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第一篇：a级作文范文

A级作文

Effective Practical English Writing for Students

一. 社交与商务写作

1.询问信(Letter of Inquiry)

询问信是我们收集信息,获取所要服务,样品,价目表等的重要手段。相应的回复信要先说明收到对方来信,阐明所提供的帮助有哪些,或委婉拒绝给予所提的要求,并对此做一解释。

November 29,2004 Dear Mr. Peter Kevil,

I am pleased to write to you for some information about the jet printer produced in your company.

I would like to buy it, and I will be very grateful if you could give me information about the price and the service after sale.

Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely ,

David Johnson 常用句型

• 1.开场白(写信目的及自我介绍) • We learned from your advertisement that you are… • I am a … who is fond of… • I plan to visit…

• I am writing to inquire about… 2.提出要求

• Kindly send me your…

• I shall be glad if you send me by mail as following: • I would like to get more details of… • I wonder if there is…

• Please let me know if I could… 3.结束语(表示感谢和期待) *Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you. * I would be grateful if you could give me a prompt reply. *Your favorable attention to my request would be highly appreciated.

2.邀请信(Letter of Invitation)

邀请信在社交活动中应用广泛,特别是在各大型招待会、宴会、婚礼、庆祝会等场合。

邀请信的复信要求简明扼要。接受邀请的信中应重复邀请信中的某些内容,如邀请时间。

谢绝的回复信中应阐明不能应邀的原因。

July 15,2006 Dear Marry and Jack, We are planning a party in our home at 4:00 p.m. on Saturday, July 22. We wonder if you would liketo join us. There is a new swimming pool and you can come with your beautiful swimming suites.We will be expecting you on Saturday. Please let me know if you can make it.

Yours ever,

Mr. and Mrs. White

1 常用句型(正式邀请) 1. We are pleased to invite… to visit…

2. You are warmly invited to attend… 3. Please confirm that you will be able to attend…

4. We would like to invite you to a reception in honour of…

5. It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at the ceremony to be held on Tuesday at Royal Hotel. 6.It would be a great honour to have your presence at the dinner.

3. 感谢信(Letter of Thanks)

受到外国团体或友人的热情款待、收到别人赠送的礼物、得到别人帮助或为了感谢他人提供的就业机会时,都应写信表示感谢。其特点是: 时间及时、简明扼要、着重事由、感情真挚。

March 8,2004 Dear Mrs. Tang, I would like to take this opportunity t o express my heartfelt thanks to your hospitality. Thank you for the unforgettable visit to so many interesting places. It is the first time in my life that I have enjoyed the wonderful views of the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. Because of your well-planned arrangement, I really spent three pleasant days in Beijing. Again, thanks so much for your kindness.

Yours sincerely, Alice Brown 常用句型

• I am writing to thank you for the memorable weekend I had at your home. • Thank you so much for…

• The kindness of friendship has warmed me greatly. • It is so thoughtful of you to remember my birthday. • I am writing on behalf of … to thank you for your kindness and hospitality extended to us on our visit to… • How delightful to receive your… 4. 祝贺信

在西方,逢年过节 、升迁、毕业、获得成就时,都可能收到亲朋好友或其他组织的祝贺信,使你倍感喜悦、温暖。信要写得亲切、真诚、充满热情。 Dear Mr. Smith,

It was delighted news for me to learn of the establishment of your own Foreign Language Training Center. Please accept my most sincere congratulations.

With your brilliant background and outstanding achievement, I believe the new centre will make a contribution to the development of education. I am sure it will be a great success.

Yours sincerely,

Tom 常用句型 1.祝贺升迁

• I wish to congratulate you on your successful

performance. • I am so delighted to learn that you have been promoted as a…

2 • Congratulations on your promotion! 2.祝贺订婚、结婚

• What a delighted surprise to know you are married! • Allow me to offer my sincere congratulations to you. • I’m delighted to /pleased to hear that you are engaged.

5.慰问信

亲友、同事或他人生病、去世、受伤、遭遇不幸和蒙受损失时,往往写慰问信以表示同情。虽然其格式与普通书信基本相同,但要规范、简短、感情真诚。

January 16, 2006 Dear Tom,

We are saddened to know that you are in hospital, and on behalf of everyone I send you best wishes for a full and speedy recovery.

We will visit you when you are feeling better. Please let us know if there is anything you need in hospital. Please don’t worry about your work, as we are looking after everything for you during your absence.

Yours sincerely,

Mike 常用句型

• I am sorry at the news that your house was on fire yesterday. • I was shocked to hear of Mary’s death and wish to extend our sympathy to you and your children. • I just can’t tell you how sorry I was to listen of /that… • Please let us know if there is anything you need in hospital. • All of us were saddened /distressed/grieved to know…

6. 求职信(Letter of Application)

求职信属于一种重要的个人公务信函。通常是在信中提及一些重要的事实,然后附上一份个人简历。

June 25, 2004 Dear Sir or Madam,

It is my pleasure to apply for the position of the General Manager’s secretary in your company, which you have advertised in China Daily last week.

I am 24 and graduated from Longjiang Technical College with excellent academic records in all courses. While I majored in Business Administration, I am skillful at shorthand and typing with a speed of 90 and 70 words per minute respectively.

I am enclosing my resume and a recent photograph.

I look forward to your early reply.

Yours

faithfully,

Wang Manli

3 常用句型

• In answer to your advertisement in …for a …, I would like to apply for the position. • I have learned from…that your firm is looking for a … and I would like to apply for this job. • I am writing in response to the advertisement you placed in… for…, I have pleasure in applying for the post. • Born in … in…, I graduated from … University majoring in… • I have been working in … since my graduation.

7.投诉信( Letter of Complaint)

投诉信用于向某单位或某公司的负责人提出的不满和意见。 常用句型: • I am writing about … I bought in your shop/ store … when I was in… • I am quite annoyed at this. • I am dissatisfied with your…

• I demand your attention and a refund as soon as possible.

December 23, 2001 Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing about a camera I bought in your shop last month when I was on business in Guangzhou. I took a lot of pictures with it.However, when I arrived home and got the film developed, there is nothing on the picture! I guess there must be something wrong with the camera.

I am quite annoyed at this because at your price I expect the top quality. I have sent the camera back to you by post with a copy of the receipt, and I demand your attention and a refund as soon as possible.

Looking forward to an early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Lan

二、常见应用文体写作 1.简历 (Resume) 简历一般包括: 1) 个人信息: 姓名、地址、联系方式、特长(专业表现、科研能力、语言能力等) 。 2) 求职意向: 应聘岗位或工作领域。 3) 教育背景: 学历、学位、培训经历。

4) 工作经历: 以前从事的工作。如果是应届毕业生,可填写兼职、实习内容、社会工作等。 5) 其他: 奖励、证书、作品、兴趣及证明人或介绍信。 2002,12 B

Resume

Name: Li Aihua

Sex: male

Date of birth: May 16, 1980

Marital Status: single

Address: 61 Fuxing Road, Beijing

Job Objective: seeking a job as a computer programmer

Education: I graduated from the Computer Department of Huaguang Technical College with

excellent scores in 2001.

Foreign Languages: I have been studying English for three yeas at college. I am able to read proficiently and communicate fluently in English.

Hobbies: swimming and going online

2.广告(Advertisement)

一个广告要想吸引消费者的注意力一般要做到: 用词简单、朗朗上口;句式结构简单、短促有力;采用多种表达方式,符合大众的消费心理。

Job Vacancy (招聘广告)

Whirlpool Company has 20 branches throughout the country and the Headquarters of it is in Tianjin. The company is famous for its manufacture and marketing of electrical appliances. It is seeking for a sales manager now. Qualifications:

Chinese citizenship, aged 35～40

College diploma in Marketing, Economics or related fields

Minimum of 5 years of experience in sales management

Proficiency in English speaking and writing

Willingness to travel frequently

Skills in computer operating Contact: Mr. John Smith

Tel: 24876669 常用句型

• …offers you the job opportunity of…

• 2～3 relevant working experience in Quality or Manufacturing environment, experience in joint venture preferably. • • • • Essential qualities are sales leadership, marketing and relationship management. Qualified applicants will have interviews. Good command of English is required. Candidates should go for business trip all over China frequently.

3.预订(Reservation)

这类信件格式简明,但内容具体,如需要预订房间、座位或机票的等级、类型、数量,以及预订的具体日期等。有的预订须注明付款方式。

December 5 Dear Sir or Madam,

We’d like to reserve a single room and a three double rooms both with baths in your hotel from December 25 to 27. A meeting room will also be wanted for business negotiation on the afternoon of December 26.

We will be expecting an early reply from you about the possibility of such a reservation, the charge and whether a deposit is needed.

Thanks for your attention.

Yours sincerely,

Li Qiang

5 常用句型

• On Jan. 10 I reserved two tables for 12 people for breakfast at 9 in the morning. • There has been a change in our plans and occasion will have to be postponed until…at… • If you accommodate us, please let us know the price of the tickets so we send you a check without delay. • Please send me confirmation of this change in flight schedule.

4. 便条、留言条(Notes and Messages)

便条、留言条主要用于家人、同学、朋友和同事之间。格式简单，语言简洁。内容包括:日期、称呼、正文、署名等项。

留言条

June,12 Mary,

I didn’t see you this morning. Here is a piece of good news for you. There will be a fashion show tomorrow evening a the Exhibition Center. It must be wonderful. Shall we go there? Let’s meet at the school gate tomorrow at 6 p.m.

Mike

请假条

Tuesday Mr. smith,

I’m awfully sorry that I cannot attend the meeting to be held this Friday. I’ve got a cold and the doctor said I must stay in bed for a couple of days. So I’m writing to ask for a leave of three days. I hope that my request will be given due consideration.

Encl. Doctor’s Certificate (医生证明)

Linda

5.通知与启事(Notices)

Notice在英文中可以指书面的通知、公告、启事或海报。主要是向公众或有关人士发布信息。有时也称作 Announcement 。文通知的格式与中文通知大体相同,由标题、正 文、落款(或时间)三部分组成。

1.内容简洁清楚;

2.多采用被动语态，人称用第三人称;

3.注意使用固定的句型或套语

Contribution Wanted (征稿启事)

Our English Corner has drawn extensive attention from English readers and is becoming popular. For the sake of publishing more good English writings, we seek for contribution from all walks of life. College students, English learners, foreign students and friends are all welcome. Your contribution should meet the following requirements.

(1) A short story

(2) Anecdotes happening around you

The article should be limited to 500 words.

The article should be addressed to :

Wang Ping

Beihai Evening Post

No.10 Xinmin Street

Beihai 230034

Or send us E-mail: Monuica@public.cc.cngd.com

Notice of Speech To: Students

Date: June 10, 2002 From: The Students’ Union Reporter: Mr. John Smith, a well-known professor Time: 7:00 p.m. next Friday Place: The Lecture Hall Subject: Talking about the economic development and the future of the light industry in China after China’s entering WTO.

Note: Students who are interested can ask Li Ming for tickets. He will be available in Room 601 Building 5, from 7 p.m. to 9 p.m. every evening. 常用句型

• All are warmly welcomed. • We are pleased to inform that… • This is to inform that…

• A lecture will be held in …(place) on…(date). • All are expected to attend the seminar.

6.海报(Posters)

海报是人们日常生活中极为常见的一种招贴形式，多用于电影、戏曲、比赛、文艺演出等活动。海报中通常要写清楚活动的性质，活动的主办单位、时间、地点等内容。

海报的格式，通常有三部分组成，即标题、正文与落款。

ENGLISH SPEECH CONTEST

Hosted by the Student Union of the School of Foreign Language Studies, an English Speech Contest will be held in No. 4 Classroom of the Teaching Building at 7:30 p.m., September 26, 2006.

All are cordially welcomed.

The Student Union

September 14, 2006 常用句型

• Hosted / Sponsored by …, an English speech competition titled CCTV Cup will be held…

• There is going to be a friendly and wonderful basketball match between … and …

under the auspices of…. • All are cordially welcomed. • Your presence/ participation will be a great support to us.

7.备忘录(Memorandum or Memo)

备忘录主要用来提醒督促对方或就某一问题提出意见。是一种记录诸如情况汇报、问题处理、责任分工等内容以备忘的文体。

Memo Date: December 28, 2004 To: Mr. Gates, leader of the Supply Section From: Li Ming of the Business English Class Subject: Borrowing one VCD Dear Sir,

I’m a student of the Business English Class and we are badly in need of a VCD in order to have a New Year’s party. Our party will start on Friday, so please lend a VCD to us so that we can prepare better for the party.

With kind regards

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming 8.证明信(Letter of Certification)

证明信是用来证明一个人的身份、学历、婚姻状况、身体情况等或某一件事情的真实情况，使有关人士或部门阅后相信某人某事，从而给予方便办理的证明。

写证明信要求言简意赅、明确肯定，称呼多用”To Whom It May Concern”，意即“有关负责人”。

To Whom It May Concern, This is to certificate that Mr. Wang Ling is invited to go on a four-week tour to USA. He has been given $500 in advance for the initial expense after his arrival in USA. He needs to exchange these $500 into traveler’s checks. Any help offered to him in this regard will be much appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ning 常用句型

• To whom it may concern: 致有关人士 • This is to certify that…兹证明……

• Any help offered to him in this regard will be much appreciated. • This certificate is awarded to… First Prize at the … • Somebody’s working experiences are as followed.

三、商务书信

1.建立商业关系(Establishing Business Relations)

一家公司要开展业务必须与其他公司或客户进行联系,联系的方式多种多样,书信是比较正式又常见的形式。这种建立业务关系的信件至少包括三方面的内容:

(1)信息来源,即说明得知对方商号、地址等信息的途径及写信意图。

(2) 介绍本公司的经营范围及资讯。

(3) 表示建立业务关系的愿望。

(卖方写信)

October 10, 2006 Dear Sir or Madam,

We are given your name and address by the Chamber of Commerce(商会), China, who informed us that you are in the market for Personal Computers.

We are one of the largest computer producers in our country and have handled with

8 various kinds of the products for over 15 years. Now we’d like to get in touch with you in the hope of establishing business relations with you and expect to increase our business scope.

To acquaint you with our business lines, we are enclosing a copy of our illustrated catalogue covering the main items available at present. If you are interested in any of the items, please let us know by fax. We will give you our lowest quotations and try our best to comply with your requirement.

We are sincerely looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Mark Hamilton

( 买方写信)

November 12, 2006 Dear Sir of Madam,

Having obtained your name and address from Anderson Co., we are writing to you in the hope of establishing business relations with you.

We have imported Arts & Crafts for many years. At present, we are interested in various kinds of Chinese Arts and Crafts and should appreciate your catalogue and quotations.

If your prices are in line , we trust that important business can materialize.

We are looking forward to receiving your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Mark Hamilton 常用词汇和短语

• be in the market for sth. 准备买某物

• to increase one’s business scope

扩大业务范围 • We are enclosing( enclose)…

现随函附上……

• fall ( come ) within the scope of our business activities

属于我们的经营范围 • a general idea

概况

full details

详情

• specific inquiry

具体询价

favorable reply

满意的答复 • obtain one’s name and address from…

从某处获悉……的姓名和地址

• appreciate your catalogue and quotation

感谢你们的目录和报价 。 (在商业信函中表示感谢, appreciate用得较普遍, thank you用得较少,只有在收到东西后才用thank you) • in line (with)

符合……, 与……相符 常用句型

• You are recommended to our company by… • We have obtained your name and address from…

• We are experiences manufacturers and exporters of…, and are enjoying a good reputation all over the world. • We are willing to establish trade relations with your company. • We are writing to you in the hope of establishing business relations with you. → • Being specialized in manufacture and export of this line, we express our desire to trade with you.

9 • • • • • We are enclosing our latest illustrated catalogue together with the price list . We expect that you will let us have your specific inquiry as soon as possible. Your early response will be very much appreciated. We look forward to hearing from you soon. We sincerely hope that this, our first transaction together, will be the beginning of the long and pleasant business cooperation. 2.询价(Inquiry)

询价是买方向卖方询问某种商品的价格。写询价信时,至少要包括以下三个方面的内容:

(1)介绍写信的起因。 (2) 明确说明所需商品的名称,以及希望对方提供信息的具体内容,如可向对方索要产品价格单、目录、样品、规格、品质、包装、交货期、支付方 式等方面。 (3)表示要与对方进一步密切业务联系或表明达成交易的确良好愿望。

October 20,2006 Dear Sirs,

We have learned from your national trade journal that you manufacture a range of high fashion handbags. We operate a quality retail business and although our sales volume is not large, we obtain high prices for our high quality goods.

Would you please send us a catalogue and price list, and tell us your terms of business and delivery date?

We look forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Mark Hamilton

November 29, 2006 Dear Mr. Peter Kevil,

I am pleased to write to you for some information about the jet printer produced in your company.

I’d like to buy it, and I will be very grateful if you could give me information about the prices and the service after sale.

Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely yours,

David Johnson 常用句型

• We are in the market for… • We are interested in your…

• We learn from your advertisement in… that your are manufacturers/ exporters… • I am pleased to write to you for some information about…

• We shall be glad if you will send us your catalogue together with quotations. • We would appreciate your letting us have full information regarding export prices, terms of payment, earliest delivery date and quantity discount. • We look forward to your prompt and favorable reply. • We hope to hear you at your earliest convenience. 3.报盘(Offer)

盘也称发盘或报价，法律上称之为要约通常是卖方应买方询价的要求发出。完整的报盘应包括商品名称、品质、规格、数量、单价、交货期、付款方式等主要交易条件。

10 写这类信件时，注意要包括以下三方面内容：

1.首先应有礼貌地感谢对方的询价。

2.然后应该按对方要求介绍自己商品品质、 规格、价格等主要交易条件。

3.最后应表达写信人希望对方早日答复并达 成交易的愿望。

April 18, 2006 Dear Sirs,

Thank you for your inquiry of 12 April. We now have pleasure in enclosing full particulars of the electronic components that we manufacture for export and a copy of our price list.

In view of high quality of our products, we believe that you will agree that the prices, which are all inclusive of CFR to London, are very competitive. Payment should be made by bill of exchange payable within 60 days after sight. We will also be pleased to allow you a cash discount of 5% if you are willing to complete payment within 30 days of invoice date. All orders will be sent to you within three days upon receipt of your firm order.

We look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Mark Hamilton

Sales Manager 4.订购( Order) 一般来说，订购信函至少应包括以下内容：

1.商品名称、型号、规格、颜色以及其他相关信息 2.数量 3.装运日期及方法 4.

商品单价 5.包装 6.

付款方式

June 15, 2005 Dear Mr. Holland,

How about your recent work and life? I’m Li Hua, the manager of the marketing department in Daniel Trade Company. I wish we would have a good cooperation between us. I am writing to you to push a quick payment of $10,000 for the products which our company sold to you. The payment is 10 days behind the schedule and it is overdue. Please find the enclosed catalogue of our summer products. I hope Mr. Holland will send new order as soon as possible, and you can enjoy the special offers from our company if you make early orders

We’re looking forward to your prompt reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua 常用句型

• We thank you for your letter of …(date), sending us…

• We are pleased to enclose our purchase order No…. for …

• If you can guarantee punctual delivery, we can place considerable orders with you. • If the quality and delivery proves to be satisfactory, we will give you larger order in the future. • We shall book a trial order with you, provided you will give us a 5% commission. • We find the quality is good and your business terms are satisfactory. • We are sorry to have to tell you that we cannot supply the goods you ordered

11 on…because… • • • • We regret we are unable to supply what you require just now. We shall be much obliged if you will effect shipment as soon as possible. Thank you for your letter of June 9 enclosing your order No. 437. We assure you that we will give our best attention to the execution of this order. 12

第二篇：A级作文选材与构思

一、表现我的精神成长

中考作文命题依据初中生的心理特点，把反映自身的精神成长，表现“我”在思想认识、文化学习、课余生活、人际交往以及各类活动中的自我发展作为选材的重点范围。

1.思想上的磨练和成熟

青少年的成长首先反映在对世界、对人生的思想认识的提高和发展。情感、态度、价值观的发展和成熟是青少年成长的主旋律，也是成长最为重要的标志。

我也衔过一枚青橄榄 吃一堑，长一智 我学会了宽容

2.学习中的挫折和成功

上课、读书、写作、实验、考试、竞赛等学习生活中的忧虑和欢乐、失败和成功、过程和结果，是作文应当反映的生动内容。

好书伴我成长 感悟失败 我成功啦

3.业余生活中的活动、爱好

绘画、书法、养花、集邮、唱歌、舞蹈、足球、上网等，都是青少年所特别钟爱的。在表现这类生活时，不能忘记写出自己的真切体验和心灵感受。

我的另一片天地 兴趣伴我成长 我在探究活动中

4.亲近自然中的经历和感爱

在与大自然的接触中，我们要注重感悟，学会思考，从中领悟做人的道理，生活的真谛。

1 5.社会交往中的经历和感触

一个人在成长过程中，要不断地与他人交往，与社会交往，在交往中熟悉社会、了解社会，并不断地学习优秀的思想文化，逐步成为一个融入社会的成熟的人。

美在我身边 一道美丽的风景线

二、反映身边的人和事

我们的视野不能仅仅关注自身，还要关爱家庭、关心集体、关注社会、关注身边的人和事，在与身边的人和事的接触中，去认识、理解、发现，去表现、反映、赞美。

1.家庭中的故事和教益

家庭是孩子成长的温床，父母是孩子最早的教师。在家庭中，我们享受着父母的呵护和照顾，承受着父母的鞭策和希冀，这些天天发生的事情，正是演绎亲情的最动人的乐章。

有家真好 感受亲情 爸爸帮我阊难关 2.同学间的友谊和真情

友情，是生活中的一盏明灯。记叙同学间的交往、友情，反映同学的精神风貌，是作文中的一大内容。

我的竞争对手 难忘的友谊 同桌

3.师生间的交往和深情

2 老师播种着春天的希望，播种着秋天的收获。在老师播种的辛劳中，流淌着的是爱的奉献;在我们从幼稚走向成熟，从愚昧走向文明的路上，老师用生命的火炬，为我们开道。

润物细无声 心中的歌献给您 良师

4.社会上的好人好事

他们是那么平凡，就像你的家人、同学;他们又是那么高尚，以一种催人泪下的力量让你感动，让你久久地铭记。赞美、歌颂社会上的好人好事，是中考作文中的又一个重要内容。

第二讲 选择最优写作材料

• 选材恰当，有新意;对生活的认识正确，且有自己的见解;感情真挚，想象力丰富。

--------中考作文评分方案

• 考场作文的特点是充分展示自己多年的蕴蓄和积淀，展示自己优秀的思想和才华。

1.材料的思想性

• 材料有比较深刻的教育意义还是无教育意义? • 在平平淡淡中参悟普遍哲理 • 从普普通通中透视社会风云 • 积极思维，对生活进行提炼 • 广泛联想，让思想获得升华

2.材料的真实性

3 • 材料来源于真实的生活,具有真情实感，还是胡乱编造，情感虚假? • 记叙真实的事情，反映真实的生活。

• 写好真实的细节，写自己深切感受过的事情，抒发从心底里发出来的情感。

3.材料的独特性

• 材料具有独特的感悟、独特的经历还是似曾相识,与别人大同小异? • 写独特的体验,独特的感受 • 写具有个性的经历和思想

第三讲 开掘第二作文资源

第二作文资源，即书本、传媒等可以间接获取的作文材料的重要资料。这一资源的潜力非常深广。认真研究并开掘这一资源，对提高作文水平、提升思想素养具有重要意义。

一、让历史风云为作文壮阵

历史上发生的重大事件凝注着丰富的意蕴。审视并回顾这些历史，常常可以开掘出警策的震撼人心的深意来。

为他人喝彩 他真的很棒

二、让名人轶事为文章增光

文学家、艺术家、科学家等名人的事例。如果选用恰当，让名人成为文章的主角，一定会为文章增光添彩。

我成功啦 他有一颗美丽的心

三、让艺术作品中的人物走进作文

小说、散文、戏剧、童话、民间故事等艺术作品中的人物走进我们的作文，那一定是一种令人迷醉的景象。

忘不了他

四、让政治文化进入作文视野

政治、文化，似乎是一种严肃而沉重的话题。但正因为它的严肃而沉重，常常使作文增加了政治的重量和文化的深沉，因而使文章具有了沉甸甸的价值。

珍贵的礼物

五、让传媒信息为作文添彩

人们可以通过现代媒体获取无比广泛的信息。传媒信息是一个十分重要的资源库，里面有无比丰富的作文素材。我们完全可以以网络、电视、书报等方面获取重要的珍贵材料，让它们为我们的文章增添光彩。

我的视线 为他人喝彩

第三篇：大英历次A级作文训练参考文章

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1. 感谢信：

假设你是篮球队队长何翼，请写一封感谢信给李教练。

1)感谢李教练为了学校篮球队的夏季集训(summer training)放弃了整个暑假的休息时间;

2)大家都因教练对这项运动的热情(enthusiasm) 受到感染(be greatly impressed by);

3)在这次的巡回比赛(tournament)中球队获得了优异的成绩应归功于(owe sth to…)教练;

4) 代表(on behalf of)球队表示衷心的感谢。

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m writing this letter of thanks on behalf of the whole basketball team. We’re very sincerely grateful to you for all your time spent during the summer vacation in coaching our school basketball team. Your enthusiasm on sports and your team spirit have greatly impressed us. The big progress and our recent victory at the Tournament owe much to your kind help. Without you we couldn’t go that far.

Thank you again from the bottom of our heart.

Sincerely yours,He Yi

2.推荐信：

假设你是公司销售部经理李林，你以前的员工陈英曾在你的部门作兼职秘书，她现在想应聘公司秘书一职。写一封推荐信给她。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Please allow me to recommend Chen Ying for a position of secretary in our company. Ms. Chen has ever worked in my department as a part-time secretary for a period of time. I have found her to be a hardworking, diligent, and responsible employee. Now she wishes to apply for the position of secretary and long to work in our company team.

I recommend her without hesitation, as I know you will find her a very capable staff.Sincerely yoursLi LinManager of Sales Department

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3.你从《北京日报》上得到消息某校要为留学生招聘汉语教师。写申请信应聘此职位。你三年前毕业于北京语言大学中文系，并有相关教学经验，曾为来自韩国和美国的留学生讲授中国文化。通过六级考试，英语能力不错。附寄中英文简历及电话(13788904327)。联系地址：广州市流花路56号。写信日期自拟。May 16, 2010

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have learned a piece of news from "Beijing Daily' that you want a teacher of the Chinese

language. I’m writing for the position in your college.

I graduated from the Chinese Language Department of Beijing Language and Culture University three years ago. I have experience of teaching Chinese, ever teaching the Chinese language and culture to the students from America and Korea. I’m also good at English abilities and I have passed Cet-6.

Encolsed is my resume both in Chinese and English. If you want any of my further information, please contact me at 13788904327. My address is No. 56, Liuhua Road, Guangzhou City.

Yours sincerely,

Chen Hai

4.请你为今年将毕业的刘可编写一份学历式简历。

性别：男;出生日期：1983年8月5日;回族;联系地址：山西大学管理学院电子商务专业毕业班(030010);应聘职位：市场部经理助理;

所修课程：市场管理学，公共关系学等。懂基本计算机操作，已过大学英语四级，擅长商务人际交往。2002年夏天曾在太原市丽新饭店市场部工作。

Resume

Name: Liu KeBirth date: Aug.5th, 1983Sex: MaleNationality: Hui

Health: Excellent

Address: Graduating Class, Hotel Management Specialty, College of management, Shanxi University, Shanxi030010

Objective

To obtain a position as an assistant of Marketing Manager

Courses Included

Marketing Management, Public Relationships, etc.

Working Experience

Worked at Marketing Department, Lixin Hotel, 2002

Proficiency

A mastery of computer basic skills

Cet, Band 4

Good at business communication

5. 说明：假设你是ABC计算机公司销售部经理，根据以下信息写一封电子邮件。 发件人：张明

电子邮件地址：zhangm@sina.com

收件人：Miss Jenny Arnot

收件人地址：arnot08@yahoo.com

写信时间：2010年6月20日

邮件内容：

1.你公司现在研发了一款新式计算机，该机有许多优点。

2.Jenny Arnot 的公司在她的地区长期为你公司推销产品。

3.你公司认为该新产品会受到用户欢迎，因此希望在地区推销该产品。

4.你现在把这一产品的规格寄给她。

5.如果她感兴趣，建议她到你公司来看样品并洽谈。

6.请她通知你何时可以来，你会派人去机场迎接。

7.表示感谢

Words for reference:

规格：specifications

样品：samples

June 20, 2010

Dear Miss Jenny Arnot,

Our company has recently researched a new type of computer. It has a lot of advantages, and we believe it will have a good sales among customers. Since your company has always been selling our products in your area, we hope you can promote our new computer in your area.

Encolsed is the specification of the product. If you are interested, please come to see our samples and have further discussion. Please tell me when you will come, I’ll send someone to pick you up at the airport.

Thanks again and look forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,Zhang Ming

6. 商务信函——课本P157综合练习的第一篇(新蒂服装公司)

June 22, 2008

Dear Sir or Madam:

Sorry to inform you that since the prices of raw materials have been increased recently, we have no choice but to adjuct the prices of our products a little higher. To express our sincerity , theprices for your old orders will be kept unchanged/be kept as the original. We sincerely hope we can develop smooth business relationship in future.

Enclosed is our new price list. We are very sorry for the trouble brought to you.

Sincerely yours,Ding ZhiwenSales Manager

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7&8： 课本P163的两篇作文

7.征稿启事

内容：1)本报的主要对象为我公司员工：出版日期为每个月的15日。

2)欢迎下列各种形式和体裁的稿件：

a.各部门情况的报道;

b.对我公司生产、销售、产品推广的意见和建议;

c.其他;

3)来稿请勿超过1000字;英文来稿要求打字。

4)来稿如不采用，三个月内退还作者。

5)联系人：林月

6)联系地址：公司公共关系部 Contribution Wanted

Our newspaper is published on 15th every month, mainly serves our company staff. Contributions of all forms are welcome. They can be about:

1. Reports on all departments.

2. Opinions and suggestions on productions, sales and products spreading.

3. Others.

The compositions should not be over 1000 words. Contributions in English are required to be typed. If not adopted, contributions will be returned to the authors in three months.

Here is our communication address:

Lin Yue, Public Relations Department.

8. 招聘启事

Job Wanted

Oriental (China) Investment Co. Ltd. is one of the major oil and gas companies in the world. The company is now seeking for one engineer.

Responsibilities:

1. Engineering design

2. Construction supervision

3. Training workers

Qualifications:

1. College diploma in chemical engineering

2. Three years’ related experience

3. Strong communication skills

4. RPETCO-Level A certificate

Those interested please contact Mr. John Smith at 88866669.

9. 以公司市场销售部的名义，写一份于2005年1月25日发布的通知，包括以下内容：

1)时间：1月30日上午九点整

2)会议地点：办公大楼第三会议室

3)会议内容：研究新产品的促销计划

4)出席人员：销售部全体人员

5)要求：每人准备一份计划书

Notice

A meeting to discuss the promotion for the new product is going to be held on January 30th. All members of Sales Department and the head of Marketing Department are required to attend.

Time: 9:00 sharp, January 30th

Place: the 3rd Conference room of office building.

Requirement: every one present must prepare a copy of proposal for the program.

The Sales Department

January 25, 2005

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10.课本P164: 第3题 海报

请你以体育文化协会(The Physical Culture Academy)的名义出一则海报，以Come and Cheer for Your Team! 开头：

1)活动内容：游泳比赛

2)参赛队伍：教工队对学生队

3)地点：学校体育馆游泳池

4)时间：5月6日(星期二)下午4点30分

5)门票：免费

6)承办：体育文化协会

Come and Cheer for Your Team!

Marvelous Swimming Competition

Teaching Staffs team VS. Students’ Team

Place: the swimming pool in Gymnasium of our school

Time: May 6th.(Tuesday)4:30 in the afternoon

The competition is under the auspices of The Physical Culture Academy.

Admission is for free! You won’t want to miss it!

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11.课本P167：备忘录

新城公司经理王明(Wang Ming)先生上午10时来拜访总经理。他希望与总经理讨论在本市设立一家食品厂的事宜。总经理正在开会，无法接见。王先生将于下周一离开。请总经理今天下午打电话给他。

Memo

Mr. Wang Ming, the manager of Xin Cheng Company, came to visit General Manager at 10 a.m. He wished to discuss with G.M. the possibility of opening a food factory in our city. G.M. was having a meeting and so couldn’t see him. Wang will leave next Monday. He asked G.M. to call him this afternoon.

12. 课本P170：证明请代表广州希望学院为2005级毕业生李铭开具一份证明。证明内容：李铭，男，2008年7月自本学院毕业，在校三年曾连获三次一等奖学金。证明人：学生处陈远光。证明时间：2008年9月11日。

Certificate

Sept. 11th, 2008

To whom it may concern,

It is my pleasure in certifying that Li Ming, male, graduated from Guangzhou Xiwang College in July, 2008, had won the first prize scholarships for three straight years during his study in the college from 2001.

Best regards.

Chen Guangyuan

Students’ Affair Dep. of

Guangzhou Xiwang College

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13. 致辞

课本P173：欢送辞

Dear Mr. Smith,

First of all, please allow me on behalf of our school, to express heartful thanks to you for your excellent work in English education here.

Next week, you’ll be returning to London, we feel quite sad at this moment. For two years you have been working hard in our school. What impressed us most is that you have been easygoing and kind, and have been strict but patient with students. Every student loved attending your interesting and vivid lectures, thus there has been a great improvement in their English study.

Many thanks to you!

We wish you a pleasant journey, and good health!

第四篇：06-07A级考试实考作文题

A级考试作文实考题集1

题一

请你以公关部(The Public Relation Department)名义，写一则去秋游的通知。

参加者：公司全体职工

活动内容：

1.10月28日，周六上午去登北高峰;

2.中午在湖边野餐;

3下午在西湖划船比赛。

集中时间和地点：早上7：30在公司大门前集合，7：50开车

注意事项：

1. 穿运动鞋;

2. 自带午餐和饮料，尽可能带上相机;

3. 准时集合。

题二

说明：根据下列段落所提供的信息写一封致谢信：

我现在已经回上海，感到应该写信对我在贵校访问期间所受到的热情款待表示衷心的感谢。我为自己有机会会见贵校的同行们深感愉快，对参观的一流教学设施极感兴趣。

杰克逊先生为我们作了详细介绍，请向他转达我的谢意。希望不久能在上海接待你们参观我们的新建校园。

题三

说明：请给客户写一封回函。应包括以下三个内容：

一、 谢谢贵方4月20日询问关于塑胶绝缘线(plastic-insulated wire)的来信。

二、 我们很高兴地告知贵方我们能够提供规格完全符合我们正在讨论的绝缘线的现货。

三、 我方向贵方保证：我方正期待收到贵公司的订单，此订单将会得到我方的立即关照。

题四

根据下面内容写一篇短文：

Intel公司的Intel Pentium 4 Processor如果正确使用和安装可保用三年，保修期内发生故障公司提供退换货或免费维修服务。意外事故，停电导致的故障，以及未按说明书，使用不正确的安装测试带来的问题等均不在保修范围之内。 欲获保修服务，可去生产商或直接与Intel公司联系。

题五

说明：根据下列段落所提供的信息写一段短文：

承蒙您购买本影碟投放机。本机适用于影碟标准之1.1和2.0版本。您可根据影碟类型欣赏两种播放标准。在使用本机之前请仔细阅读操作手册并妥善保管以备将来查用。为了防止火灾或避免触电，请勿将本机淋雨或受潮;请勿擅自打开机壳(cabinet),以免遭到电击。维修请胶专业人员处理。

以John Brown的名义写一封给ABC公司的推荐信。

内容：李小姐从1995至1999年在你公司担任秘书工作。她打字及速记能力极强。其他工作也很好，是一名优秀的秘书。工作勤奋，待人和善，深受同事的尊敬。她现在想从事责任更大，薪水更高的工作。

注意信函格式。

题二

假定你是Media Hotel的人事部经理李卫。你的秘书王芳打算到离她家较近的一家外贸公司应聘相应的职位。请你为她写一封推荐信。

信中介绍王芳的基本情况：前进职业技术学院商务英语专业毕业，擅长英语，能熟练操作计算机。待人诚恳，与人相处和睦，工作效率。有三年秘书的工作经验，和其他你认为应介绍的情况。

收信人：John Brown新秋外贸公司人事经理

题三

假定你是软件工程系二年级的学生肖明，现在给院长写一封信反映教学楼晚自习的情况。你的信包含以下内容：

1. 阶梯教室拥挤，吵闹;学生听音乐，玩电脑，打手机。。。

2. 小教室也不安静。。。

3. 熄灯太早。

4. 建议学院制定制度保证教学楼成为一个良好的学习场所。

Works for reference:

软件工程：software engineering

阶梯教室：lecture rooms

题四

说明：假定你是一家办公设备进出口公司的经理王刚，给某公司写一封信。

内容：1. 告诉对方你获得信息的渠道，从《城市商报》(Urban Commerce)上看到对方公司的介绍;

2.说明你去信的目的：询问对方是否有你需要的产品，是否有现货供应，等等。并想和对方建立贸易联系。

3.介绍你公司的情况：如，多年从事进出口贸易，在中国设有6家分公司，与国内许多大商场有联系。。。

4.希望尽快得到答复。

题五

说明：就下列内容写一封信给孙良先生：

感谢他12月20日来函询问有关全自动洗衣机的情况，答复如下：

型号：Model FH-150A 型

价格：每台$160

交货日期:收到订单60日内

付款日期:装运后30日内

若订购100台以上,可享受15%的数量折扣.

另附洗衣机使用说明.以求职人张华的身份给Dannel公司的人事部主任Johns先生写一封面试后续信.感谢Johns先生给予的面试的机会,并表示你对该公司的好感,最后表示自己能够胜任该公司的工作.。

Works for reference:

表达对…的感谢: express one’s appreciation for

对…印象深刻: be favorably impressed with

题二

以李明的名义给Mr. Foster写一封信。

内容:已经收到他寄来的礼物(一件精美的雕塑),非常喜欢这礼物,把它摆放在书架上正合适.得知他将来上海参加你的婚礼十分高兴.请他将航班告诉你,你将去机场接他。

注意：必须包括收信人的地址，写信日期，发信人的签名等基本格式。

Works for reference:

雕塑: sculpture

航班 flight number

题三

假定你是李伟先生。根据下列信息写一封投诉信。

内容：你通过ASD中介公司租了一套公寓，但一个月前屋内的暖气坏了，你打电话要求公司派人来修理，但至今没有人来修理。

Works for reference:

中介公司： agency

暖气： Heating system

题四

以John Brown的名义写一封给ABC公司的推荐信。

内容：李小姐从1995至1999年在你公司担任秘书工作。她打字及速记能力极强。其他工作也很好，是一名优秀的秘书。工作勤奋，待人和善，深受同事的尊敬。她现在想从事责任更大，薪水更高的工作。

注意信函格式。

Works for reference:

速记：shorthand

题五

以某公司总经理秘书李华的身份写一则公司内备忘录。

内容：通知公司员工在本周五前把个人的夏季休假计划提交到总经理办公室，以便公司统一安排。员工们每年可享受两周的带薪假期。今年一月份以后来公司工作的员工可以享受1周的带薪假期。如果有疑问可以直接向李华询问。 Works for reference:

员工：personnel

提交： hand in

对…享有权利：be entitled to…

带薪假期: paid leave

INTEROFFICEMEMORANDUM

ToDate: March 20th, 2006

题六

请按以下内容出一通知:

标题:您的未来就在您手中

演讲人:江海博士(GHB公司首席执行官)

演讲对象: 2004届毕业生

时间: 2004年6月20日

地点: 科学楼演讲厅638室

内容:你就要离开学校踏上征程了吗?你想拥有一个光辉美好的未来吗?江海博士(GHB公司首席执行官)将通过他本人数十年来国内外求学创业成功的经历向您讲述人生的真谛,指点未来成功之路.

Works for reference:

演讲人: lecturer

首席执行官: CEO

光辉的: splendid

真谛: true meaning

题七

假定你是李明先生，给北京奥组委写一份申请函，申请做一名奥运会的志愿者。

写信日期：2007年12月23日

申请函需要包括：

1. 个人信息(年龄、性别、特长、外语能力、社会活动经历等)

2. 担任志愿者的理由

3. 希望担当的志愿者工作(如导游、翻译或接待员等)

4. 联系方式

Words for reference：

志愿者 volunteer奥运会the Olympic Games

第五篇：A级食堂创建报告

提供星级服务创建A级食堂

——“南通市学校A级食堂”创建工作汇报

江苏省如皋第一中等专业学校

一、学校发展概况

江苏省如皋第一中等专业学校创建于1980年，是国家级重点职业高中、江苏省四星级中等职业学校、首批江苏省高水平示范性中等职业学校。学校新校区位于如皋港经济开发区，占地面积274亩，建筑面积12.3万㎡，总投资3亿元，现有全日制在籍生4500人，教职员工近400人，建有智能化图文信息中心、数字化教学中心、现代化实训中心、人文化学生公寓、标准化餐饮中心，正致力于建设全省一流的“江苏省高水平现代化职业学校”。

多年来，学校重力打造德育管理、专业建设、对口高考、校企合作等特色品牌。德育管理——实施校园文化建设，试点5S常规管理，开展七彩德育活动。技能大赛——在全国技能大赛中摘得4金、4银，在全省技能大赛中获得33金、53银、51铜。对口高考——2013年对口高考632人参考，本科上线388人，本科上线率达61.4%，再创历史新高。校企合作——携手如皋建工局、软件园、江苏海事局等单位，定向培养专业人才;联手华东液压、苏州信达、常州瑞声等企业，实施订单培养。学校先后获得30多项省级以上荣誉，形成了示范辐射效应与品牌特色效应。

二、A级食堂创建工作

学校食堂关系到学校的稳定发展，关系到学生的健康成长，关系到师生的切身利益。如果说教学是一部高速内燃机车，那么食堂就是加油站。近年来，学校坚持以保障师生食品安全为根本目标，以创建“南通市学校 1

A级食堂”为载体，不断强化创建工作的组织保障，加大创建资金的投入力度，健全创建工作的运行机制，创新食堂安全的监管办法，逐步建立食堂食品安全的长效机制，提高学校师生食堂的服务质量，提升食堂食品安全的整体水平，提高师生对食堂服务的满意率和认可度。

我校严格按照南通市卫生局、教育局、药监局对食品卫生安全工作的要求和部署，认真对照“南通市学校A级食堂”的条件与标准，对食堂的“建、配、管、用”等环节进行整改和提高。现将我校创建市级“A级食堂”工作情况向各位领导汇报如下：

(一)强化领导，明确责任，全力加强硬件建设

学校在市卫生局、教育局、药监局的关心、支持和领导下，根据《南通市学校A级食堂评分细则》的要求，紧锣密鼓的开展了一系列创建工作。

1.建立创建组织机构。学校成立了创建领导小组，校长为组长，总负责。后勤副校长为直接责任人，具体抓。学校总务处为责任部门，抓实施，构建起了分工明确、职责清晰的安全管理组织机构。

2.明确创建工作责任。民以食为天，食以卫为先，食品安全是创建工作的核心。为此，学校层层签订创建工作和食品安全目标责任书，形成了上下一致的工作网络，各司其职，分工合作，责任到人，全员参与，切实提高了工作质效，保证了创建工作的顺利开展。

3.加大基础设施投入。学校本着食堂基础设施投入“优于、先于、重于”其他设施投入的原则，按照创建要求，大力改善食堂设施设备。学校添臵各种合格的厨房设备，仓库主、副食分开，男女更衣分开，加工间、配餐间分开，消毒灯、灭蝇灯、风幕机、油烟机、蒸饭机、灶具、冰柜、不锈钢操作台等各类炊具一应俱全，二次更衣室脚踏式水龙头、紫外线灯，

下水道灭鼠、灭蚊蝇设施标准设臵，以确保师生饮食安全。经过改造，食堂硬件设施焕然一新，从环境卫生，到设施设备，为学校创建工作提供了必要的物质保证。

(二)加强管理，健全制度，大力提升服务质量

1.严把“制度关”。围绕创建工作，制定完善了《学校后勤管理制度》、《食堂卫生要求》、《食堂工作人员职责》、《后勤人员考核制度》、《餐具清洗消毒制度》、《食品中毒应急处理制度》、《食堂工作人员健康及个人卫生制度》等10多项制度，做到制度健全，程序严谨，管理规范，督查严格，责任落实。

2.严把“供货关”。与供货商签订合同，供货商必须持有效的经营执照、卫生许可证、健康证和身份证等。学校成立了大宗物品采购小组，加强市场考察，货比三家。各种大宗食品坚持“质量第一，价格第二”的原则，由资质齐全的单位或公司供货。并坚持索证制度，采购食品及原料索证齐全，食堂进货保证新鲜、安全，严禁“三无”食品入库。

3.严把“培训关”。强化员工学习培训，提升服务质量。“心系师生健康，烹制精致菜肴，提供温馨服务”是我校食堂工作的基本理念。学校每周召开一次食堂工作人员专题会议，认真学习《中华人民共和国食品安全法》等法律法规，集中讨论各项规章制度的落实，积极开展安全教育。同时，对全体员工进行技能强化培训，扭转了员工在操作过程中存在的不良习惯，进一步提升了服务质量，保证师生卫生、营养、健康。

(三)规范程序，引入监督，创优食堂经营模式

一是规范安全管理程序。制定五项要求和“四不”制度：

1.五项要求

第一、成品存放实行“四隔离”：生与熟隔离;成品与半成品隔离;食品与杂品隔离;食品与药品隔离。

第二、用具实行“四过关”：一洗、二刷、三冲、四消毒。

第三、卫生管理实施“五常法”：事物常分类，天天常整理，环境常清洁，工作常检查，人人常自律。

第四、个人卫生做到“四勤”：勤洗手、剪指甲;勤洗澡、理发;勤洗衣服;勤换工作服。

第五、环境卫生采取“四定”办法：定人、定物、定时间、定质量。

2.“四不”制度

采购人员不买腐烂变质原料;保管人员不收腐烂变质原料;加工人员不用腐烂变质原料;销售人员不卖腐烂变质食品。

二是引入师生监督机制。学校设立食堂信息反馈办公室，及时收集反馈意见;定期召开各班生活委员会议及教职工代表会议，听取各种意见和建议，不断调整和优化饮食结构。早餐不低于6个品种，中、晚餐不低于10个品种让师生挑选，并采取一菜多做的方法来适合师生的口味。

“没有最好，只有更好”。食堂工作只有起点，没有终点，我们将以 “南通市学校A级食堂”创建为契机，坚持以人为本，服务至上，在科学化、规范化、制度化管理上下真功夫，不断提高食堂内部管理和服务水平，为办人民满意教育作出应有的贡献。