第一篇：广东短文改错范文
高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习
高二英语短文改错专题复习高二英语短文改错专题复习 知识总结归纳：
短文改错的题是一篇意思连贯，但有九行文字中各有一个语法或用词错误的英语短文。它所涉及的知识面很广，能力要求较高。而且题中所设的错误常常是考生自己在写作中经常出的语法错误，是专门针对考生的弱点而设的。但它又从另一个角度考查了语法知识的运用。因此，做题时，应从以下几个方面着手解题：动词使用错误;名词使用错误;形容词，副词使用错误;连词使用错误;代词使用错误;冠词使用错误;介词使用错误，上下文逻辑错误等。
在研究每一行的句子时，首先把握句子的意思，然后划分句子的成分：主语;谓语部分;宾语;状语：地点，时间，方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句，先分开各部分小的分句，根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。
(一)名词使用错误：名词一般在句中做主语或宾语，名词的错误主要在于名词单，复数的错误使用。
1. They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有lots of修饰，应当改为复数形式。 2. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有quite a few修饰，应当改为复数形式。
3. We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.：根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。
4. Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day. ：return在此是名词，应当改为复数形式：many returns of the day是祝贺人们生日的固定用语：祝你健康长寿。
5. He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate应当是复数形式。
6. On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture应当改成复数形式，因为作者一路上忙于照相，不止仅照一张像。 另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。
That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根据句子意思：有时一个小小的谎言(善意的)可以使你的朋友的感情免遭伤害friend应当改为friend’s
(二)动词使用的错误：
<一> 作为谓语动词，注意谓语动词在时态，语态，与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。 1. My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school team. ：全句的基本时态应当是现在时，was应改为am 2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football，动名词作主语是单数形式，应改为：gives 3. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是说过去的事情used to do ：过去常常做某事。use改为：used 4. …the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down.：时态错误。全句是过去时态，passes 改为passed 5. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是伴随状语，是第二个谓语动词，应该为visited. 6. The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定语从句中的谓语动词use 的主语是先行词a computer network，是单数形式，所以按主谓一致的原则use改为：uses. <二> 作为非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词，动名词，不定式形式的使用错误，同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。
1. Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes，应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。
2. He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定语从句是说：他把业余时间花在学习上，按句型结构：spend some time doing something.所以studied应改为：studying. <三> 形容词，副词使用错误：
注意：① 形容词和副词的比较级，原级，最高级使用方面的问题。② 修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。③ 以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。④ 形容词和副词的混用。
1. I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修饰比较级形式，在此没有比较级的意义，所以去掉much. 2. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容词与副词混用。Have a wonderful time：过得非常愉快。wonderfully 改为：wonderful 3. …his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very改为：so 4. People will work few hours than they do now. ：这是一个含比较级的句子。(句中有than)，few 改为比较级形式fewer 5. Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比较级smaller前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。more改为much 6. Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved. 形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving. <四> 连词使用错误：并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句，状语从句，定语从句中主，从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。 1. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为：and 2. My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. 前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义。but改为：and 3. It deosn’t matter that I would win or not. Matter后面的从句是whether…or not结构。That改为：whether 4. An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根据句子意思：在Eskimo男孩杀死他的第一只北极熊之后，才真正成为一名男子汉。Since改为：after 5. The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定语从句修饰先行词The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在从句中做地点状语，应加关系副词where. 解题思路：
首先要理解整个短文的含义，逻辑关系，篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。 【典型例题】
A(2004全国卷I) Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. from describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3. as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. at a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. √
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6. why
don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. strangers once. I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9. but seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. about去掉 分析：
1. 来自一个小镇的新生。强调“来自于”用介词：from 2. describe oneself as +形容词，所以quietly改为quiet 3. 缺少连词，这是同级比较结构as…as ，加上as 4. 介词错误：词组laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。
6. 宾语从句连词的错误，that 本身没有意义可以省略，本句是说：我不知道他们为什么不喜欢我。
7. 时态错误，全篇用的是现在时。
8. 名词单复数的错误，主语是we，宾语与主语呼应，应该是复数形式。 9. 这是一个并列句，前后为转折关系。 10. 根据句子意思，about多余。
B全国卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1. of a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3. having your books. Recently even though, many people 4. 去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 5. √ They have been reports in America about people 6. There trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7. personal Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8. easy information are good to society. For example, you 9. is can find such information like how to kill people. 10. as The problem will become more serious in the future. 分析：
1. all kinds of是固定词组，of 不能缺少. 2. a few 后面的名词是复数形式。minute是可数名词 3. without是介词，后面跟动词ing形式。
4. even though：即使，此处表示“虽然”。应去掉even 6. 此处表示：在美国有报道说…..应当用表示“有…”的句型：there be… 7. 此处表示“个人的信息”，需要用形容词做定语。personal：个人的。 8. is后面是形容词形式。
9. information是不可数名词。后面的谓语动词用单数形式。 10. such…as是固定句型。 【模拟试题】(答题时间：45分钟) A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books. Recently even though, many people 4. _____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5. _____ They have been reports in America about people 6. _______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8.________ information are good to society. For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people. 10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future. B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________
The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6. _________ the kitchen looking at me. Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7. _________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8. _________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10. ________
参考答案 A 1. 在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短语。这里缺少了介词of 2. 名词“数”的错误, minute是可数名词，有a few修饰， 应改为：minutes 3. have改为：having：without是介词，后面的动词应该是动名词形式。 4. 去掉even：even though：即使。此处表示：虽然。 5. 此行正确。
6. They改为：There：本句表示：有一份报告。用there be 句型。 7. person改为：personal：此处指个人的信息，应该用形容词形式。 8. easily改为easy：be后面接形容词。
9. are改为is：主语information是不可数名词。
10. like改为as：such…as为固定句型，表示：象……这样的……。 B 分析：
1. boy是可数名词，第一次提到，前面必须加a 2. 本句是说：欢渡春节。When在此多余. 3. 用词不当，cooker：炊具。Cook：厨师。 4. 前后两个分句是并列关系。
6. be about to do something 是固定句型。 7. Shake her hand在本句中做伴随状语。应该用ing形式。 8. 全句都在叙述过去的事，用过去时。
9. 本句是说：控制自己。宾语应改为反身代词。 10. several后的名词应是复数形式。
第二篇：短文改错练习
短文改错专练：
1 March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!
Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.
I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.
3 Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses. I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.
Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed
1 to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.
Yesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.
Last weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!
My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can
2 improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.
Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week. I’m really sorry. I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly. I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was. So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken. Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus. And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing. Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late. I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone. Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me. Hope to hear you soon.
Yours, Jack
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.
Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad. They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent. Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future. Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them. He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. Besides, the cost is too much for his family. In my opinions, I should continue to study in China. As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.
3 Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misinformation. It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us. And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.
My grandfather had had enough of his cat. He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess. So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town. He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her. A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep. My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather. He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention. He decided he will never give her away again.
Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society. This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did. People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past. Customs and beliefs have changed very slower. They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better. Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next. Yet changes do take place. All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other. In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.
My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground. Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.
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Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for the health.
Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email. A cave! You know we’re on holidays in Spain. Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first. We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good. I think I ate too much ice cream the day before. Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada. However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed! Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking. Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful. We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave. We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything. Take care!
Ben
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television. He decided to set up himself. He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses. After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV. The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV. That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside. When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire. Fortunately, the fire was putting out. It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.
Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others. It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves. But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas. We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better
5 than the one we received. They forget to think of the sick and the homeless. The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed. What a shame!
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him. Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes. At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door. Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move. Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house. When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy. But it was too late and she was arrested. My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.
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Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams. Some copy from each other; some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note; others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones. Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects. For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students. For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future. So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating. At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.
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Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student. At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class. I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent. Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates. I believe you will be one of their friend too. Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing. I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
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第三篇：短文改错教案
Error CorrectionTeaching Aims: 1. Ability Aims:
⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting
errors. (2) Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly. 2. Emotion Aim: Stimulate students’ interests in learning English. Teaching Important Points: ⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting errors. (2) Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly. Teaching Difficult Points: ⑴ Help the students to improve their ability of finding and correcting errors. (2) Get the students to use some words and expressions correctly. Teaching Methods: Individual, pair work to make every student act in class. Teaching Aids: the multimedia
Teaching Procedures: Step1. Greetings : Step2. Presentation Show the following verse about error correction to the students.
动词形，名次数， 还有注意形和副; 非谓语，细辨别， 习惯用法要记住; 句子成分多分析， 逻辑错误需关注; 冠词连词常光顾。
Step3. Explanation and Exercises Explain every line of the verse to the students and give the students some exercises. Step3. Summary and Homework
第四篇：短文改错题库
1、 Mrs Brown was walking near a playground. She was a hurry to visit her four grandchildren. She missed them very much, because she had seen them for quite a long time. She was walking while suddenly she saw a ball coming in her direction. She was already in her seventy. Should she kick thc hall to send it back and should she just go past leaving
Key：
1.在第二个was后加in。in a hurry匆忙地。
2.正确。
3.在had后加not。根据上文She missed them ...。
4.while改为when。when就在那时。
5.seventy改为seventies。in one’s seventies在某人七十几岁时。
6.and改为or。
7.greatly改为great。with great care小心地。
8.out改为into。表“球进了”。
9.won改为win。help后接不定式。help (to) do。
10.在team前加the。
2、Both my parents.was musicians. Neither of them played a musical instrument, and they both sang, and there was lots of music at home. There was old piano at school and I could keep my hands off it! Finally an old teacher in the school recognized that I want to learn, and she gave me some lessons. When I was nine, I played in the end-of-term concert at school. At the age of thirteen, my music teacher said to me, “There is nothing more which I can teach myself. From now on, you need a world class teacher and a top-class piano.” So I went to a school for music student. Then at the age of twenty two I went to the Paris to study the piano.
Key：
1.was改为were。
2.and改为but。从上下文可知。
3.在old之前加an。plano为可数名词。
4.could改为couldn’t。根据句意。
5.want改为wanted。应用过去式。
6.which改为that。先行词为nothing，笑系代词用that。
7.把myself改为you。从上下文可知。
8.正确。
9.student改为蛊udents。
10.去掉Paris前的定冠词the。Paris为专有名词，前不加冠问。
3、Englishman and Americans do not shake hand as much as we do. Most people shake hands when he meet for first time and are introduced each other. On most occasions (场合) they only greet one another. At social functions (社会活动) it considered good manner to wait for the wonlall to extend her hand first. While shaking hands you look at the person instead of looking at elsewhere.
Key:
1. Englishman改为Englishmen。
2. hand改为hands。
3. he改为they。
4. for改为for the。
5. each改为to eaeh。
6. 正确。
7. it改为it is。
8. manner改为manners。
9. look前加should。
10. 去掉at。
4、Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that 1 get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family—they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.
Key;
1. 正确。
2.去掉any。
3.在can后加to。
4.did改为do。
5.family改为Jhome。
6. subject改为subjects。
7. a改为the。
8.去掉about。
9. and改为or。
10. What改为How。
5、Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. 1 was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my fanfily. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any Frogramme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. Now sotneone at home reads instead.
Key;
1. 去掉much。
2.去掉wasa。
3. watch改为watching。
4. unfortunate改为un-fortunately。
5. among改为in。
6. the改为one。
7. am改为was。
8. a lot后加of。
9. 正确。
10. someone改为everyone / everybody。
6、Today I visited the Smiths—my first time visit to a American family. They live in a small town. It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. They offered me coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They were eager know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.
Key:
1. 去掉time。
2.把第一个a改为an。
3. for改为of。It’s very kind of sb. to do...。
4. drove改为drive。并列的不定式。
5. his改为their。The Smiths,指Smith一家人。
6. 正确。
7. have改为had过去时。
8.在eager后加to。be ea-ger to know...急于知道。
9. question改为questions。
10.去掉in。在next (last,this, that) year (month, week) 前不用介词。
7、Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been developed very rapidly. From here you can travel everywhere by the sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connects with Beijing started being used, The places around our city is rich in natural resources. And we have enough supply in electricity and energy resources. The public order is nice. The government will support investors with many ways. We wish more foreign friend to invest in our city.
Key：
1.去掉me后的to。
2.在set up前加was。
3.developed改为developing。
4.去掉by后面的the。
5.connects改为eonnectcd。
6.is改为are。
7. in改为of。
8.正确。
9.with改为in
10. friend 改为 friends。
第五篇：20单句改错和2短文改错
20单句改错
1.Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.
2.No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to. 3.Radios can be very noise. 4.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials,
5.All planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don’t real need. 6.When I first learned to write in English，I ran into many difficulty. 7.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.
8.My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 9.I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.
0.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 11.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 12.She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 13.They all said the story is a good one.
14. Their word were a great encouragement to me. 15. I’m a newcomer here of a small town. 16.I would describe myself as shy and quietly. 17. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. 18.I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. 19.I feel unhappy every day, do I? 20. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. 参考答案：
1. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词， 故加 of。/ 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。/ read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。 2. program 改为 programs。
3. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词， noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。 4. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在一年中”。
5. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“让某人做某事”。/ real 改为really。6.difficulty-difficulties 7. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。/. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体; 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。
8. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。
9. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。
10. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语/ me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。
11. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词， 后面应接宾语。
12. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构， 前后时态均为一般过去时态。 13. is-was
14. word 改为 words。根据句意， 此处应为“他们的话语， ”用 words。 15. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。
16. quietly改为quiet。describe后接名词或代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把„描写成什么/什么样子”。 17. well前加as。as well as“跟„(做得)一样好”。 18. to改为at。laugh to...意为“对„大笑”。laugh at...意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。 19.do-don’t 20. that改为why。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。
2短文改错
No. 1 In the United States there are， strict speaking， __1__ no national holiday， for each state must， through legislative enactment __2__
or executive proclamation，appoint the day which each holiday is celebrated.
__3__ Congress and the president may establish legal holidays for the District of Columbia and for federal employees throughout the states and territories; and by long custom，days that receive nationwide observation， such as Christmas， Thanksgiving， __4__ Labor Day， Independent Day， and New Year’s Day， are uniformly set
__5__ apart by all states as legal， or public holidays. In 1968， federal legislation established __6__ Columbia Day as a legal holiday for the District of Columbia and for the federal government beginning at 1971. __7__ The law also provided begun in 1971 federal employees would be granted__8__ three-days weekends by observing Washington’s Birthday on the third Monday in February.__9__ Memorial Day on the last Monday in May， Columbus Day on the second Monday in October， and Veteran Day on the forth Monday on October. By 1971，most of the states also __10__ adopted the new dates. 参考答案：
1.strict改为strictly 2.holiday改为holidays。因为原句的谓语动词为复数are，所以holiday必须使用复数。另外no后面可以用复数也可以用单数。 3.which前面加上on。因为先行词the day在关系从句钟做状语，还原回去应为：each holiday is celebrated on the day，所以必须加on。
4.obsevation改为observance。observation意思为“观察，观测”，observance则表示“遵守，庆祝”。
5.Independent改为Independence。独立日的说法是“Independence Day”。
6.apart改为aside。set apart 指“使分离，使分开”，语义不同，set aside表示“留出，保留”的意思。 7.at改为in 8.begun改为beginning。 9.three-days 改为three-day。 10.also前面加had。
No. 2 黑洞 What is a black hole? Well, it is difficult to answer the question, as the terms we would normally use to describe a scientific phenomenon __1__ are adequate here. Astronomers and scientists think that a black hole is __2__ a region of space which matter has fallen and from which nothing can __3__ escape—not even light. But we can’t see a black hole. A black hole __4__ exerts a strong gravitational pull and yet it has no matter. It is only space—or thus we think. How can this happen? __5__ The theory is that some stars explode when their density increases to a particular point; they “collapse” and sometimes a supernova occurs. The collapse of a star may produce a “White Dwarf” of a “neutronstar”—
a star which matter is so dense that if continually shrinks by the force of __6___ its own gravity. But if the star is very large, this process of shrinking may be so intense that a black hole results in. Imagine the earth reduced to the __7__ size of a marble, but still having the same masses and a stronger __8__ gravitational pull, and you have some ideas of the force of a black hole. __9__ And no matter near the black hole is sucked in. __10__ 参考答案：
1 将as 改为since或者because。在表示原因的连接词中，as引导的原因状语从句表示已知的愿原因。
2 将adequate 改为inadequate，或者在are后加not。从逻辑上分析，因为我们拥有的科学术语“不充足”，所以才无法回答这个问题，所以用否定形式。
3 在which 前加into。这是一个定语从句，意思是“黑洞是太空中物质可以掉进去的地方”，所以定语从句应该为“into which matter has fallen”。
4 将but 改为 so。 上文已提到“连光都无法从黑洞中逃出”，所以我们根本无法看到黑洞。这里应该是因果关系，而不是转折关系。 5 将thus改为so。这句话的意思是“那只是空间—或者我们认为它只是空间”。so做 think 的宾语，thus 只能做连词，不能做宾语。
6 将which 改为whose。这个定语从句的意思是“它是一颗星，其密度非常大，由于自身的引力，它在不断地收缩”。matter 属于star，所以关系代词应该用whose。
7 去掉in。result为不及物动词，意为“形成了”，而“result in sth。”意为“导致某结果”。 8 将masses 改为mass。mass 可指“大量的物质”，而“the masses”特指“劳动群众”，用在此处不妥。
9 将ideas 改为idea。“idea”在表达“印象”时，为不可数名词，不可以用复数。 10 将no改为any。分析便知，任何在黑洞附近的东西都会被吸进去。