历年上海中考英语作文

第一篇：历年上海中考英语作文

上海中考历年语文作文真题汇总

2012年：心里美滋滋的

2011年：悄悄的提醒

2010年：黑板上的记忆

2009年：在学海中游泳

2008年：我眼中的色彩

2007年：记住这一天

2006年：我们的名字叫_____

2005年：充满活力的岁月

2004年：我们是初升的太阳;我的视线

2003年：我想唱首歌

2002年：为自己竖起大拇指

2001年：有家真好

2000年：我也衔过一枚青橄榄

1999年：生活中的发现

1998年：我的欢乐

1997年：良师

1996年：变了

1995年：母爱

1994年：课后

1993年：我终于_____

1992年：忘不了他(她)

1991年：题目自拟，但必须包含“我”、“第一”这两个词，如：我的第一位老师、我第一次看彩电、得第一名的是我、我家第一次旅游等等。

1990年：在_____影响下

1989年我

1988年我和XX

1987年从来没有这样_____1986年这堂课真_____

1985年同桌

1984年给我带来了欢乐

1983年家乡的变化

1980年看图作文：谁家的衣服掉了

第二篇：中考上海英语作文总结

上海中考英语作文总结

纵观2001—2010年上海中考英语试卷，书面表达试题的样式大体可以分为两种类型：

一、主观性命题;

二、半主观性命题。字数要求方面从03年开始由原来的50个单词变成60个单词左右。

一、主观性命题

主观性命题是指试题的要求中有简单的写作要求但是没有详细的写作提示，要求考生根据要求自己确定写作中心和内容的书面表达形式。

主观性命题的书面表达特点：1. 试题中有简单的写作要求;2. 没有具体的中文或英文提示，文章的中心内容的确定带有主观性。 比如说上海2007年的中考英语作文题目是：以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

本试题中只有简单的写作要求：以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题，只给出了作文题目，没有相关的内容提示，属于典型的主观类书面表达。做这类题的时候一定要从题目要求出发，通过主观想象写出符合题目要求的内容，对于英语基础薄弱的学生来说，可以先用汉语构思。比如上面的书面表达就可以根据题目要求从以下几个方面构思：

1)写妈妈的故事，确定文章的主人公;

2)妈妈的家庭：有5个兄弟姐妹，爸爸是农村的医生，妈妈只是一个普通的工人;

3)妈妈的童年：由于当时的时代跟现在不同，家里没有电视，没有电脑，妈妈每天下午放学都要跟姐姐弟弟帮他们的妈妈做家务，比如洗衣服，做饭;虽然艰苦，但是很快乐。

用汉语构思完文章大致内容后就把自己的汉语翻译成英语：

1)A Story about My Parent; 2) In mum’s family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker; 3) At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to help their mother with the housework. For example, they helped to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy. 完成翻译工作后用一定的连接词将以上内容连接起来,最终成文：

A Story about My Parent My mum was born in a small village. In her family, there were seven people: mum’s parents, mum’s two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker. At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework. For example, they help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.

二、半主观性命题

半主观性命题是指试题的要求中有详细的写作要求和写作提示，提示包括中英文两种，而这些写作提示其实就是该书面表达的核心内容即该书面表达的核心得分点。但是这些提示内容往往都比较零散，需要学生加入适当的过渡句或承接词，经过整理后才能成为完整的书面表达形式。

半主观性，命题的书面表达特点：1)文章的内容或者结构有一定的限制，这些是客观规定的;2)学生在组织文章的过程中需要加入一些必要的过渡句或承接词，这些是主观的。 纵观近十年的中考英语真题，上海中考英语作文试题大部分都是半主观性命题，只有01和07年时主观性命题，其他都是半主观性命题。相对于主观性命题而言，半主观性命题会稍显有点难度，因为文章的格式或者内容都是固定的，学生只需将中文转换成英文，再加以必要的过渡词或承接词，倘若学生在审题的时候没注意到这一点的话很有可能会出现跑题的现象。因此做这类题的时候一定要审好题再做题。 比如说上海2002年的中考英语作文题目是：根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物”为题写作，不少于50个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3项要求，标点符号不占格：

Make sure you 1. Introduce what the thing(s) is (are). 2. Say when and / or where, and how you got it (them) 3. Explain why you like it (them) and why it is (they are) special to you. 这是一道典型的半主观性命题，此题的要求中对该书面表达的内容已经做了详细的客观规定主要包括：

1. 题目：My Favorite Thing(s) 2. 文章必须包括一下三点：

What the thing(s) is (are) When and / or where, and how you got if (them) Why you like it (them) and why it is (they are) special to you 3. 字数要符合要求

以上这些客观规定的内容即文章的核心得分点，接下来的任务就是要将这些核心得分点写入到文章中并加之必要的过度句或承接词,最终成正文：

My Favorite Thing

I have many small things in my home such as stamps, toys. But among those things, my favorite thing is a green watch. It is a digital watch with a duck on the bottom of it. And it is my birthday present given by my best friend. I got it on my 12th birthday. I like it very much because I can read time since then. Because it was the present given by my best friend, it is very special to me.

在做中考英语作文的时候一定要谨记，文章写完后要检查有没有语法上的错误，注意单三变化，主谓一致。中考作文并不难，只要平时多注意积累，多做练习，相信同学们一定会有所收获。

第三篇：(上海中考)初三英语作文点评

世外初三英语范文点评

优秀习作1上海市世界外国语中学吴思怡

作文题目

“Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What do you think of habits? What can our habits bring us?Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Habits”.优秀习作

Good habits are foundations on our way to success, while bad ones get in the way and hold us back. To begin with, good habits help us work more efficiently. If we get into the habit of tidying up our rooms, we will find it easy to obtain the things we need. Moreover, good habits leave others positive impressions. Showing our warm smiles is a habit which enables us to get along with our classmates and teachers well. On the other hand, bad habits can be destructive. Lots of people develop lung cancer just because of their habits of smoking. As you can see, habits really make a difference in our lives.

作文评析

本文开门见山陈述观点，说理清晰。能运用举例对比等手法使本文观点更具说服力，如通过整理房间、微笑和吸烟三个习惯的后果正反两方举例，体现出小作者思维的宽度和缜密度。

从语言驾驭能力看，本文句式丰富，语言流畅，既善于活用考纲词组如 “get into the habit of”，又有如“leave others positive impressions”等地道的表达，既有较复杂的主从复合句，又有短小有力的简单句，错落有致，一气呵成。

朱萍

作文题目

Your class would like to make time boxes for people in 2040. You start collecting things today and put them in the boxes. The people in 2040 will be able to compare their life with life now. You also need to write a letter to the people in 2040 introducing one thing in the box. 【Oxford 9B Unit 2 Writing】

优秀习作

To the people of 2040,

In the box you can find an energy-saving lightbulb. They all come from 2014. By holding the little bulb in your hand, you can sense its smooth, transparent glass-made shell, which is of oval shape. Inside the shell, some metal-made wires tangle with each other in a regular order. This is used to enable electricity to pass through the whole bulb to provide energy. Attach the bulb to a base and then turn on the switch, you’ll find the little bulb lighting up the dark room. Another characteristic of it is that it saves more energy than other kinds of bulbs. So this lightbulb is “green”.

We hope this will give you some information about life in 2014.

Yours faithfully, Angel

作文评析

此篇作文题来自牛津9B第二单元课后Writing练习，它的内容是向未来2040年的人们写一封信，介绍一件我们这个时代所用的物品。作文题材是学生平时不常操练的说明文。

本文作者选取了节能灯泡作为对象。在描述过程中，她首先对灯泡的外形进行了细致的描写，从光滑、椭圆型的玻璃外壳，到内部互相缠绕在一起的金属丝。继而写到当电流通过，灯泡会照亮房屋的功能。最后还不忘介绍此种灯泡的特殊之处在于比起其它灯泡，它“节能环保”的特点。

全文脉络清晰，描写细腻、形象、生动，句式丰富，语言流畅，衔接自然，结构紧凑。充分体现了作者的语言表达能力，是一篇很好的说明文范例。

包琪瑞

作文题目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The thing that made me angry”.

( 以“让我生气的事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a guide:

 What made you angry?

 Describe the thing that made you angry in detail.

 How did you deal with the situation?

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) 优秀习作

There are few things in life more annoying than being laughed at. When I failed to solve the question on the blackboard and just stood in front of it without saying a word, I could hear those annoying whispers. This really made a perfectionist like me get angry. But I couldn’t let the anger get me out of control. Instead, I chose to ignore those ironic words and focus on the question. In addition, I decided to work harder after school to get myself improved. Due to all the changes I made, I believe I can avoid being laughed at in the future.

作文评析

全文结构清晰，层次分明，衔接流畅。本文从内容来看观点新颖、构思巧妙，以”being laughed at”被动语态的结构体现作者内心的不情愿，紧扣题目中的angry。作者侧重对于第二个问题的回答，以生动、细腻的文笔描写了站在黑板前的心理活动，让人读来有生临其境之感。而在结尾，作者不忘传播一丝正能量，驱赶了这个作文题可能带来的负面情绪。本文的内涵和语言都反映出作者的语言驾驭能力，以开头”There are few things … more … than …”来看，作者有丰富的语言积淀和极强的语言运用能力，因而全篇行文流畅，句式丰富，用词精准。本文值得初三学生学习借鉴。

李婧

作文题目

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I like reading ________ (detective stories, newspaper, magazines, comic strips, etc.) best.”

Use the following points as a guide:

 What do you like reading best?

 Why do you like reading them best?

 How do they influence your life?

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) 优秀习作

Magazines, as one form of ways to wisdom, are my favorite. Magazines combine the advantages of all forms of books. They have the diversity of information and at the same time, hold deep thoughts. There is rarely a thing that you can’t find in magazines. Reading magazines has provided me with the opportunity to broaden my horizon, gain knowledge and meanwhile, relax. Since they are more portable than others, you can roll them up and take them with you. In brief, reading magazines has brought laughter and knowledge to my life. I like reading magazines best.

作文评析

该篇文章开宗明义，点名文章意图。从内容上看，从杂志包罗万象，开拓读者视野;到杂志放松读者心情;再谈到杂志携带方便可以随时取阅等优点，清晰详实地表达出了作者的观点。文章结尾再次点题，全文简短却简练，切题又精炼。从语言而言，作者具有较强的语言功底，能够熟练运用多样的句式和词组，如meanwhile, since, in brief, provide with等，使文章更富有变化和可读性。语句之间衔接通畅，用词准确自然。词汇量丰富，如wisdom, diversity, opportunity, laughter等。如果文章能在三点优点前用明显的词汇加以区分，如first, furthermore, what’s more等，能使其更加一目了然。

贲方

作文题目

Someone says, “Sow an action, reap a habit; Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What’s your opinion on this? Please write an article of 60-80 words on the topic “Habits”.

有人说：“播种行为，收获习惯;播种习惯，收获命运。”对这种说法你怎么看?请以“习惯”为题写一篇60-80字的作文，谈谈你的观点。

优秀习作

Habits

No one can deny that habits play an important role in our life. Everyone should have good habits and break their bad habits as well. In my opinion, habits can change your living style or standard. For instance, if you are an efficient person, you certainly won’t stay up late. This is a good habit that leads to a healthy life. Obviously, little habits undoubtedly change our life and even our destiny.

作文评析

本文语言简练流畅，表达自然。句型句式较多样灵活。

本文开门见山地给出观点: 习惯在我们日常生活中占据着非常重要的位置。我们应该养成好习惯改掉坏习惯。之后给出习惯何以重要的理由，并且以举例子的形式来辅助强调好习惯养成的重要性。最后一句总结首尾呼应，再次点题，全文虽短，却流畅通顺，一气呵成。

何怡文

作文题目

John’s friend, Dick, has mixed feelings before studying abroad. He is worried that his English is not good enough and he is too shy to talk with strangers. Also he doesn’t want to leave his friends. Write him an email in at least 60 words to give him some suggestions.

优秀习作

Thank you for telling me your problem. Firstly, you should be more outgoing and confident. Learning a foreign language requires you to speak a lot to others. Since you’ll study abroad soon, it’ll be a great opportunity to improve your English. Remember not to be shy. Maybe you can watch some American TV series. That might help you know how people communicate in their daily life. Then you’ll find the confidence in communicating with strangers. Secondly, if you miss your friends here, you can call them and email them as well. The Internet makes it easy to communicate with people in different countries. Thirdly, you should try to be a brave boy. Life is always filled with ups and downs, but you should face all the obstacles bravely. No cross, no crown. I wish you no longer worry about your life there after reading my letter.

作文评析

这是一篇有篇幅限制和内容要求的考试作文。它很好地做到了结构整齐，条理清晰的要求。开头直入主题。主体部分以“firstly，secondly，thirdly”这些词汇清晰地亮出三点建议，并且使前后连贯。每一点建议都因为有总起句的概括，以及进一步阐述说明的支撑，而显得层次分明，内容充实而有说服力。语言方面，行文简凝流畅，词汇恰当丰富，句型准确多变，虽然未见很多课外词汇或有难度句型，但是小作者很好地做到了活学活用，这是我们应该推崇的学习意识和习惯。从文章结尾处的句子“Life is always filled with ups and downs, but you should face all the obstacles bravely. No cross, no crown.”，可以看出小作者平时注重了阅读和积累。

张樱

第四篇：中考英语作文范例：上海的变化

中考英语作文范例：上海的变化

题目：请以“Changes in Shanghai"为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Changes in Shanghai

1 300年前的上海

2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)

3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)

参考作文

Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.

300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。

Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.

今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。

Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.

上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。

点评：虽然2010年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。

第五篇：中考英语作文范文去上海旅游

I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.

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