the argument. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate. This is close to suggest that honesty can make our society more stable, and all people can live a peaceful life there. For another example, buyers usually like to make a deal with the dealers they trust. Moreover, the dealer, such as Tongrentang Herbal Medicine Shop which runs business honestly is more likely survive the fierce market competition.

All mentioned above tell us that it is high time that we took action to fight against dishonesty. But one thing we have to notice is that sometimes we need white lies to comfort the patients who have suffered serious illness. In short, we should let the dishonesty have no place to stay in our society.

第四篇：六级作文点评

The Way to Success

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. It’s indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing。

To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind

three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having

the diligence to realize your dream. In other words, they are “what” “why” and “how” of success. It’s really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful。

Although it’s never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, you’ll be the one。

【作文解析】

这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”what is success?”，但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了自己的观点：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。

本篇亮点：

1. 排比词组或句子的运用：

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for。

…namely, knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream。

2. bear in mind

3. lie in

4. strong will to pursue your interest

本文有待提高之处：

1. 文中人称有些混乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议统一。

2. 结构上，一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的“三段式”，即，提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者基本上遵循了这个原则，但第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。如果第三段，作者可以与第一段的“成功定义”相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中成功的本质。整体看，文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散，有待提高。