四六级考试作文范文

2022-06-16

第一篇：四六级考试作文范文

英语四六级考试作文评分标准

四六级作文采用总体评分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。我们要从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达，要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

这里我将对是否用英语充分表达思想解释一下，也许大家看到hot door的时候可能会想到热门，因为我们使用了back-translation, 我们在用中文的思维方式替学生考虑，来猜测他想要表达什么意思，但是在改试卷当中，这是绝对不允许的，我们必须严格按照英语的思维来考虑，试想一个英语国家的人看到这个表达方式的时候他肯定是不会没明白这个是什么意思的。

也就是说，在真正实际批改中，如果你出现i is, you am等现象，或者一个单词少了一个字母这些情况我们是不会太在意的，如果语言的错误导致了我们不能够使用英语的思维来理解，那么分数就高不上去了。

阅卷的标准分为5等，2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。另有标准样卷，我们参照样卷对大家的作文进行评分，首先人们和哪个档次的样卷接近，则上下浮动1分。

2分标准：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分标准：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。

8分标准：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分标准: 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分标准：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

第二篇：大学英语六级考试作文预测

大学英语六级考试作文预测(2010.12) 恩波教育英语研究所预测作文

(一)

Aging Before Wealthy 1.

物价上涨，通货膨胀，社会压力越来越大，很多白领出现“未富先老”的现象。 2.

作为一个大学生，走出校门后，你将如何应对这种情况。

【范文】

Stress has been around human beings ever since its existence; it is an unavoidable consequence of life. In current society, everyone is required to work in a fast pace with the competition getting more and more hectic. What one earns does not make ends meet. Therefore a lot of white collars are suffering from “aging before wealthy”.

As university students, we will face those issues in no time. The first thing we should do is to stay positive. Secondly, knowledge is power. A competent person will accomplish his/her goal easier than others. So when we are still in campus, we shall spend more time in improving our skills, as well as broadening our horizons. In addition, everyone needs to learn stress management that suits them in order to cope with the current pace of the society. All in all, by following the above steps and recognizing the seriousness of the reality, I am quite confident that we can face the future challenges and eventually survive.

【点评】

首段交待“未富先老”的历史和社会背景，先讲压力自古有之，后讲现代社会的压力更大。不仅如此，收入与支出的不和谐更是导致当今社会白领压力过大的重要原因。三句话步步深入，层层递进。“收支不平衡”使用what one earns does not make ends meet。

第二段提供了三个应对措施。第一是从心理上保持乐观积极。第二是增强自身的业务技能。第三是进行压力管理。整段长短句结合，在表达“某人应该做某事”这个意思时，分别使用了sb. should do, sb. shall do, sb. needs to do等，使语言更加丰富。另外，在遇到和就业压力、升学压力、生存压力、心理健康等话题时，可供参考的短语和词组有：hectic(疯狂的)competition, suffer from, stay positive, a competent person(有竞争力的人)，stress management, cope with, confident和survive.。

预测作文

(二)

Audaciousness(出位) 1.

目前，互联网上有很多出位的现象，比如裸奔 (streaking)等。 2. 是不是在新时代要获取关注，就要靠出位呢? 3. 你如何看待这种现象?

【范文】

Currently, audaciousness online like streaking has grabbed many people’s attention. It seems that in order to be famous, people have to resort to audaciousness. However, I believe that audaciousness may not be a proper way to draw public attention and realize one’s self-value. To acquire fame and success, one has to consider three basic factors, namely goal, methods, and persistence. First, one needs to set a crystal-clear goal. This goal should aim at achieving the wholesomeness of the society. Second, one has to make the most of the mass media, since we are

1 in an information age, and people gain news from various kinds of ways. Finally, persistence makes sure that success is within one’s reach.

In conclusion, by doing right things at the right time, we can also grab the public’s attention. Yet it is without doubt that audaciousness is not a good choice.

【点评】

第一句话开门见山，用sth. has grabbed(抓住) sb’s attention。接下来使用的 “have to resort to”表现了一种被迫和无奈之感，但转折词however马上话锋一转，引出了作者的观点。在表达对像搏出位这样的社会现象时，切不可武断使用bad一类的词语进行价值评判。一会显得措辞鲁莽，二会显得过于主观。所以这里推荐使用sth. be/not be a proper way to do sth. else.以显示客观中立。

第二段讲了对出位的认识。文章没有直接讲这种行为的优点或缺点，而是从追求成功的角度阐释一个人应该具备目标、达到目标的方法和坚持不懈的毅力。言下之意是间接否定了出位。比较好的表达有：明确的目标(crystal-clear goal)，社会完整(the wholesomeness of the society)，充分利用(make the most of)，志在必得(sth. is within one’s reach.)。最后一段是重申主题和作者的立场。

预测作文

(三)

Marriage: Is it still a tradition? 1.

剩男剩女越来越多。

传统的成家立业、结婚思想是否会发生变化?

未来社会是否会有更多的人选择不结婚，单身过日子，谈谈你的看法。

【范文】

Marriage, what a holy and inspiring word for human beings is. However, with the passage of time, the concept of marriage changes dramatically, as can be seen from the increasing numbers of single men and women in contemporary society. From my perspective, this interesting phenomenon well reflects the young’s value shift in the aspect of marriage, family and so forth. First, the substantial development of our nation’s economy greatly changes the way young people treat marriage. They are more financially independent and attempt to seek individual freedom. Second, young people are becoming growingly competitive that they subconsciously raise the standards of their ideal partners, which lead to the fact that many find it hard to find their perfect matches. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that single life is not the main trend in the long run for both men and women, because marriage can bring a lot happiness to us. Accordingly, the future of marriage will still be promising.

【点评】

首句欲抑先扬，指出婚姻是holy and inspiring(神圣并振奋人心的)。接着通过转折词however,状语with the passage of time，非限制性定语从句和被动语态as can be seen的使用，使句子结构丰富，并不失连贯性与逻辑性。

第二段讲述了年轻人婚姻观发生转变的社会和个人原因。最后一段表达自己对婚姻乐观积极的观点。值得一提的是此文中的副词和状语。副词如dramatically, greatly, financially, growingly, subconsciously, strongly等使它们修饰的动词和形容词更加形象生动;另外，中文里的动词

2 在英语中通常可以用副词和状语来处理。如第一段中的with the passage of time(随着时间的流逝)。

预测作文

(四)

Government Officials and Their Words 1. 最近不断有官员爆出“雷人”话语，令人咋舌。 2. 你如何看待这种现象? 3. 请反思这种现象背后的原因。

【范文】

It is reported that floods of stunning words have burst into our society out of the mouths of some government officials. Some of those words are really astonishing and audacious, which arouse significant concern among the public. As for me, I think that there are two major reasons accounting for this controversial issue. One is the misinterpretation of the mass media. It is universally acknowledged that lots of media exaggerate or uglify the facts in order to gain more attention from the public and achieve more profit. So they may have defamed some of the remarks made by the government officials so as to win the mass attention. Another reason is the government officials themselves. It is true that increasing numbers of officials fail to behave appropriately in public due to their lack of social etiquettes and poor education, which result in their improper remarks. In general, I do hope our government officials can build up an upright and respectable image for the public and minimize the negative influence of those stunning words.

【点评】

第一段使用了被动语态来描述一个社会现象，使文章客观。在形容相关官员的“雷人”话语时，用了stunning, astonishing和audacious三个词，语言丰富而深刻。接下来解释了“雷人”话语频现的原因。第一是大众传媒的误读(misinterpretation)。表达“it is universally acknowledged that”语出英国小说家简·奥斯汀的名著《傲慢与偏见》的第一句话：It is a universally acknowledged truth that a young man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife,译为“……是一件举世公认的真理”。在重复“误读”这个信息时，用了exaggerate(夸大)、uglify(丑化)和defame(使名誉扫地)来替代，不仅避免了一词多用，还挖掘了误读的真正涵义。另一个原因是政府官员自身的素质不够，社会责任感不强。

最后一段表达了作者对政府官员的希望，提出要树立一个正直和令人敬重的形象(an upright and respectable image)，并将“雷人”话语的负面影响降低到最低(minimize)。

预测作文

(五)

Information Security 1. 信息安全问题日益重要。

2. 信息安全事故可能导致的危害。 3. 如何做到信息安全。

【范文】

Information has already become a vital element in contemporary society. Therefore, the importance of information security has also drawn great attention in the society.

3 As I can see, accidents of information security will bring about appalling consequences. First, the exposure of key information of some big enterprises can be quite a heavy blow not only to the company but also to its main business partners. Second, the intrusion of personal information is also terrifying because it can ruin one’s fame, reputation and that of other people’s. Furthermore, the accidents of information security will give away critical intelligence of a nation, the result of which is definitely devastating.

Thus, in order to guarantee the information security, both the government and individuals should join hands and make a difference. It is expected that the government make strict and sound legal system to combat violation of information security. For individuals, they are supposed to be more cautious and alert so as not to be intruded of their privacy.

【点评】

第一段言简意赅，突出信息安全的重要性。这主要通过两个单词来体现：vital和importance。紧接着在第二段一开始，作者用appalling一词呼应了“重要”这个重点。表达the exposure of key information体现了中英文的区别。中文的动词，如本文中的“暴露”在英文中变成了名词，且在句中充当了名词。另外the intrusion of personal information翻译成中文为侵犯个人信息，也是中文动词变英语名词的例子。这两个表达照顾到了结构上的对称，使句子读起来工整有致。第二段末句的devastating与此段首句遥相呼应，再次重申了信息安全的重要性。最后一段是解决措施。一般有两条万能解决方法。一是政府和有关部门制定法律并保证有效实施，二是公民要加强教育、增强自身意识。有效的表达有：make strict and sound legal system(strict和sound头韵，为英语一种修辞手法)，violation(侵犯、践踏), cautious and alert(小心与警觉)。

大学英语四六级写作模板——提纲式作文

1. 对立观点式

A.有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么?

B. 有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么?

C.我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2. 批驳观点式

A.一个错误观点。

B. 我不同意。

Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。

There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。

3. 社会问题(现象)式

A.一个社会问题或者现象。 B. 产生的原因

C.对社会和我们生活的影响

D. 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)

E. 前景的预测。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。

There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。

X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。

A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..

大学英语四六级写作模板——提纲式作文

1. 对立观点式

A.有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么?

B. 有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么?

C.我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

2. 批驳观点式

A.一个错误观点。

B. 我不同意。

3. 社会问题(现象)式

A.一个社会问题或者现象。

B. 产生的原因

C.对社会和我们生活的影响

D. 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话) 5

E. 前景的预测。

There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。

X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。

A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will …….. 大学英语四六级写作模板——辩论式议论文

模版1

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.

Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版2

People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.

For one thing, 论据1.

For another, 论据2.

Last but not the least, 论据3.

To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, 论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

第三篇：六级考试作文评分原则和评分标准

六级考试作文部分要求考生在30分钟之内写出一篇不少于120词的短文(四级为100词)。从近几年实考看，

四、六级均采用同样的作文题，题型多为提纲式作文，即给出一个英文标题下面用汉语给出三段(或两段)的提纲，即要求写的中心内容。今天育路教育网就为考生详细解读一下六级作文的评分原则和评分标准。

六级考试作文评分原则和评分标准

(一) 评分原则

1、CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。

2、大学英语六级作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3、从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

4、避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

(二) 评分标准

1、本题满分为15分。

2、阅卷标准共五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优劣于该分数，则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

4、评分标准：2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重的错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺。连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分]

5、字数不足的应酌情扣分：累计字数CET4〖〗CET6扣分99~99〖〗110~119〖〗180~89〖〗100~109〖〗270~79〖〗90~99〖〗360~69〖〗80~89〖〗550~59〖〗70~79〖〗7<49〖〗<69〖〗9

[注：(1)如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

(2)只写一段者：0～4分;只写两段者： 0～9分。(指规定三段的作文)]

6、为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准。现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称分率。其中9分的得分率为60(相当于百分制的60分)。作文分〖〗15〖〗14〖〗13〖〗12〖〗11〖〗10〖〗9〖〗8〖〗7〖〗6〖〗5〖〗4〖〗3〖〗2〖〗1得分率〖〗100〖〗94〖〗87〖〗80〖〗74〖〗67〖〗60〖〗54〖〗47〖〗40〖〗34〖〗27〖〗20〖〗14〖〗7

(三) 关于作文最低分的有关规定

1、作文分最低分定为6分。

2、考生作文分为0分时，若总分高于60分，一律按59分报道;若总分低于60分，则按“总分-6分”报道。

3、考生作文分大于0分，小于6分时，则按下列公式报道成绩：最后报道分=原计算总分-6分+实得作文分。

转自:育路英语六级考试网

第四篇：大学英语四、六级考试万能作文公式（范文）

2009年12月大学英语六级考试万能作文公式

六级万能作文公式

开头万能公式：

1. 开头万能公式一：名人名言

有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”，很好办：编!

原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是8，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?

经典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

更多经典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that„

2. 开头万能公式二：数字统计

原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。

原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：

Honesty

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。

Youth

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that „

写作绝招

结尾万能公式：

1. 结尾万能公式一：如此结论

说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子：

Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!

更多过渡短语：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„

2. 结尾万能公式二：如此建议

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

写作绝招

写作的“七项基本原则”：

一、长短句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主题句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、一二三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐，原因：俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐，原因：俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐，原因：俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其

一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其

二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如：

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：

走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room

所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩!

为了提高广大考生的写作能力，考试吧整理了以下六级考试万能作文公式。

六、多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短语可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友„可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

When to go, Why he goes away„

为了提高广大考生的写作能力，考试吧整理了以下六级考试万能作文公式。

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、挑战极限原则

既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀!

原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.