上海市中考英语阅读

第一篇：上海市中考英语阅读

上海中考记叙文阅读的命题材料特点分析2

上海中考记叙文阅读的命题材料特点分析2 局”成了最完美的礼物，跋涉绝境的探险队员信心和勇气的支撑，生存的希望。再如《成全一棵树》中的树，《年轻的国旗》中的国旗，《龙眼与伞》中的龙眼和伞等等。

二、形式特点

我们知道，记叙文在形式上的特点主要指表达方式、记叙顺序和语言特点等。某种程度上讲，语文的形式正是语文学科的“核心价值”，语文独有的区别于其他学科的“语文味”的重要标志。同时，正是在品味语言，体味情感，回味生活的过程中，同学们才能沉浸于语言文字的魅力，感受作品的人性光辉，进而拜受作家的人格熏陶。因此，把握记叙文在形式上的特点，是培养语文能力的重要方面。中考记叙文材料在形式上呈现出以下特点。

(一)标题上重视双重含义与深刻内涵

纵观十年的中考记叙文阅读材料，发现标题是一大特色。绝大多数具有双重含义与深刻内涵。如2012年的《第一声喝彩》，文题显然提示了文章的主要内容：“我为女主人喝彩”和“同桌为我喝彩”;同时，我们更需把握的是其深刻内涵，即这珍贵的“第一声喝彩”将使对方变得更加完美，获得成功的动力，使生活充满爱与温情，使我们自己变得更加博大，因此我们应当真诚、热诚、至诚地为别人喝彩。又如，《龙眼与伞》对应的是自己与母亲之间的与“伞”相关的故事和刘老师的与“龙眼”有关的故事，一详一略两个故事，表现的是同一个主题：母爱就像伞，把阴晦留给自己，而把晴朗留给儿女。母爱也像龙眼，内里总是深藏着甘甜的汁液，赞美了母亲的慈爱、宽容。再如《在可可西里回头》中“回头”是指主人公在可可西里理解了母亲，决定回家;《年轻的国旗》是指年轻姑娘们的行动表明她们就像那面飘扬的国旗等等。

(二)记叙顺序上倾向于插叙

上海中考《考试手册》语文科中明确要求考察运用相关知识理解、分析记叙文思路结构的能力。《语文学科教学基本要求》要求同学们了解不同文体的一般思路。我们知道，初中阶段需要了解的记叙顺序有顺叙、倒叙和插叙等。插叙就是在记叙的过程中，插入一些有关的情节，再接叙原来的事情。其作用是在补充交代与中心相关的内容的基础上使文章更充实、更周密，中心思想更鲜明。值得注意的是，近十年中考从未直接考察记叙顺序的识别，但是却有多篇文章出现了插叙部分。分析清楚插叙部分在内容与结构上的作用，对于理清文本思路，把握文本结构有重要意义。如《龙眼与伞》第10段“《额尔古纳河右岸》初稿完成后，我到青岛改稿。一天午后，青岛海洋大学文学院的刘世文老师来看我，我们坐在一起聊天。她对我说，十几年前，她的儿子在沈阳得了重病，沈阳的亲属给刘老师打电话，让她赶快去沈阳。刘老师说，她坐上开往沈阳的火车后，脑子里全都是儿子的影子，他的笑脸，他说话的声音，他喊妈妈时的样子。她黯然神伤的样子引起了别人的同情，有个福建旅客抓了几颗龙眼给她。刘老师说，那个年代，龙眼在北方是稀罕的水果，她没吃过，她想儿子一定也没吃过。她没舍得吃一颗龙眼，而是一路把它们攥在掌心，想着带给儿子……”。又如《蘑菇转了一个弯》第

5、6段，《在可可西里回头》第

11、12段，《孩子和书》第10段等。 由以上分析，我得出了几点思考与看法：

1、在九年级最后的复习应考阶段，在阅读记叙文时注意联系教科书。如果在应试时，能够有意识地举一反三，将《年轻的国旗》与《枣核》，将《孩子和书》与《窃读记》等文章迁移、对照地联系、比较，自然更容易提纲挈领地领会文本内涵。因此我们应将教科书内的课文每一篇都学好、学透;并且，在复习阶段归纳同类主题的文章，如爱国情思类有《枣核》、《最后一课》、《五月卅一日急雨中》、《我爱这土地》、《向中国人脱帽致敬》等，亲情沟通类有《祖父和我》、《背影》、《秋天的怀念》、《外婆的手纹》、《爸爸的话儿落了》等，并分析其特点。

2、应从文章题目入手，快速定位文中的物件，使理解文本思路的过程变得行云流水。在明确插叙特征的基础上，理清文章主线与插叙部分的关系，整体把握文本的结构与思路。在理清行文思路的基础上，对文本进行整体性把握，从而确定其情感指向或心灵体悟。

3、在自主复习备考时，应注意选择著名作家文质兼美的，也就是说尽量选择有一定思想性，语文味又较浓的文段。尤其是精选符合记叙文阅读的命题材料特点的文段进行练习。避免“题海战术”，避免简单重复。在研究命题规律的基础上，甚至可以自行命题，自行解答，当然必要时可以请教老师。同时必须重视对语文能力的综合性培养，重视对优美的语言文字的品味，重视语文素养的提高。这也将是上海中考语文求新、求变、求活的必然出路。

第二篇：上海中考英语作文3

COMPOSITION 1

I Would Like to Be a Polite PersonI am pretty sure that I would like to be a polite person throughout my life. I am brought up in a family whose members are polite to each other. My parents share the same quality with me. I am taught never to be rude to anyone else even if he behaves badly enough. I am aware that a polite person should have an air of tolerance. My mother always says, “Ignore the ill-mannered people because they do not know what they are doing. Be polite to those who deserve your respect.” I also hold many other good manners to be a polite person，such as being friendly and helpful to others, keeping graceful postures all the time, trying to be understanding, talking in a modest way and so on. All in all, my family’s motto, never stop being polite, will stay with me forever. (146) COMPOSITION 2

I Would Like to Be a Soldier

My dream changes all the time. But the other day, I happened to hear an English song named Tell Me Why, which tells something about poor kids whose country is in war. At that moment, I made up my mind that I would like to be a soldier in the future. If I become a soldier, I can fight for people’s freedom. I can help those who suffer a lot in war, especially the innocent kids, who are supposed to sit in class studying, just like the ones living in the peaceful world. I will do whatever I can to realize my dream. (103)

COMPOSITION 3

I Would Like to Be a Singer

The other day, I was on my computer going on You Tube to listen to music. I happened to find out that one song had almost five hundred million views. At that moment, I decided that I would like to be a lead singer in the future.

I think it would be awesome seeing tons of fans wearing a shirt with my face right in the center. How great it is to hear my song played on the radio that billions of people will listen to! What a delightful sense to have my face appear on the cover of a magazine! Then I can afford to tour the world purchasing expensive and nice clothes. Maybe I will be rich enough to buy a cruise ship.someday. (146)

All in all, being a rich and famous lead singer is my dream. I really hope it will come true

COMPOSITION 4

On Helping with Family Chores

Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they do not have time to help their parents with the housework. I do not think it is true which make them appear to be all excuses.In my opinion, doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility. We cannot depend on others all our life. Doing housework can make us independent. Thus we can take better care of ourselves when growing up. Besides, sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents. What’s more, I am aware that trying to do some housework, among which hard work can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise, can keep us healthy and strong.

On weekdays, I often clean my bedroom every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. Also I offer to carry heavy bags from the supermarket.

Just as the saying goes, “One cannot make a big success without being self-reliant.” Therefore, I hold the opinion that it is necessary for students to share the housework. (194)

第三篇：2013上海中考英语作文

2013年中考的英语考试已经结束了，作文题目为 “How to protect myself”

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 结合生活中的一个场景，写如何保护我自己 参考下列词汇：calm downask„for helpprevent„fromindanger 作文题解析： 这个题目延续了去年出题的方式，即给题干不给要点，但要点在题干中，并要求学生辨认写作要点。往往有以下几个点容易出错，大家看你有没有? 1. 过多写具体事例，重点应该是保护自己的方式 2. 把myself 写成us,ourselves, 甚至himself, herself先来第一篇，著名的张杰老师写了一篇关于火灾的： As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. I will take fires as an example. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is known to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.初中英语名师"乐乐"-Demon老师贡献了一篇关于地震的： Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.接下来是大米老师的 ： A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought

endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caught in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.

第四篇：对上海市英语中考卷的评价

2012上海英语中考总体感想

整份试卷注重学生实际所学，覆盖面广，体现了课程标准的要求，重视对基础知识的识记与基本技能运用的考查和对各种语言能力实践能力的考查，试题内容关切学生生活实际，折射时代信息和社会热点，配图不做作、不夸张，无偏题、怪题，是考量学生在初中学习英语成效的很好的工具，这一份质量上佳的试卷。

阅读部分的语篇皆颇有代表性：A篇是一封感谢信，内容体现遵守规章制度和倡导助人为乐的思想，试题选项设置合理，涉及和语篇相关的人物、情感、原因、目的、行为和地点信息，难度适中。B篇介绍了一个名为Tiffany的心理成长轨迹，反映了参加体育运动对人的健康成长、建立自信心等的积极作用，题目考查考生对语篇的通篇理解和上下文的联系，考查信息丰富，其中第8

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3、85题更好地考查了学生的语言应用能力。C篇提供了一篇体现社会热点的语篇，以伦敦奥运会为背景，介绍城市交通，传达语言文化。作为首字母填空，难度有所下降。但考生必须考虑句意、句群、词性、词形等，这个题目还是能较好拉开差距的。D篇是一篇反映未来生活的家庭生活记录，内容新颖、信息丰富，应该能吸引考生，试题设置合理，有较高的区分度，第9

4、96和97题需要考生对文章作进一步信息处理后才能正确回答，第98题是半开放式题目，鼓励考生表达个人思想情感。四个语篇从思想和内容上对学生成长都有积极的意义。

9选8的新题型很好地体现了该题型的考查特点，突出词性的合理分类，题目设置强调考生对语篇上下文的理解。内容新颖，对学生成长有借鉴意义。

本次中考命题为初三教学工作和中考复习工作起到了很好的导向性作用，尤其在词汇语法部分，突出了基本知识和基本技能的考查，考的都是些常识性的东西，但要告诫学生养成认真读题的好习惯，起到了风向标的作用。能力部分：听力难度尚可接受，但不能掉以轻心;本卷进一步突出了读和写要求，很好地给我们传达了一个信息：没有足够的阅读摄入量，很难写出好的文章来，平时就应要求学生做好积累、做足阅读和写作的训练。

以上纯属个人观点。

上海市敬业初级中学 范兵

第五篇：2012上海初三中考英语作文

2012上海初三中考英语作文范文(5)Write a passage at least 60 words on the topic “When I met a

difficulty„”(以“当我遇到困难时„„”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文)

Use the following points as a guide (短文须包含下列要点) What difficulty did you meet with?

How did you solve the problem?

How did you feel after you solved it?

What do you think of you way?

 When I met difficulty studying English

A famous saying goes “What ever difficulties you meet with, never give up half way”.

I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school. Though I tried my best to recite the passages and spell new expressions,it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers and understand some long sentences in newspaper articles. With the tips from my English teacher, I was determined to listen to the English programmes over the radio every day and follow it to practice my spoken English. Meanwhile, I picked up some key words to guess the meanings in the context and looked up them in the dictionary later. “Practice makes perfect”. All these practice helps to improve English in a short time. When I found my English was not what it used to be, I felt very excited. Now I think if a good way is matered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English.

2012上海初三中考英语作文范文(6)Describe how you did something successfully. The title of the story is “A Success Story of My Own”.

I was not very good at sports. Last summer some friends of mine went to swim one afternoon. I went with them and saw what fun it was to jump into the water in the hot sun. Then I made up my mind to learn how to swim. Jimmy gave me some advice. She said, “Why not join the

morning training course in the swimming pool? But you have to get up a bit earlier. It begins at 6:30. They have very good coaches there.” I was glad to take her advice, though I used to stay in bed in the morning. I was sure nothing could stop me. I went to the training course the very next day. Learning to swim was no easy job for me. It took me quite some time to pick up

enough courage to jump into water for the first day. I worked very hard, overcoming difficulties one after another. My coach was kind and patient. When I had learned the movements of the feet and hands and how to move them in harmony, I began to learn how to breathe in water. It proved the hardest thing in the world. The coach showed me many times, but every time I tried I swallowed water instead of fresh air. I didn’t give up, keeping trying until suddenly I found I could. I succeeded!

2012上海初三中考英语作文范文(7)

Use the following points as a guide

My Wish

What is you wish? (what do you want to be in the future? What do you want to have one day?)

Why is it you wish?

What will you do to make your wish come true?

My wish is to be teacher when I grow up because both my parents are teachers. My father teaches Chinese and my mother is teacher of English. So I am growing up on the school campus. I almost know every teacher in the school. They all like me and some of them say I should do something else when I grow up. However, I still want to be a teacher like my parents and have students all over the country because I like children. Of course I must study hard and do well in all the subjects. Thus I can enter a normal university after I finish my middle school.